Sine Wave's Fanfiction

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I guess I sort of hinted at this story a few months ago, but now, many long nights and four complete plot overhauls later I think I'm turning out something decent. Constructive criticism is appreciated.         

A Soon to be Contradicted View of the Future

Part One
Part Two
Part Three

Also, in the shorter-but-finished department, there's

Biogenesis

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Interesting, I wonder whats happen to Leela?

Nice start too, can't wait for more! 

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Nice start! I'll be sure to keep reading.

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“This Durans Duran.”

Hahaha! Awesome. I love Duran Duran.

Also, 'the breakfast planet' cracked me up.
Nice references to exotic physics.

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Nice story.

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Wow, good start.

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I spilled water all over my keyboard when you said 'Ice-Ten will make regular water explode'. Although it would have been very slightly funnier if Fry had said 'Will it irreversibly freeze other water?'

It makes the reference a bit clearer...   

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Originally posted by Xanfor:
I spilled water all over my keyboard when you said 'Ice-Ten will make regular water explode'. Although it would have been very slightly funnier if Fry had said 'Will it irreversibly freeze other water?'

It makes the reference a bit clearer...     

Ah, very good point. Also, for further clarification, when I said 'more's on the way,' I was referring to the way from my head to my hands. And apologies about your keyboard.

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Oh good, I was hoping the upcoming DVDs wouldn't shut down fan fic.

I'm enjoying your quantum references, sine wave.  I see your potential well.

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You should add a monolith that changes suddenly into an infinite hole filled with stars.

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Lets all join hands and sing "Hungry Like the Wolf" come on!  Nicely done story....but four plot overhauls? What are you? An extreme perfectionist? I like that. 

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Do you? 

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@ Robo D, SonicPanther and FuturamaPac: Glad you're enjoying it so far, hopefully I won't disappoint when I actually get to the plot of the story.

@ Coldangel, Xanfor, and JustNibblin': Not to get emotional, but being a big fan of you guys' work, your comments really mean a lot to me. Thanks.

 

Originally posted by Decapodian:
You should add a monolith that changes suddenly into an infinite hole filled with stars.

Possibly much later, maybe.

 

Originally posted by Professor Zoidy:
Lets all join hands and sing "Hungry Like the Wolf" come on!    Nicely done story....but four plot overhauls? What are you? An extreme perfectionist? I like that.   

  Indeed (she's mine, Xanfor, step off). But yes, I guess I could be called a perfectionist. If I'm not doing my best, why do it at all?

Well, thanks to everyone, hopefully the next part will be up tomorrow at the latest.

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Ooh, a Xanfor/Sine Wave fight! This could get interesting. *gets popcorn*

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Now, now, violence is the last refuge of the incompetent, and as two perfectionists, I'm sure neither of us wants to go there.

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Then could you fit in an update in that two weeks? Pleeease?

This is a great story, can't wait for more. I love how you come up with all this, like the ice-ten and poodle.com 

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Originally posted by Sine Wave:
“Well,” Bender said, reeling into a flashback, or a frame tale, whichever is technically correct, “it all started as I was leaving the quantum casino entirely of my own free will…”

I can so see Bender saying that.  And I like your writing style.

I know how it is with real life, but once you start you gotta finish, right?  At least tell us you know what the finish is...

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Originally posted by FuturamaPac:
Then could you fit in an update in that two weeks? Pleeease?

This is a great story, can't wait for more. I love how you come up with all this, like the ice-ten and poodle.com   

Thanks. I'm working on the next part.   

 

Originally posted by JustNibblin':
 I can so see Bender saying that.  And I like your writing style.

I know how it is with real life, but once you start you gotta finish, right?  At least tell us you know what the finish is...

Thanks, and yes, I know how it ends. Vaguely, however I don't want to have too specific a plan until I write more, so I don't end up having a story that's incompatible with its ending and whatnot.

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“There’s a cat in there?” Leela said, shocked. “But it’s completely sealed! How do you know if it’s even alive?”

Hahaha, you nerd!

Ooooh, ESP. Liking this.

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Great update, can't wait for more.......oh I can.

*Remains in seat and waits, looks at watch every once and awaile*

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Originally posted by Sine Wave:
Now, now, violence is the last refuge of the incompetent, and as two perfectionists, I'm sure neither of us wants to go there.

I am not a perfectionist. Supermodels are perfectionists and I despise them.

 

it says in this Tikipedia article that both of you consumed what is known as the Cocktail of Life, a drink native to Copenhagos h/2pi created from melting a sandslug with ice-ten. Oh lord, it’s LSD all over again. You develop something for science and the next thing you know it’s out on the street and people are singing songs about bearded rainbows.

Ok, this keyboard you owe me!

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I just loved the Schrodingers Cat reference.

But there better be a 1:4:2 dimensioned object in this story somewhere.

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I think Schrodinger would love his cat making an appearance in this fanfic.  Then again, maybe he would hate it.  Actually, it probably would be a linear combination of both states.   

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Nice update Sine. It still left me guessing what'll happen next. Too bad about college. But to me, you could just skip studying some nights and write instead, or do double ups with study for so long and then writing or vice versa. Good luck with both the story and college. What do you want to major in anyways?

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Originally posted by coldangel_1:
“There’s a cat in there?” Leela said, shocked. “But it’s completely sealed! How do you know if it’s even alive?”

Hahaha, you nerd!

Ooooh, ESP. Liking this.

 

Originally posted by Decapodian:
I just loved the Schrodingers Cat reference.

 

Originally posted by JustNibblin':
I think Schrodinger would love his cat making an appearance in this fanfic.  Then again, maybe he would hate it.  Actually, it probably would be a linear combination of both states.   

