Like Writer unit32 already said I also would propose to use the other thread. Continue your idea of a multi person fanfiction in there until the thread will reach its limit of 20 pages, please.
Btw.: normally our moderators are quite hard on stories that may be written by multiple people since they can lead to spamming and posts containing of only few words pretty fast.
However the Fan-art/-Fiction Forum is hardly checked upon these days so that it could actually happen that this thread will be unseen by them too.
Another thing I want to ask you is to try using a slightly better English. I see that you may have a general problem with spelling, but since people whose native language is not English read PEEL too, a little more spellcheck may be needed. Otherwise it is hard for them to understand what you mean to say.
Enjoy your stay.