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Sarge

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« Reply #40 on: 03-28-2002 01:39 »

It's nice to see BBTheta here, even if only for a brief moment.  wink
Erdrik

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« Reply #41 on: 03-28-2002 09:38 »

I did a bit more last night. I think Im about 1/2 way done.  wink
Teral

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« Reply #42 on: 03-28-2002 11:08 »

Cool. I read the first part yesterday, and it was very good. Solid work, Erdrik.

BTW, does it come in an illustrated version? I wouldn't mind seeing that first scene in Leela's bedroom in strip form.  wink
Erdrik

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« Reply #43 on: 03-28-2002 11:53 »
« Last Edit on: 03-28-2002 11:53 »

I was thinking about it...
In fact I've already drawn some pics of her in that type of scene...   flirt

But before I start it(if I do it) I am going to finish the Fic first.

/EDIT
Nnna! just hit page 13 in the fic. Ill have to split it up when I send it  tongue

Call me Erdrik

Boycott Fox!! Down with the Evil OverLords!!
Erdrik

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« Reply #44 on: 03-28-2002 16:19 »

 
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Originally posted by Kryten:
The twin thing was a typo. She's a younger sister.

No offence but I don't like this idea  tongue
Leela was a once in a life time chance. It was pure luck that she was born with no major mutations(I still hold that she may be an alien mutant) If her parents had any other children, chances are they were too mutated to go above ground.
And her having an un-mutated sister would farther lessen her... unique-ness... or something.   roll eyes
  hmpf

Call me Erdrik

Boycott Fox!! Down with the Evil OverLords!!
BumbleBeeTheta

Starship Captain
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« Reply #45 on: 03-29-2002 00:22 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by Sarge:
It's nice to see BBTheta here, even if only for a brief moment.
What?  Someone's glad to see me?  Why?  I'm not dead, am I?  Oh gawd.  What if I am?!  Am I doomed to spend eternity in hell?  Kryten, bring in Bambi!  wink

Who is Agent Codename: Dragonfly?
Erdrik

Professor
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« Reply #46 on: 03-29-2002 08:19 »

Welp. I sent it. CGEF has it up already  wink
Its 110kb so enjoy!
Tzlk
Professor
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« Reply #47 on: 03-29-2002 13:57 »

Well im gonna go read it....after i go sleep for a few hours then ill let you know how it was.....
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #48 on: 03-29-2002 14:20 »

tis good! Me like!
Tzlk
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« Reply #49 on: 03-29-2002 15:24 »

Well now that i am refreshed by that nap i read your Fic Erdrik and I likes it! It was a good mix of humor and romance.  Good work man!
Erdrik

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« Reply #50 on: 03-29-2002 16:31 »

Thnx  smile
How well did the characters hold true to them selves?
Oh! And I plan to have a part two in which Amy forces Leela to gossip about the relationship.
Im going to set it up like a clip show, only show the different things Leela and Fry did together In secrecy  flirt
Im thinking Ill call it 'The Juicy Details' hee hee  laff

Call me Erdrik

Boycott Fox!! Down with the Evil OverLords!!
Tzlk
Professor
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« Reply #51 on: 03-29-2002 16:45 »
« Last Edit on: 03-29-2002 16:45 »

Snds great man...Yea I thought that you did a good job of making the charachters seem realistic.. Fry was an idiot for the most part and leela was her strong self.  Yea you did good in that sense!
Kryten

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« Reply #52 on: 03-30-2002 23:49 »

 
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Originally posted by Erdrik:
 No offence but I don't like this idea   tongue
Leela was a once in a life time chance. It was pure luck that she was born with no major mutations(I still hold that she may be an alien mutant) If her parents had any other children, chances are they were too mutated to go above ground.
And her having an un-mutated sister would farther lessen her... unique-ness... or something.    roll eyes
   hmpf


Who said she was un-mutated? Let's just say she's a cat-burglar... literally.
BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #53 on: 03-31-2002 03:14 »

OMG!  Erdrik, that was sooooooooo good!  I loveded it!  love   Man, if I had 2% of the talent you invested in this fic, I'd have it made.  I can always dream though...  smile
Anyway, the characters were played very nicely and the plot flowed well.  I particularly enjoyed the scene where Leela goes to "check the supplies" and meets Fry by the closet.  Reminds me of myself...   eek Did I just say that?!  Oops! 
All in all, it was a great fic.  I look forward to reading more from you.  Make sure to put out a sequel soon!  Please!  wink

Who is Agent Codename: Dragonfly?
Tzlk
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« Reply #54 on: 03-31-2002 04:47 »
« Last Edit on: 03-31-2002 04:47 »

Bumblebee!!! have some confidnce you area good writer too!  Or at least i enjoy reading yours too!!
AstroZombie

Bending Unit
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« Reply #55 on: 03-31-2002 09:04 »

Jeeeeeze! Bumble Bee, yours are fantastic! It's my stuff that sucks.

