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]PaulFSAC[

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« Reply #160 on: 04-10-2002 12:01 »

 
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Originally posted by Erdrik:
Actualy I post them here becuase of 2 reasons:
1) They give me feedback, and ideas
2) Motivates me to write becuase I said I would. And if I don't Ill get reamed a new one.    eek This is important becuase I can be a very lazy person at times   tongue


Guess that means I've an overactive imaginations, and prefer praise / critcism after all is done and gone.  Each to his own I guess.

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Thanks To Daniela for the new block.
FSAC is not just about my art, it's for the fans, any art or fictions will be gratefully received.  I'm not going to go on forever, so if I stop, then without support the site would stop, wish will be a great shame, since it seems to have some popularity

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« Reply #161 on: 04-10-2002 15:01 »

Aincha gonna do a TOTPD?  big grin

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]PaulFSAC[

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« Reply #162 on: 04-10-2002 16:23 »
« Last Edit on: 04-10-2002 16:23 »

 
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Originally posted by BumbleBeeTheta:
Aincha gonna do a TOTPD?    big grin


Too tired to party.  You do it on my behalf.

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Thanks To Daniela for the new block.
FSAC is not just about my art, it's for the fans, any art or fictions will be gratefully received.  I'm not going to go on forever, so if I stop, then without support the site would stop, wish will be a great shame, since it seems to have some popularity

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BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #163 on: 04-10-2002 20:01 »

Yay!
:Theta does a TOTPD ala the "light-weight jean commercial":  big grin

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Tzlk
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« Reply #164 on: 04-10-2002 20:34 »

 flirt
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« Reply #165 on: 04-10-2002 22:08 »

LOL  laff

Question about IDoL:
Lizzie cameo: Yay or nay?

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Tzlk
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« Reply #166 on: 04-10-2002 22:13 »

sure why not?  it could be funny.... but if its not natural dont force it  smile
BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #167 on: 04-10-2002 22:35 »

K.  I thought it might be interesting, her crashing the big b-day and all...
Erdrik

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« Reply #168 on: 04-11-2002 22:39 »

k, I thought I'd draw up a pic of the Tall Dark Leathery creature that's gonna beat up on Zapp, and save the.. !oop too much info!
so here it is:


ooo scary!  evil laugh

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« Reply #169 on: 04-11-2002 23:37 »

Smeesh, Erdrik.  Looks like a cross between El Chubanebre and one of the monsters from the Buffy X-box game.  Cool though.  smile

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nasteve

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« Reply #170 on: 04-12-2002 14:21 »

Beat him up? looks like it won't be able to do much but slice the poor guy to death  smile

I love your drawings btw Erdrik
BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #171 on: 04-12-2002 19:17 »

As this thread's basically for those who want to talk about their fanfics, I figured I might as well post a segment from IDoL: Part Three.

 
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Fry:  What do you say we go window-shopping?

Leela:  But then I’ll be tempted to buy something.

Fry:  So?  It’s a special day.

Leela:  Not anymore.

Fry: (suave) It could be…

Leela:  Don’t ask again.

Fry:  But it’s fun watching you squirm.

Leela:  Not as fun as watching you squirm.  I think I will take you up on that shopping trip.  And I think the first place I’ll go is…

Cut to outside a store.

(The camera zooms in on Fry’s face)

Fry: (disbelieving) Fredrick’s of New New York?

(Camera zooms out to reveal a bright pink store filled to the brim with lacy lingerie.)

Fry:  You can’t be serious.

Leela:  I am.  And I’m going to try on everything in here in front of you.

Fry:  Can’t I just go to the food court for the next five hours?

Leela:  Nope.  I need you to tell me what looks best.

Fry:  This is torture!  You’re just gonna trot out in front of me wearing almost nothing and I’ll never be able to lay a hand on you again!

Leela:  Well…you might be able to some time.

Fry:  Really?

Leela:  Yes, but at the moment, I see a bright red corset with my name on it.

(She drags him in.)
So whaddya think, Sirs?  big grin   tongue

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Venus

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« Reply #172 on: 04-12-2002 20:47 »

lol fun for the whole family!
Tzlk
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« Reply #173 on: 04-12-2002 20:48 »

HELL YEA BUMBLE BEE!! Keep up the good work  big grin im looking forward to its "release"!
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« Reply #174 on: 04-12-2002 22:16 »

Really?  You like it?  Hooray!  I'm popular!  big grin

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Erdrik

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« Reply #175 on: 04-13-2002 12:05 »

 
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Originally posted by BumbleBeeTheta:
Smeesh, Erdrik.  Looks like a cross between El Chubanebre and one of the monsters from the Buffy X-box game.  Cool though.   smile


yeah thats a sketch for the Novel, I'm gonna
stylize it to look more futurama-ish.
  laff

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BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #176 on: 04-19-2002 23:21 »

Lookie here!  I wrote more on IDoL!  big grin
 
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Scene:  Back at the apartment.

(Leela and Fry come in the door.  Leela’s carrying two huge bags from Frederick’s of New New York.  Fry’s got a plastic bag filled to the brim with Chinese food from Ming Na’s House of Chow and High-Budget Animated Films.)

