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coldangel
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Yes well... yes. I have a slight fixation.
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Frisco17
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Great job indeed.
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coldangel
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That looks to be shaping up VERY nicely.
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Frisco17
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Nice. Are you gonna do the rest of the sketch in color or just that part?
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Zmithy
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These look great, I like the style of the Leela mechanic.
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JustNibblin
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Hey Archonix,
First the obvious--you are a damn good artist, drawing in freehand like that.
Second, I read what I think was the first version of a Different View on the TLZ, and I'll pass on to you what a wise veteran PEELer passed on to me. To get more comments, instead of posting a link to a document put small chunks at a time (2-3 pages) into your Different View thread. Less intimidating, allows people to read over multiple sittings instead of having to commit a large chunk of time, and gives you a chance to re-read everything and respond to feedback as you go along. Also keeps your thread 'visible' for a longer time. In some sense these threads are just old fashioned magazine serials udpdated to the 21st century. It's fun to be part of a writing tradition that extends back over a century.
I would also post all subsequent stories in your Different View thread, so new people won't have to search for your earlier work.
So I have no idea if you've started again from scratch, but I liked what you had written so far, since it made me think, which is something that fanfics, especially gender switch fanfics, generally do not do for me...
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coldangel
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Last pic looks great. Who's the other chick?
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Archonix
Space Pope
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If I just told you here you'd run screaming in to the distance, demanding someone take your brain and scrub out the offending memory with bleach in a comical skit worthy of Monty Python... It's Fry. Really, it's not what you think... Originally posted by JustNibblin': Hey Archonix,
First the obvious--you are a damn good artist, drawing in freehand like that.
Thank you! Second, I read what I think was the first version of a Different View on the TLZ, and I'll pass on to you what a wise veteran PEELer passed on to me. To get more comments, instead of posting a link to a document put small chunks at a time (2-3 pages) into your Different View thread. Less intimidating, allows people to read over multiple sittings instead of having to commit a large chunk of time, and gives you a chance to re-read everything and respond to feedback as you go along. Also keeps your thread 'visible' for a longer time. In some sense these threads are just old fashioned magazine serials udpdated to the 21st century. It's fun to be part of a writing tradition that extends back over a century.
I would also post all subsequent stories in your Different View thread, so new people won't have to search for your earlier work.
So I have no idea if you've started again from scratch, but I liked what you had written so far, since it made me think, which is something that fanfics, especially gender switch fanfics, generally do not do for me... Interesting. I did actually finish it off and re-write it but it seems that, like you say, most people are put off by large chunks of writing. It's confused me. I'm used to an environment where people post the entire story in one go and then read it later on. I read Kenny's Universe of Malice that way meself since that's how it was posted there, though I have to admit that one even daunted me a little. I suppose I shall have to adapt. Thanks for the advice.
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coldangel
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Oooh, klool. Is Fry male there? That's something different.
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coldangel
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Do you use a blue pencil to sketch those rough versions? Is there a technical reason for that?
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