intractive fan fic therd

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Or untill we get bored and let you update more

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I see... Well then, let's get started!  This is gonna be funderful!

The Dream
 

I find It kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
These dreams in which I'm dying
Are the best I've ever had

Fry was stuck in a maze.  Every where he went looked exactly the same.  Corner after corner after corner until he thought for sure that he was completely lost.  He heard footsteps behind him.  He swiveled around only to see the flicker of a shadow.  Fry was sprinting now.  He heard the footsteps again and this time as he turned back, he saw a knife flying toward him.  It slashed him on the cheek.  More kinves were coming.  Fry let out a scream as they struck-
Fry sat up in bed.  "A dream.  It was just a dream."  He put his fingers up to his cheek where he'd been cut in the dream.  He gasped as pulled his fingers away and stared at the blood on it.  "Oh my god, it was real!"

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Morning came. Fry got up; got dressed and looked in the mirror on his way out of the door. On his left check was a sticky cut. Fry touched it and blood dabbed his finger.
Fry simply shrugged and left. He just assumed it had something to do with his homosidal roommate bender.
When fry stepped into the PE lough Leela gasped.
"Fry! what happened to you're face?!"
Fry simple shrugged and poured himself a cup of coffee.
"Good News Everybody!" the senile proffessor shouted as he greeted his crew.
"An evil genius (This time not me) has tried and SUCEEDED to get hold of the gamma radiation chambers used to broadcast advertisments into people's dreams. He's using the technology in his evil bidding to eliminate 'The Mighty One' and 'The Other' Whoever they might be"
With this the proffesor pottered out. Fry put his hand to his cheek.

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hmm this is intriguing

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"hey Leela, where's Nibbler?" Fry asked
"Oh he wasn't looking good so I drooped him off at the vet this morning before work." she replied.  Just like that Fry darted off to the vet.
'This is coming out of your pay man." Hurmeas said as Fry went by his room.
"What pay?" he said
"Oh yea, get back to work." Hurmeas said.

Fry arrived at the vet.  "Do you have a animal by the name of Nibbler in here?" Fry asked the clerk.
"I'm sorry sir but we need to see some proff that it is your per before we tell you that he is here and what room he's in," she said not looking up from her magazine.
"Look lady..." Fry started.  "NIBBLER!!!" he shouted as he spotted the Nibbloian in a cage.

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He darted over to the old vet carrying Nibbler's doggy cage. The vet, holding nibbler, was also carring a large green snake and some alien Fry hadn't seen before. It was easy for Fry to snatch Nibbler. Fry grabbled nibbler's cage and ran out of the vetenary clinic. "What the heck is going on here?! people are talking anout 'The Mighty One' and 'The Other.' and all that stuff you told me when i fought the brains."

Nibbler just stared blankly and made a few mummbles and grunts, as he normally did.

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then sudenly some thing white flew over frys head flowlowed by a chickereing laugh
a ghost fry thoght has he headed back to the PE bulding the next day the prof came in  good news and bad news everyone bad news is there have been countless robot ghost sightings goods news is im makeing you the ghost busters  hey rember them fry said they saved new york 2 times

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"Shut up, you crazy old looney, it was only a seagull!" Hermes said as the Professor fell asleep in his chair.

"Fry, what's going on?" Leela asked in confusion. "Why do you need Nibbler? What about this 'Other' and 'Mighty One' nonsense you've been going on about? Don't tell me you stayed up all night listening to Rush again."

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Fry then opened his eyes.He was in a hospital.The whole PE crew were sitting next to him.
He looked around,confused. "What the--Wait,it was another dream?!"
"What do you,another dream?" Leela axed.
"Umm...Nothing.seriously,nothing...How did I get here,anyway?"
"Because of whoever took control of the Gamma Radiation Chambers.You fell on the floor back at the Vet's.Stuff like that happened a lot recently."
"Oh...Ok,but where's Nibbler?"


Dun-dun-dun!

