Please critisize this:

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hi,
thanks too Poonaniman's great tutorial i scan'd annoying gunter, my favorite character  , in his depressive phase 

here he is:

 

here's the original frame:  http://www.hinnerkfd.handshake.de/gunterori.jpg

i don't like e.g. the banana i've done, or the teeth- area - do you have any suggestions what to improve? i don't have any experience

thx,
luke

[This message has been edited by Luke (edited October 29, 2000).]

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The teeth look fine, but the banana's sorta hazy.

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I thought it was excellent for a first attempt. The good thing about doing these scans in something like Flash or Illustrator is the fact that you can scale 'em up or down as you like.

Poon

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Cool, my first scans aren't that good. If anyone wants to see them click here and here.

BuffDaddy

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hi,
sorry, that i forgot too thank you! i hope i'll have time soon again too improve it, or even make another one so thx again, and continue your great work Poonaniman (i don't find screamy zoidberg anymore, where is it?),
Luke

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Originally posted by Luke:
hi,
sorry, that i forgot too thank you! i hope i'll have time soon again too improve it, or even make another one  so thx again, and continue your great work Poonaniman (i don't find screamy zoidberg anymore, where is it?),
Luke

Should be in the Fan Art bit I hope! If not, it's definitely at http://pjmaybe.tripod.com/art/art.html


Poon

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hi, thanks Poonaniman, it is in the fan- art , i only looked at your homepage and don't find it there , but i think i'm blinded (damn spice- weaser;( dang )
I love this picture, great work as every of you!, it's my background in the university now 

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Originally posted by Kryten:
The teeth look fine, but the banana's sorta hazy.

Yes, it would benefit from a pattern.