I'm No Writer...(Part One)

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(Ditto.)

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(What ^ said.)

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Ok, that was pretty good. Not the greatest I've ever read, but it could beat out some that I have read

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Not bad. Not bad at all...

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(Zapped so's I can go ahead and write the whole 'ting.)

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Now, I'm confused here...Is this a story, or just the premise of a story?  I only ask because I noticed a lot of described dialogue ("So-and-so chats with What's-his-name").

[edit]God damn smilies[/edit]

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Initially intended as a brief outline for someone else to adapt into full form, it grows, like a brain tumor in my buttocks...

Hey! I just noticed! You have the same problem I do with quotation marks and a parenthesis combining to make an accidental smiley! Like this -- &quot

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*claps*