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"Nibbler is here" said an arrogant voice behind Fry.
Due to him being in the bed he couldn.t turn his head around to see but the rest of the crew could.
"Sweet Zombie Jesus!" exclaimed the Prof, "Whats that!"
But suddenly a blue beam scanned them and their faces feel into a stupor of happy stupidity.
"Duh...Cheese is nature's fudge" said Bender.
"Why are you you all acting so stupid?" asked Fry.
He finally managed to wrench his head around and was confronted by a .... Brainspawn which was holding Nibbler with a beam of psychic energy.
"Aaaaah Brainspawn!" he screamed. "But how did you get out of that other universe I imprisoned you in?"

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"Muha ha ha!! We're giant BRAINS ..er.. stupid! we can do ..um..  anything. If we put our ..er.. Minds to it. It's easy when you think about it..." The brain said shiftily.

"Why are you acting so shiftly like?" Fry asked

"I'm ..er.. waiting for someth-"

Suddenly a huge alarm sounded.

"Muha ha ha again! that's my ride." Suddenly about 12 brains appeared out of no where. Each was on a hover-mobile and imprisoning a small Nibblonan. Fiona, Ken, Nibbler... They were all there. 

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aww i wa relly looking forawrd to ghost busters curse you sine wave

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new rule if anyone has something happen you stick with it i ok

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Don't double post! Why couldn't you've editied your previous post? And I object to the new rule. You can't follow every idea and what if an idea is stupid?

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"More Nibblers!" gasped Fry."What happened?"
But the Nibblonians did nothing but make strange squeaky animal noises.Fry then realised that the beams being used to hold the Nibblonians were Stupefaction Rays!
"Could you at least tell me what your planning?" asked Fry.
"Hah. Were not falling for that one again.Prepare to die!"

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Ooooooh,here's a question.How does Fry about the brains and Nibblonians.Fry didn't fight the Brainspawn.I mean,yeah,he did,but he doesn't have a clue about that.
Plus,you've put Brains and Nibblonians in too quickly.It's like we know the ending right after the start.What happened to the Gamma radiation Chambers?!

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Originally posted by PazuzuJr:
""Muha ha ha again! that's my ride." Suddenly about 12 brains appeared out of no where. Each was on a hover-mobile and imprisoning a small Nibblonan. Fiona, Ken, Nibbler... They were all there. 

Why do Brainspwan need hover-mobiles?

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Because the brainspawn are carrying the nibblonians so they can't focus all their energy on flying throuigh Earth's atmosphere? :P

@Writer- Maybe the brainspawn have the gamma radiation chambers and are going to use them to take over the world?

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I object!  that rule is preposterous.
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I like where this is going.  It's tempting, but I'll save my updates for later.

@B19: What is your native language?

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Originally posted by Bender19:
aww i wa relly looking forawrd to ghost busters curse you sine wave

Sine Wave: 2
Bender19's 80's-themed sidetracks: 0

 

Originally posted by Writer unit32:
Ooooooh,here's a question.How does Fry about the brains and Nibblonians.Fry didn't fight the Brainspawn.I mean,yeah,he did,but he doesn't have a clue about that.
Plus,you've put Brains and Nibblonians in too quickly.It's like we know the ending right after the start.What happened to the Gamma radiation Chambers?!

Exactly. I have lost any idea of what exactly is going on.

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Originally posted by PazuzuJr:
@Writer- Maybe the brainspawn have the gamma radiation chambers and are going to use them to take over the world?

Yeah,but--Ah,forget it!Next time,just try waiting alittle bit before putting in the Brainspawn.I really ruines the fic when they appear right after the start.

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S, is someone going to update, or what?

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Originally posted by Trombonist:
S, is someone going to update, or what?

You update.I'm still trying to work out what happened!

OK,OK,I might update later.Maybe.

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Dammit, I think I will

   

I find It kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
These dreams in which I'm dying
Are the best I've ever had

"Without the Nibblonians and your scooty puff jr, how can you ever hope to defeat us?" said the brain.  "Prepare to die, human."
All thirteen brains combined their power and sent a bolt of energy into Fry's heart.  Fry let out a girlie scream as he sat up in bed clutching his heart.  He was back on the PE ship.  Bender and Leela burst.
"Meatbag, are you okay!?" demanded Bender. 
"What happened?" Fry asked. 
"We're doing our delivery." explained Leela.  "You've been asleep the entire time.  That's when we heard you scream."
My god! thought Fry.  It was another dream


When Fry got back to the office, He found out the whole story.  He had rushed out to get nibbler, but the veterinary security had knocked him unconcious.  They put him on board to start the delivery while he was still out cold.  That was when Fry had the dream.