Leela: (teasing) I think I’ll go put these incredibly revealing pieces of lingerie away in my bedroom.

Fry: Great.  Why don’t you put one on while you’re at it?

Leela:  I think I will.

(She winks, rather blinks, at him before walking into her room.  Fry goes into the kitchen and begins setting out the Chinese food.  A moment later Leela strolls in, wearing a magenta corset.)

Fry:  What a nice outfit.

Leela:  Thanks.  I thought you’d like it.

Fry:  Chow mein?

Leela:  Sure.

(He passes the box to her and intentionally spills it all over her.)

Fry:  Oops.  How clumsy of me.  Now let’s get you out of those filthy clothes.

Leela:  Uh, I think I can handle it.

(She goes into her room and emerges a while later in her normal attire.)

Fry:  Want some Brain slug-fried rice?

Leela:  In a minute.  I think I’ll have a fortune cookie first.

(She grabs a cookie out of a small paper bag and breaks it in half.  She pulls the fortune out and reads it to herself.)

Leela: (quietly) You will be asked a life-altering question.

Fry:  So, did you get a good one?

Leela:  Oh, you know, just the same old stuff you always get.

Fry:  Yeah.  Same here.

(He shows her his fortune, which reads, “Ed McMann says you may already be a winner.”)

Fry:  Lemme see what the last one says.

(He picks it out and tries to crack it, but struggles with it.)

Leela:  Here. (Places it in front of her and does a karate chop) Hi-ya! (grabs it) Here you go.

Fry:  Thanks. (Reading) You reunite with a long-lost relative…Hm.  Maybe it means the Professor.  It must be months since we last saw him.

Leela:  We were just at work Thursday.

Fry:  Man, time does fly.

Now, gimme feedback!  Please...  big grin

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Erdrik

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« Reply #177 on: 04-20-2002 02:08 »

So far so good  wink
Not enough for me too give crits tho  tongue

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Tzlk
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« Reply #178 on: 04-20-2002 05:00 »

Go bee go bee go bee!!! wow im tired now... Looks good though!
Erdrik

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« Reply #179 on: 04-23-2002 09:13 »
« Last Edit on: 04-23-2002 09:13 »

hee hee hee
 
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From 'The Juicy Details'
AMY: Anyway,… So lets get started. I axed Fry, but I doubt his info is accurate.
He says that ‘You fell madly in love with him when he heroically beat down a horde
of Evil Demonic Space Clowns’. I’m assuming that’s not how it happened?

LOL HA HA!    laff lol

heh heh heh *wipes tear from eye.*
mmm... Welp back to work ...

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Erdrik

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« Reply #180 on: 04-23-2002 15:44 »
« Last Edit on: 04-23-2002 15:44 »

I sent Chptr1 of my latest Fic 'The Juicy Details' to CGEF, FSAC, and TLZ   wink
Also I uploaded it to PE

Watch for them!

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Tzlk
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« Reply #181 on: 04-24-2002 00:16 »

im gonna read them as soon as they get posted!  wink looking forward man!
BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #182 on: 04-24-2002 01:23 »

 
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Originally posted by Erdrik:
I sent Chptr1 of my latest Fic 'The Juicy Details' to CGEF, FSAC, and TLZ    wink
Also I uploaded it to PE

Watch for them!

Call me Erdrik


PE?  confused

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TheVoices

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« Reply #183 on: 04-24-2002 02:17 »

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Erdrik

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« Reply #184 on: 04-24-2002 09:00 »

 
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Originally posted by TheVoices:
_________
fry walks off in a sulk
gullable idiot, he'll fall for anything thinks Leela as she walks off the other way
_________
because i'm nice i've decided to leave this part of the fic, and i'm not going to be taking it off this time


I missed this before! What is this suppose to mean? Either she is reverting back to her denial mode, or is genuinly pulling Fry's Chain?! If she is genuinly pulling Fry's Chain ... since when is she that mean?

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« Reply #185 on: 04-24-2002 09:24 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
lol fun for the whole family!

except grandma and grandpa of course.   big grin
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« Reply #186 on: 04-25-2002 01:18 »

Yay!  Part Three of IDoL is up at fanfiction.net...  big grin

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« Reply #187 on: 04-25-2002 02:02 »

 
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Originally posted by Erdrik:
 I missed this before! What is this suppose to mean? Either she is reverting back to her denial mode, or is genuinly pulling Fry's Chain?! If she is genuinly pulling Fry's Chain ... since when is she that mean?


"reverting back to her denial mode" i guess


Erdrik

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« Reply #188 on: 04-25-2002 10:18 »

HELP! I need a list of meals that can be served at Elzar's!