Allen

Professor
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« Reply #56 on: 03-31-2002 10:14 »
« Last Edit on: 03-31-2002 10:14 »

Theta! Drop and give me 50...fanfics.   smile You too Zombie. I've read your stuff, it doesn't suck, believe me. I want to hear no more self putdowns. Someone who was apparently smart once said "A man is his own worst critic." This is especially true of us writers. Most of us pour any free time we can spare into this. The dedicated pour their heart and soul into it.

Zombie and Theta, you are among those who are dedicated to their craft. I also read somewhere that writers are very optimistic. How else would we be able to type words on that blank screen?

As for feedback, people don't realize how important it is to a writer to hear words of praise or criticism. Mark Twain once said "I can live for six months on one compliment." I know he was right, I've felt it. Drop us a line after reading a story, don't just rate it. Ratings are nice and should be used, but it can't compare with a mailbox full of e-mails proclaiming how the story was appreciated. Don't be afraid to criticize. Tell how we could improve. So long as it's an e-mail of constructive criticism, and not a string of swear words, it will be appreciated.

Whew, that was long! Well, Erdrik your story was great, I hope to see more from you.

BTW, I forgot to mention a problem I have and wanted to explain. A few people have criticized that I don't keep the characters spot on in my fics. First, I don't think it's a crime to portray them differently. So long as they're not so off, you can't enjoy the story.

The second thing is Fry is really the only character I sometimes let get out of  character. I can't capture his stupidity all that well because I can't see it as well as others can. Well that's all I really wanted to say. Sorry, if I bored you all to death. wink
Erdrik

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« Reply #57 on: 03-31-2002 15:39 »

It was hard for me to capture Fry's stupidity as well. Luckily I have the season1 DVD's, and 4 Downloaded episodes to inspire me lol  laff

The fic Idea 'The Juicy Details', above is going to be the next one...  flirt


Tzlk
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« Reply #58 on: 03-31-2002 16:32 »

Yea come on Astro and Bumblebee!! You are both quailty writers and your fics rule!!! jeez!! To be good at anything you need confidance!  But just dont get cocky!  And Erdrik that fic was really good as well.  Being compared to Zombie and Bumblebee is an honor!!
BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #59 on: 04-01-2002 01:13 »

An honor, eh?  Well, if it is Erdrik, Zombie, Allen, Kryten and any one who's ever written a fic deserves to be honored.  Hooray for the authors!  smile   If you find this post to be self-absorbed, feel free to call me a bitch.  I don't mind.  wink

Who is Agent Codename: Dragonfly?
Tzlk
Professor
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« Reply #60 on: 04-01-2002 03:16 »

True! good work ALL fic writers!! Keep it up! Your writings are fun to read! Never give up!
AstroZombie

Bending Unit
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« Reply #61 on: 04-01-2002 14:22 »

<suave>Maybe some of us like bitches!  wink </suave>
Teral

Helpy McHelphelp
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« Reply #62 on: 04-01-2002 15:27 »

Well, I just finished reading your story, Erdrik.

Wow, that was cool. Great story, and all the characters was "in character" (why did the sentence just sound akward?). Story flowed, cute moments, funny things, who could ask for more? The final twist with Bender was great, easily my favourite part (Okay, so I'm not that big a shipper  tongue), spot on Bender.

Two tumbs up.
Erdrik

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« Reply #63 on: 04-01-2002 15:37 »

Really? thats good too know ...
While writing the Bender part I was thinking it was a little too... mmm.. 'serious evil', instead of Benders normal 'funny evil'...  hmpf

Call me Erdrik

Boycott Fox!! Down with the Evil OverLords!!
Teral

Helpy McHelphelp
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« Reply #64 on: 04-01-2002 15:52 »
« Last Edit on: 04-01-2002 15:52 »

No, I think it was "funny evil", noone really was in any danger, and Bender went for the money like he should.