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Why am I having all these wierd dreams? thought Fry.

Meanwhile in the alternate universe which the Brainspawn were still trapped in...
The Brainspwan adjusted the glass of the inter-dimensional viewfinder as it went into another bout of sporadic interference.
Editors note: Inter-dimensional viewfinders are complex inventions that allow users to look into other universes. The problem was that there were so many universes that you had to be a giant brain to be smart enough to have it pin-point the universe you want. Also, interference can cause the Inter-dimensional viewfinder to spin wildly and gaze into a random universe.
"Damn it!" cried the Brain. " It just had some more interference and now it's showing the picture of that damn big fiery eye again! We need the viewfinder to be focused on the Chosen One so we can beam the Gamma Ray dreams down to kill him! And once he's dead we can come back into the normal universe!"
" Uh, remind me again how killing the Choson One will let us back into the universe?" said another Brain.


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YOU'VE READ IT, YOU CANT UN-READ IT!
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im just pumed up about ghost busters 3 is all but stop being mean sorry for the rule heres a new rule your NOW alowed to post on the fanfic you wrote 5 times so it seem fairer then 2 and the athour rule that i made  is gone sorry im just under stress

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I think that I speak for everyone when is say the following:

PUNCTUATION!!!

seriously, cannot undrstand a thing that you just typed

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@pazuzuJr: I guess only smart people can figure it out 

Great idea, Deca.  For a momebnt I thought I'd killed this thread

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The first brain turned to the second and sighed. "The quantum interphase bomb is powered by the Mighty One's amplified beta and omega brainwaves. Killing him will cut off the waves, and reverse the process of the bomb. Or maybe you could actually use the collection of all the information from our original universe hanging behind you once in a while."

Fry was sitting in his seat on the bridge of the Planet Express Ship, a cold glass of water in his hand and signs of sweat visible on his face and in his hair. Leela turned from piloting the ship to look him over, before asking, "Are you alright, Fry?"

"Yeah, it's just those dreams, they felt so real. I'll be fine, though." Fry said as he wavered in his seat.

"Fry, you've been passing out at random, and ranting on about stuff that just doesn't make sense. I think you should get someone to look you over when we get back to Earth. The only reason we brought you along is because Hermes doesn't want to pay for your health insurance, so he won't let you miss work."

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@ Pazuzu; You forgot to mention grammar and capitalisation 


One of the Brains looked at the Inter-Dimensional Viewfinder. "Damn,we need a new power source ASAP! Where can we find one of those,anyway?"
After much thinking, one brain started flying around and hit the wall and another one answered. "Well, technically, we can use the same thing we use to get to the Mighty One. The Gamma Radiation Chambers. We could suck out people's "brain power". The problem is,we'll probably spend alot of power trying to reset those things, so we'll need to find  someone who has enough power to supply us before we'll kill the Mighty One. We'll need to find the biggest big brain (not literally speaking, of cource) there is..."

Back in the PE building, Cubert randomly fell of a chair and started snoring...

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"Hey look at what happened to Cubert" said Leela.
" Alright he's dead!" said Bender "Dibs on poking him with a stick!"

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Listen up, people(and I use that term lightly).  I'm going to be away starting tomorrow. If I'm not here when you finish the fic, I elect jle1993 to decide the winner, even if she thinks that she, herself, deserves it, because 1)She hasn't posted in this fic so far and won't feel the urge to choose herself, and 2)because I respect her writing capability and judgement.
You all may carry on, now.

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Got it TB, you guys let me know when you're done an I'll decide...that is, if the rest of you don't object.

