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Teral
Helpy McHelphelp
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Cool. I read the first part yesterday, and it was very good. Solid work, Erdrik. BTW, does it come in an illustrated version? I wouldn't mind seeing that first scene in Leela's bedroom in strip form.
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Erdrik
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« Reply #43 on: 03-28-2002 11:53 »
« Last Edit on: 03-28-2002 11:53 »
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I was thinking about it... In fact I've already drawn some pics of her in that type of scene... But before I start it(if I do it) I am going to finish the Fic first. /EDIT Nnna! just hit page 13 in the fic. Ill have to split it up when I send it
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Erdrik
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Welp. I sent it. CGEF has it up already Its 110kb so enjoy!
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Tzlk
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Well im gonna go read it....after i go sleep for a few hours then ill let you know how it was.....
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Tzlk
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Well now that i am refreshed by that nap i read your Fic Erdrik and I likes it! It was a good mix of humor and romance. Good work man!
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Erdrik
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Thnx How well did the characters hold true to them selves? Oh! And I plan to have a part two in which Amy forces Leela to gossip about the relationship. Im going to set it up like a clip show, only show the different things Leela and Fry did together In secrecy Im thinking Ill call it 'The Juicy Details' hee hee
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Tzlk
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« Reply #51 on: 03-29-2002 16:45 »
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Snds great man...Yea I thought that you did a good job of making the charachters seem realistic.. Fry was an idiot for the most part and leela was her strong self. Yea you did good in that sense!
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Tzlk
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« Reply #54 on: 03-31-2002 04:47 »
« Last Edit on: 03-31-2002 04:47 »
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Bumblebee!!! have some confidnce you area good writer too! Or at least i enjoy reading yours too!!
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Allen
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« Reply #56 on: 03-31-2002 10:14 »
« Last Edit on: 03-31-2002 10:14 »
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Theta! Drop and give me 50...fanfics. You too Zombie. I've read your stuff, it doesn't suck, believe me. I want to hear no more self putdowns. Someone who was apparently smart once said "A man is his own worst critic." This is especially true of us writers. Most of us pour any free time we can spare into this. The dedicated pour their heart and soul into it. Zombie and Theta, you are among those who are dedicated to their craft. I also read somewhere that writers are very optimistic. How else would we be able to type words on that blank screen? As for feedback, people don't realize how important it is to a writer to hear words of praise or criticism. Mark Twain once said "I can live for six months on one compliment." I know he was right, I've felt it. Drop us a line after reading a story, don't just rate it. Ratings are nice and should be used, but it can't compare with a mailbox full of e-mails proclaiming how the story was appreciated. Don't be afraid to criticize. Tell how we could improve. So long as it's an e-mail of constructive criticism, and not a string of swear words, it will be appreciated. Whew, that was long! Well, Erdrik your story was great, I hope to see more from you. BTW, I forgot to mention a problem I have and wanted to explain. A few people have criticized that I don't keep the characters spot on in my fics. First, I don't think it's a crime to portray them differently. So long as they're not so off, you can't enjoy the story. The second thing is Fry is really the only character I sometimes let get out of character. I can't capture his stupidity all that well because I can't see it as well as others can. Well that's all I really wanted to say. Sorry, if I bored you all to death.
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Tzlk
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Yea come on Astro and Bumblebee!! You are both quailty writers and your fics rule!!! jeez!! To be good at anything you need confidance! But just dont get cocky! And Erdrik that fic was really good as well. Being compared to Zombie and Bumblebee is an honor!!
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Tzlk
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True! good work ALL fic writers!! Keep it up! Your writings are fun to read! Never give up!
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Teral
Helpy McHelphelp
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Well, I just finished reading your story, Erdrik. Wow, that was cool. Great story, and all the characters was "in character" (why did the sentence just sound akward?). Story flowed, cute moments, funny things, who could ask for more? The final twist with Bender was great, easily my favourite part (Okay, so I'm not that big a shipper ), spot on Bender. Two tumbs up.
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Erdrik
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Really? thats good too know ... While writing the Bender part I was thinking it was a little too... mmm.. 'serious evil', instead of Benders normal 'funny evil'...
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Erdrik
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DAMMIT! I wrote out a long slew of stuff only to click submit and the next page say 'you enter wrong password' I click the back button and its all GONE! Eh, oh well off I go again, say hello to the deep end! Anyways: My Idea for 'The Juicy Details': Amy gets Leela to spill about the details to Her relationship with Fry. Flashbacks from Valentines day to present (Which is Now after 'Where the Buggalo Roam') Amy brings up Leela's past "conquests" and wonders why she never got back at Zapp. (I haven't seen most of the 2nd and 3rd production season, so If I get a few continuity errors TELL ME!!!) Amy gets the idea to invite the crew to a ceremony her parents are holding in DOOP's honor(For Zapp "saving the Buggalo" ), so Leela can show off her new relationship. The Wongs agree saying that they did help, and that: "You get honorable mention, instead of big fancy doorprize!"
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Allen
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Hey Zombie, better to have a dead dad than a deadbeat one. I speak from experience. Don't fool around. Theta: Don't be in a hurry to grow up. Enjoy being a teenager
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Erdrik
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strange I don't remember this being part of my fan-fic... hmmmm... /me wanders off in a confused and senile manner.
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Tzlk
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Hey! they need time to produce some quality stuff! I would rather wait and read their BEST work than have them rush and be disapointed.
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Tzlk
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Venus! now know know whats up with that lap dance *muttering* instant gratification
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