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Tedward
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That's a nice drawing, Marcus! I know we're all looking forward to the others, too.
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Marcus
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Take two towels into the shower? Er, yes, if you want to post it...! Excellent proportions, good idea, canny use of steam - the floor/feet/steam bit illustrates this best, Amy emerging from BG into foreground, though I can see you've shown similar emerging-difference between hips and boobs... Lining's gone a bit skwee-wiff, and you could have shown some (blurred-by-steam) details of the actual shower room. I like the look of Amy in a towel turban though, with the water still flowing down her... Good to see you picking up the tablet again
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wu_konguk
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« Reply #329 on: 09-19-2009 20:47 »
« Last Edit on: 09-19-2009 21:01 »
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Thanks Soylant @ Marcus Ahh one doth hate backgrounds or rather creating them but perhaps you are right that I should have put more detail in and something I maydo beofre submiting an altenate version to another site (one where Amy only remembered to buy one towel). Perhaps I should of just covered up certain parts with excessive steam rather than a towel (I actually quite like how what is under the towel came out) I will endevour to work on my lining, certainly something that has let me down over and over. In fact two bird with one stone here is a sligtly more rique pic but do not fear there is modesty being retained.
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Tedward
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I'm tempted to say that now there's a little too much background steam, but it is an effective solution to the background issue and in all honesty all that steam does lend the picture a nice dreamlike look. Good job!
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Marcus
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Take two towels into the shower? You've never lived with a woman, have you? Two is the absolute minimum number of towels they use for one shower. And if you're in a hotel, and so not responsible for laundry, they'll manage to use however many towels are available every shower.
I had no idea I was so old - was thinking of that old advert for a combined shampoo/conditioner in one bottle, tagline 'Take two bottles into the shower? Now I just Wash, and Go!' I remember it because it was a _shampoo advert_ - so, like softcore porn for the under-12s... @ Wu - steam works as well/better than a towel for covering... stuff... looks good
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wu_konguk
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Thanks for the comments and advice all and as I said I would contiue the theme of the pic for a few other characters but no excessive steam this time (just excessive soap :P) Firstly the luscious Leela (at least I hope she looks luscious) still I shall put this under spoilers so view at your own discresion And now for something a little different. I did warn that Fry may be part of the series And yes I know Fry using soap does not quite fit but had to cover his modesty some how. And Nice Dragon RS
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Tedward
Professor
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Great jobs, RS and wu!
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Ralph Snart
Agent Provocateur
Near Death Star Inhabitant
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Well it could of made Fry alot happier but I definitly would not be able to post that sort of pic on this board :P Yeah, we already know that to Fry, pleasure is just an "arm-length's away", so your pic was a welcome diversion from that. The Leela pic was smoking hot. I appreciate your sharing your talent with us, the other, untalented individuals.
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Marcus
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Envious, RS - excellent shading bringing out light and shadow, especially on the scales under the head, and horns work very well! (rolls up a Red Dragon Disciple). Well it could of made Fry alot happier but I definitly would not be able to post that sort of pic on this board :P
*is struck by inspiration* I will make it my mission, through this life or the next, to create such a pic. And not doing the lame towel rack/no-hands-dumbbell-lift variations either... ...Actually, I probably won't, but it's a thought...! Lovely Leela, lucky water. But I pick the Fry pic as my favourite - lining looks very purposeful and confident, particularly the upper body. Hand and lower body not as great, but fine and solid, and water effect is really good! His head looks a little squashed, though, too much correction for the (admittedly tricky) angle - I'd probably wuss out and cheat it somehow But no - highly accomplished stuff
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Marcus
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I haven't tried to take up the Fry filth challange yet But I have something. My favourite review of all time is: My opinion? You're a great artist. The drawing, shading, and lines are perfect, but I hate the picture.
Utterly.
The Leela/Amy soft porn thing is a crap idea that's been done too much already This spot-on critique (well... mibbe not the first bit) came to mind when I was lining the following: It's just a work in progress, but opinions and fixes'd be valued, especially about: 1) Leela's hand - should it be smaller? 2) Amy's right leg - is the thigh too thick? Is the lower leg too bent? Is her foot at a weird angle - and if so, could changing the angle of the toes (so they point down more) be a simple fix? 3) Leela's left foot - too thick? 4) Anything else?
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coldangel
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I only see something very very right.
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El-Man
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Sorry, but I have points. Bet you figured I would, huh? 1) Amy's right foot is smaller than her left. 2) Perhaps if you pointed Leela's toes down it would look better. 3) Note the lines under Leela's knees. 4) Leela's left thigh might be a little thick. Minor points of course, but you did ask.
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Ralph Snart
Agent Provocateur
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« Reply #354 on: 09-25-2009 03:04 »
« Last Edit on: 09-25-2009 03:06 »
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I haven't tried to take up the Fry filth challange yet While Juliette may love you for giving the females equal time with a filthy-Fry pic, I don't think that it would resonate with the rest of the (horndog) membership as a Leela-filth or Amy-filth challenge. My opinion? You're a great artist. The drawing, shading, and lines are perfect, but I hate the picture.
Utterly.
The Leela/Amy soft porn thing is a crap idea that's been done too much already Let this person bite my ass from cheek to shining cheek. I absolutely love that pic. (Note: A thing of beauty.) It's just a work in progress, but opinions and fixes'd be valued, especially about: 1) Leela's hand - should it be smaller? 2) Amy's right leg - is the thigh too thick? Is the lower leg too bent? Is her foot at a weird angle - and if so, could changing the angle of the toes (so they point down more) be a simple fix? 3) Leela's left foot - too thick? 4) Anything else?
Leave it as it is. That's my vote.
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Marcus
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« Reply #357 on: 09-25-2009 12:32 »
« Last Edit on: 09-25-2009 12:51 »
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Wow, that's a buttload of positive reinforcement, cheers guys Very kind of you to say, thanks for posting - I'll have to post the final version, now Big whoop to El, I owe you! I hadn't even spotted the Amy foot size thing. I'll probably redo Leela's foot, so I can tackle the toes/thigh lines at the same time. Anyone else with ideas, more'n welcome to share, taking my time on this one. I haven't tried to take up the Fry filth challange yet While Juliette may love you for giving the females equal time with a filthy-Fry pic, I don't think that it would resonate with the rest of the (horndog) membership as Leela-filth or Amy-filth challenge.
Ye-eah... you'd think that, but it depends how you do it... I got a notion that might tick _all_ the boxes. It'd mean all the characters kept almost all their clothes on, but I'm prepared to make that kind of sacrifice.
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Tedward
Professor
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Marcus, besides the foot size, I'd say that the curvature of Leela's right thigh looks a bit odd, but maybe that's just me. Otherwise, that's some great work.
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