My own feelings on the joke were quite superpositioned when I wrote it, as I was afraid it would be too cliche, but it formed sort of a key storytelling element. I'm glad it was a hit.

 

Originally posted by Robo D Rulz!!:
Great update, can't wait for more.......oh I can.

*Remains in seat and waits, looks at watch every once and awaile*

I guess whenever I get writer's block I can just think of someone creepily watching me through my bedroom window. Thanks.

 

Originally posted by Xanfor:
 Ok, this keyboard you owe me!

You might want to invest in lidded beverage containers, a sippy cup perhaps. This may end expensively, for me, if I continue to hold myself liable.

 

Originally posted by Professor Zoidy:
Nice update Sine. It still left me guessing what'll happen next. Too bad about college. But to me, you could just skip studying some nights and write instead, or do double ups with study for so long and then writing or vice versa. Good luck with both the story and college. What do you want to major in anyways?

Still guessing, huh? Who knows, I might manage to make it to the actual plot eventually. I'll still write at school, I assure you (damn the creative writing class needing instructor permission), just understand it won't be as much.

Unsurprisingly, I'm planning to be a physics major.

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Originally posted by Sine Wave:

You might want to invest in lidded beverage containers, a sippy cup perhaps. This may end expensively, for me, if I continue to hold myself liable.

The water gets on the board after it's been in my mouth. That's why my posts have been writing themselves lately.

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Ah, very well. I guess it's just the price to pay then.

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Physics is a nice thing to major in. Of course I myself would never be able to do that. If it involves difficult math, I count myself out. However, it's your choice, and so I claim you smarter than I in that department. Maybe you'll become a scientist that can actually do something more than hate what another scientist's opinion is about a subject. 

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Hopefully so. Finding a Theory of Everything would be nice, as well as a loophole for faster-than-light travel.

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Good stuff.

I direct you to this article on the military's interest and involvement in precognitive study: http://www.qedcorp.com/pcr/pcr/emay.html

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Uh oh....Fry's in deep crap now if Nixon gets him. No telling what kinda horrible things he'd do...

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Nice fic, I completely agree with what Zoidy is saying...

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That proves Fry's knowledge of the future isn't complete. After all, he didn't know that by going to the Nimbus he was going to alert Nixon to his powers.

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Awesome you were able to fit Nixon in too, not a lot of Fanfics use him.

Also, I'm really liking this fic. Great work.

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Originally posted by coldangel_1:
Good stuff.

I direct you to this article on the military's interest and involvement in precognitive study: http://www.qedcorp.com/pcr/pcr/emay.html

As interesting as it may seem, I'd hesitate to call any of that proven science. I mean, it depends on a "pilot brain wave" which is only defined as something that carries qualia, which are very nebulous and immaterial themselves. Also, in my opinion, postmodernism shouldn't touch science with a ten foot pole. Well, anything really, but science especially.

And, probably more pertinent to your intentions, the government only contributed $250,000 to a $20,000,000 study, or so they claim. I've seen stuff on their involvement with similar projects though.

 

Originally posted by Professor Zoidy, and seconded by FuturamaPac:
Uh oh....Fry's in deep crap now if Nixon gets him. No telling what kinda horrible things he'd do...

Well, no telling for you, I sort of have to tell you guys things or it won't be much of a story.   

 

Originally posted by Decapodian:
That proves Fry's knowledge of the future isn't complete. After all, he didn't know that by going to the Nimbus he was going to alert Nixon to his powers.

Or did he?

 

Originally posted by Robo D Rulz!!:
Awesome you were able to fit Nixon in too, not a lot of Fanfics use him.

Also, I'm really liking this fic. Great work.

Nixon is a must, one of my favorite characters.

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Of course, there's more info to be had on the Soviet Union's fervent pursuit of a similar program during the Cold War.

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Originally posted by Sine Wave:
Or did he?

I'd rather if he didn't. It's going to be hardpressed if youre trying to make a story about someone who can see all of the future.

You could say that he could only see a few hours ahead or something.

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STELLAR. Lovin' it. I especially liked:

Originally posted by Sine Wave:
The delivery boy’s companions watched as the man rolled past them down the hill, followed shortly by a skidding fireball. Technically, it was a firecube, but the observers weren’t that concerned with formalities at the time. The woman and robot froze as they realized what was at the bottom of the hill: a river. By the time they could move to chase the block, it was in the water, and the movie screen was filled by a blinding light. “And that’s how Copenhagos h/2pi became a desert planet.”.....

...  a farmer’s market with fresh quark in all six flavors,.....

General Parking (Pauli Excluded).......

“Bon Appetite.” He said, setting them down in front of Fry and Leela.

“I’ll never understand what these guys are saying.”

...And a lot more.
Are you Danish, or do you just know the language?

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Originally posted by coldangel_1:
Of course, there's more info to be had on the Soviet Union's fervent pursuit of a similar program during the Cold War.

Any sort of nefarious activity gets +50 bad-ass points when communism's involved.

 

Originally posted by Decapodian:

 I'd rather if he didn't. It's going to be hardpressed if youre trying to make a story about someone who can see all of the future.

You could say that he could only see a few hours ahead or something.

It's explained further on in the story and that's all I'm saying to keep from spoiling stuff.

 

Originally posted by km73:
Are you Danish, or do you just know the language?

No, oh heavens no. The Danish came from a translator, tweaked with my knowledge of German into something I hoped was passably correct. I guess it is!

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I would read this but I'm really tired. I got to sleep at about 4.00 am last night. I'll defibitely read it some other time though!