The black eye-thingy that was closer to "serious evil", but it was important for the story, so...
Erdrik

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« Reply #65 on: 04-01-2002 16:26 »

Ah yeah! Inhabitions removed, Confidence rising...
Nah, Its gone...  hmpf lol  tongue
Check this out, tho:
 http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/showpage.cgi?Forum=4&Thread=000223
Hopefully I can get my scanner working again soon. Or I'll have to buy a new one  tongue

Call me Erdrik

Boycott Fox!! Down with the Evil OverLords!!
BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #66 on: 04-01-2002 17:40 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by Astro-Zombie:
<suave>Maybe some of us like bitches!  </suave>
Are you coming on to me?  laff

Who is Agent Codename: Dragonfly?
Erdrik

Professor
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« Reply #67 on: 04-02-2002 10:57 »

  mad   cry DAMMIT!   cry I wrote out a long slew of stuff only to click submit and the next page say 'you enter wrong password' I click the back button and its all GONE!   mad   cry

Eh, oh well off I go again,
say hello to the deep end!

Anyways: My Idea for 'The Juicy Details':
Amy gets Leela to spill about the details to Her relationship with Fry. Flashbacks from Valentines day to present (Which is Now after 'Where the Buggalo Roam')
Amy brings up Leela's past "conquests" and wonders why she never got back at Zapp.
(I haven't seen most of the 2nd and 3rd production season, so If I get a few continuity errors TELL ME!!!)
Amy gets the idea to invite the crew to a ceremony her parents are holding in DOOP's honor(For Zapp "saving the Buggalo"  roll eyes ), so Leela can show off her new relationship.
The Wongs agree saying that they did help, and that:
"You get honorable mention, instead of big fancy doorprize!"


Call me Erdrik

Boycott Fox!! Down with the Evil OverLords!!
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #68 on: 04-02-2002 14:45 »

"You get honorable mention, instead of big fancy doorprize!"

It so sounds like something they would say.
AstroZombie

Bending Unit
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« Reply #69 on: 04-02-2002 16:03 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by BumbleBeeTheta:
 
Are you coming on to me?   laff


Perhaps  tongue ,

Nah, my wife would kill me,   eek and then my unborn child would be fatherless   cry
BumbleBeeTheta

Starship Captain
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« Reply #70 on: 04-02-2002 17:05 »

Aw...dat's scho schweet!  I can't wait til I grow up and get married and have kids!  love   I am such a romantic. 

Who is Agent Codename: Dragonfly?
Allen

Professor
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« Reply #71 on: 04-02-2002 22:46 »

Hey Zombie, better to have a dead dad than a deadbeat one. I speak from experience. Don't fool around. Theta: Don't be in a hurry to grow up. Enjoy being a teenager
AstroZombie

Bending Unit
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« Reply #72 on: 04-04-2002 15:05 »

Allan, I wouldn't fool around, I know how I'd feel if it happened to me (Once the murderous rage had subsided)

I'm just fooling around at fooling around, besides I dont need to look elsewhere for, erm, eh 'favours'  wink
Erdrik

Professor
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« Reply #73 on: 04-04-2002 15:45 »

strange I don't remember this being part of my fan-fic... hmmmm...
/me wanders off in a confused and senile manner.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #74 on: 04-04-2002 17:55 »

anytime anyone wants to post a new fanfic would be ok with me...i've read pretty much every one in existance and now i am bored. Hurry up people get with it already!
Tzlk
Professor
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« Reply #75 on: 04-04-2002 18:41 »

Hey! they need time to produce some quality stuff! I would rather wait and read their BEST work than have them rush and be disapointed.

Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #76 on: 04-04-2002 18:47 »

wait? ewww! im all about instant gratification. I'm willing to wait for a while, but they had better not be spending all day in front of the tv watching oprah rather then writing though!
totalnerd undercanada

DOOP Ubersecretary
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« Reply #77 on: 04-04-2002 18:51 »

Instant gratification? Have you been spending time with wanker?
Tzlk
Professor
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« Reply #78 on: 04-04-2002 18:52 »

Venus! now know know whats up with that lap dance  wink  *muttering* instant gratification
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #79 on: 04-04-2002 18:54 »

 :: dripping innocence ::
Venus is a good girl
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