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Originally posted by Trombonist:
Listen up, people(and I use that term lightly).  I'm going to be away starting tomorrow. If I'm not here when you finish the fic, I elect jle1993 to decide the winner, even if she thinks that she, herself, deserves it, because 1)She hasn't posted in this fic so far and won't feel the urge to choose herself, and 2)because I respect her writing capability and judgement.
You all may carry on, now.

*Stops staring at Trombonist,turnes to Jle*

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While I'm here, I may as well update

   

I find It kind of funny
I find it kind of sad
These dreams in which I'm dying
Are the best I've ever had

"I'm not dead, you morons!" said cubert.  "I just fell of that...uh...thing."
"You mean 'chair?'" Leela corrected.
Cubert had a dumb look on his face.  "What's a chair?"
"Oh your God!  He's an idiot!"  Bender shouted.  "It's the apocolypse!!"
The proffessor burst in.  "No one starts the apocolypse without me!"
By this time Fry was running around the room screaming.  Leela was the only one calm.
"Everybody calm down."  She said as she grabbed Fry by his collar.  "It's nit the apocolypse, Cubert's just acting stupid."
Everyone turned to look at Cubert, who was laying on the ground, drooling.  The proffessor started examining him.
It appears Cubert is have his brain sucked out." The prof exclaimed.  "No doubt the same machine that's causing Fry's nightmare's is also causing this strange phenomenon."
"That settles it." Said Leela.  "We're going to the gamma radiation chambers."

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Originally posted by PazuzuJr:
I think that I speak for everyone when is say the following:

im dumb

seriously, cannot undrstand a thing that you just typed

  Your now alowed to post 5 times!!      What i mean is the starter of the story is alowed to post 5 times insted of 2.

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I didn't even know there was a limit on the amount of entries there was 
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"we can't you idiot!" The proffersor shouted at Leela "Don't you watch the news? No one knows where the gamma radiation chambers are being hidden!"

At that precise moment, Bender picked up the remote control and turned on the TV. 

Linda and morbo appeared on the screen.

The blonde news reader picked up  pile of papers and began to read..."Only one hour ago today, top scientist doctor wernstrom-"

"Wernstrom" the proffersor interupted

"-discovered that the missing gamma radiation chambers, used to brodcast advertiments in our dreams for products such as 'Glagnors Human Rinds'-"

Morbo butted in "They're a buncha muncha cruncha humans!"

Linda continued " are being used to cause people to lose their brains and become idiots!"

Morbo continued "They are believed to be hidden in-"

Back in the PE lounge bender turrned of the TV "Well that's boring - who wants to go freefalling with soap stars?"

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"No!" cried Leela. "Turn it back it on!"
"Why? It's only Cubert." said Bender.
"Yeah But-" Leela was cut off by a strange hissing sound. She tried to continue but could only say " Duh....."
"Leela, whats wrong?"
" It appears that she too has lost her brains" said the Prof. "And I wanted them after she died damnit!"

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Well, thanks a lot, Deca!!  You killed the thread while I was gone!  I guess it's up to me to save the day!!!

"Wait a minute," said Fry, as everyone but the proffessor and he started going "duhhh..." "Why aren't you going stupid, proffessor?"
"Shut up!" the proffessor exclaimed.  "Can't you see I'm trying to post on PEEL!?"
"OH MY GOD!!" Fry screamed.  "He's the dumbest person here!"
Fry shoved everyone into the PE ship and, with only a few non-fatal accidents, made it to a point where they were safe from the rays.
"This wangs chums!" Leela cursed.  "Now earth will become a scum-bucket of idiots.  Even more so than normal."
"You know," said Bender.  "I bet this is Cubert's fault.  If only we'd followed Trombonist's suggestion (post #14) earlier!" 
"It is not my fault, you morons!" Cubert snorted.  "Obviously, we need to go to the gamma radiation chambers to stop whoever's in charge."
"That's imppossible."  By the time we got close, we'd be dumber than Fry!"

Can anyone think of a creative way to solove this exciting plot problem.  We have to finish this or the plot bunnies will eat us.

P.S. I saw the General Discussion, and it is a mess.  Those threads that have been closed seriously need to be moved out of the way.

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I would like too start the next story i have a great idea heres a hint.The clone.