I have Fry ordering:
‘Red Cherry Rose’
Corpse of a Red Bonal Sloth.
Sautéed in onion and Spice Weasle, BAM!
With a side of Melotion antennae.
(Crack on the MelonPool Online Comic  tongue )
Price: $ 1,000.01

What should Leela order?

oh on a side note I posted a link to a new Fan Art by yours truly, check it, and post feed back  wink

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Kryten

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« Reply #189 on: 04-25-2002 14:10 »

Grilled Slug Steak Au Jus with Neptune-Fried Potatoes and Imskian Micro-Peas
Tzlk
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« Reply #190 on: 04-25-2002 14:39 »
« Last Edit on: 04-25-2002 14:39 »

OOOOOO Bumblebee!! Im off to read..... be back soon!!    smile


Edit- Sweet fic Bee, I really enjoyed it!! but dammnit! FINISH FINISH FINISH FINISH   big grin   Great Job, it was witty and funny like all your fics are  smile  I cant wait for the next part.    big grin
Erdrik

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« Reply #191 on: 04-28-2002 17:25 »

Please give feedback on Chapter 1 Of TheJuicyDetails! I'm working on Chapter 2 and would like to know how ya'll think chapter 1 went  wink

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BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #192 on: 04-28-2002 22:31 »

Erdrik- I loved Part One, though I thought it was a bit short.  The first scene with the Octarian Kung-Fu bit was very well written and Amy's "solution" made me LOL.  As for the "juicy details" of L&F's relationship, I found the sequences to be quite entertaining.  Munda and Morris' comments were pretty funny too.  All in all a great chapter.  I can't wait to read Part Two.  smile

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Erdrik

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« Reply #193 on: 05-01-2002 01:27 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2002 01:27 »

Ok I got Part2 half way done! But I got a part open for some Zoidberg Humor At DOOP headquarters at a Buffet hosted By the Wongs.
Ive got a funny part but I need more ideas    tongue

Also I have Zapp, giving a long winded pompusly arrogant speech about how he 'saved' Amy from the Martian Natives In Buggalo. This bit is funnier so far but I still need some ideas to beef it up a bit

I need to beef those areas up becuase after that the mood gets realy realy serious and jokes get spread out abit....    tongue

Oh just so you know: you got 2 more flash backs coming  wink

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Erdrik

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« Reply #194 on: 05-01-2002 13:40 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2002 13:40 »

I just got an idea for another what if question for Fry(I need to think of some for Amy    tongue )
Question:
FRY: What would life be like if Leela loved me?

And the machine would show they're regular life. No weird changes.    flirt Think about it ^_^ that would mean that Leela already Loves Fry(DOI!) but now Fry knows it! hee hee This would obviously not be apart of my other two fics    laff

/EDIT
I just emailed Chptr2 of The Juicy Details to CGEF TLZ and FSAC. I also sent it to PE, and FF.net   wink
Watch for it  big grin

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BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #195 on: 05-01-2002 19:01 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2002 19:01 »

Shmeesh, Erdrik.  When did you come up with that what-if for Fry?  It's kinda funny, but I've been tenatively partially-writing a What If series for the past two months and that's REALLY close to what I had as his question.  Great minds think alike, I guess.   wink   'Cept I don't think yours was gonna spin into a "Leave It to Beaver" parody...   big grin
Here's my current list of questions...
Leela: "What if I met my parents at an earlier age?"
Fry: "What if Leela went out with me?"
Bender: "What if I actually had empathy without the use of a chip?"
Amy: "What if I was the human race's only hope for survival?"

Part of Leela's is at my site but a plot point's missing, Fry's is basically "Leave it to Beaver" with flying cards ("Where's that laugh track coming from?&quot wink and Bender's and Amy's are parodies of "A.I." and "Barbarella" respectively.

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BrainSluggo

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« Reply #196 on: 05-01-2002 19:21 »
« Last Edit on: 05-01-2002 19:21 »

Ooooh! That sounds like must-read stuff, BBT!

And because it's more appropriate for this topic: if anyone cares--Me Personal FanFicFilosophy
Erdrik

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« Reply #197 on: 05-01-2002 22:15 »

 
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Originally posted by BumbleBeeTheta:
Shmeesh, Erdrik.  When did you come up with that what-if for Fry? 

Just today actualy. But my Fry question is actualy different. yours is what if they were dating. mine is what if Leela loved him. In the Machine it will show there normal life. ... Damn this is harder to explain than I thought...  tongue
*kracks nuckles for long explination*
Ok, Ill have it like this: Ill write out the begining of the day before the questions are asked. And Fry will go last. The first two questions will basicly show the same morning over again only change to incorperate the question. But when Fry asks his question The machine will show the morning just as it actualy happened. like:
After the simulation:
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FRY: What a rip! It just showed what happened this morning! It must be broken!

The Professor examins the What If machine.

PROFF: Nope. Its in perfect working order.

FRY: Then why did Leela act like normal? ...
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This will lead Fry to beleive that Leela already loves him.(Which I think she does  love )

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Venus

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« Reply #198 on: 05-01-2002 22:43 »

aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww that summary just fills my insides with hot chocolate and fuzzy kittens.
Erdrik

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« Reply #199 on: 05-01-2002 23:02 »

AH, yes Hot chocolate, and fuzzy-..  eek Kittens?!? what have you been eating?! spit that out now!! Kittys are for petting not eating!

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