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Author Topic: Reverse Fry-chology *MY FIRST FUTURAMA FIC*  (Read 456 times)
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Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« on: 12-31-2006 22:48 »

Please, can some of you go here and read my story? You don't even have to read it all, just some. Constructive criticism welcome!   big grin How'd I do? IT's still in production, though.

 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3318829/1/

"They said I was dumb, but I
proved them! ~Fry
Actor-mo-tron

Bending Unit
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« Reply #1 on: 12-31-2006 23:41 »

I like it so far. It's fun. Nothing like slurm in the morning. And slurm in a glass? How novel. I think I see where you're going with the chocolates.
ZoidFryLeelaAmy
Bending Unit
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« Reply #2 on: 01-01-2007 00:04 »
« Last Edit on: 01-01-2007 00:04 »

It's GREAT!!! well done Fry_GIRL!!
And happy new year now that it is for everyone   cool
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #3 on: 01-01-2007 00:13 »
« Last Edit on: 01-01-2007 00:13 »

Thanks so much, guys! 
I really appreciate it. Happy New Year!!

Also - if you're on my story, to go to the next chapters (there are about 9 so far) jusst click on the dropdown menu on the top right or bottom right.
Thanks and keep reviewing, you party people!
  love I love when people read my stuff!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #4 on: 01-01-2007 11:26 »

Cool!I cant read it all right now but I can already say that it's better than my(everything's better than my).
TheLesbianLeela

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #5 on: 01-01-2007 12:09 »

Sounds realy creative and good so far. Realy nice. Also, funny. I like it.

 smile
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #6 on: 01-01-2007 12:58 »
« Last Edit on: 01-01-2007 12:58 »

Oh, thank you soo much!   big grin

What chapter did you guys all get up to?
I think I'm gonna go write more now!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #7 on: 01-01-2007 13:20 »

Cool story, but the idea of Leela and Zapp makes me sick so I hope you're planning on Fry and Leela, or something like that. Keep it up
TheLesbianLeela

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #8 on: 01-01-2007 13:39 »

I have read all chapters by now and I still think it is a great story. In fact, you describe the characters realy good, one could realy imagine this as a Futurama episode from TV.

Leela, Fry and Zapp? This is going to be interesting. Also, magical love candies are involved. Please continue writing!  smile
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #9 on: 01-01-2007 13:43 »
« Last Edit on: 01-01-2007 13:43 »

@ jle1993 - Don't worry, it is NOT going to be Leela/Zapp.   wink  I just think Zapp is too funny to NOT be in the story. lol!

@ TLL - Thank you for reading all of it! I'm glad you like it.   big grin Yes, the love candies will be a big part of it soon. Thanks for the review! I will keep writing. In fact, I may even write more right now! I will probably post up some more later.

~EDIT~
I am writing a verrrry good part right now, should be up soon. Want a hint of what's happening? Think Fry + candy.   roll eyes
fishrfunny

Crustacean
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« Reply #10 on: 01-02-2007 04:47 »

cool story so far keep it going!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #11 on: 01-02-2007 07:07 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by Fry_GIRL:
@ jle1993 - Don't worry, it is NOT going to be Leela/Zapp.

Thank God, I was going to have to shoot myself if it was.  wink

Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #12 on: 01-02-2007 21:52 »

:] Thanks again everyone.
I'm going to go put up Chapter 10 right now!
Tastes Like Fry

Urban Legend
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« Reply #13 on: 01-02-2007 23:14 »

Is it up yet?
TheLesbianLeela

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #14 on: 01-02-2007 23:19 »
« Last Edit on: 01-03-2007 00:00 »

Look here (link).

... and it doesn't seem like there is anything up yet.   hmpf

Though, I think we should at least check every now and then to see when it's up.

For I'm realy curious about the next part of the story ... what with Fry and Candy.
MrBlonde

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #15 on: 01-02-2007 23:24 »

Wow that's very creative I thought it was going to be generic but you proved me wrong. Good job!
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #16 on: 01-03-2007 11:40 »
« Last Edit on: 01-05-2007 00:00 »

Thank you I'm so glad people are liking my story!
Yeah I'm sorry I couldn't put it up last night.
I'll put it up now.

~EDIT~
It's up. Sorry it's kinda short.   hmpf
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #17 on: 01-03-2007 13:05 »

very short...but still good. I wonder whats going to happen next, its caught my attention
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #18 on: 01-03-2007 20:11 »

Yes! It's getting heated up lol. I'm going to finish CHAPTER 11 right now and then hopefully put it up in a little while!  big grin
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #19 on: 01-04-2007 22:22 »

SORRY FOR THE X2 POST, but CHAPTER 11 is finally up!! Enjoy! (It's not as short as Ch. 10, don't worry.)
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #20 on: 01-05-2007 11:34 »

NONONONONONONOnONONo, NOT CHAZ!!!!!
I mean okay, I'm glad she love Fry yoo, but Chaz, come on!
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #21 on: 01-05-2007 11:48 »

Don't worry, it's just a little part of the story, he's not gonna be a big part of it or anything. He's just an example to show that Leela ate a....oh I've said too much :0
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #22 on: 01-05-2007 11:54 »

SHE DID WHAT!!! I thought Leela was sensible, oh nononono, not good, but great story anyway *starts pacing*
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #23 on: 01-05-2007 14:12 »

Okay so you still like the story right? lol. I don't wanna make a part that no one will like.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #24 on: 01-05-2007 14:49 »

I like the story, I just get stressed out easily. It was a good update.
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #25 on: 01-05-2007 14:53 »

oooh good I'm glad!!!!!
The next chapter, (I'm writing it right now) is pretty funny!!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #26 on: 01-05-2007 14:54 »

Good good, I need some light comic relief after the tantrum I just threw over in the shippers thread.
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #27 on: 01-05-2007 18:51 »

***CHAPTER 12 IS UP***
Tastes Like Fry

Urban Legend
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« Reply #28 on: 01-05-2007 19:29 »

Woo! *reads*
Wow, this throws everything, what the hell is Leela doing?
Go Fry go!
*StarGirl*

Crustacean
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« Reply #29 on: 01-05-2007 23:20 »

Wow!! Coool!! I like this fanfic, can't wait to see how it ends!!!  big grin
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #30 on: 01-07-2007 18:07 »

Thanks you!  big grin

Hey I just wanted to let you all know that I'm not allowed on the computer during Mon-Fri, but during school I will write a LOT, and I mean a lot of the story. Sorry for the wait! Check back here on Sat.  smile
Fry_GIRL

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #31 on: 01-19-2007 16:33 »

hey guys sorry for the lack of updates.  frown i'll update soon.
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #32 on: 01-20-2007 14:17 »

I'll read your story later. I can't right now, but I will!
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