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Writer unit32

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« Reply #40 on: 01-18-2007 17:02 »

 
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Originally posted by PazuzuJr:
 
wow - that sounds soooo not sarcatic!

Are you being sarcastic?Coz I wasn't being sarcastic.There is no need to be sarcastic about me being sarcastic coz I wasn't being sarcastic and now you confused me.
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #41 on: 01-19-2007 13:02 »

I think you confused yourself! XD
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #42 on: 01-19-2007 13:04 »

Whoo! Two pages!
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #43 on: 01-22-2007 14:08 »

What happens next? Read on to find out!

-*-*-

Sparrow ran down the corridor, swerving around corners and desperately trying to avoid crashing into the screaming people running in the opposite direction. Lizard had it easy; he was on the ceiling. But down on the ground the continuation of the fire bell had created a mass panic – it normally stopped after a few seconds, what if this time it was a real fire? Sparrow’s breathing was fast, sweat dripped from his head. He wiped his forehead on his sleeve, hurrying down the corridor. He tripped, falling flat on his face, but he scrambled back onto his feet and strived to catch up with Lizard, who hadn’t stopped or even slowed. With all the people around him he couldn’t tell where he was. He just followed Lizard through the endless corridors, round hundreds of turnings, not knowing where he was going or even which way was back. How did Lizard know where to go? What if he lost lizard? Sparrow grimaced and tried not to think what would happen. But it was always a lingering possibility… Sparrow looked up, concentrating on Lizard so he didn’t make a wrong turning. People were running, screaming all around him. He was looking up, instead of concentrating on where his feet were going. His feet didn’t have eyes; they didn’t know what was about to happen. He suddenly tripped n something on the floor and lurched forward, smashing his head against a low beam. Everything went black as Sparrow lost consciousness…

---

Sparrow awoke. There was a blurry figure leaning over him, which eventually swam into focus. It was a young woman.
   “Oh, good, you’re awake.” Came her voice. She spoke softly, and yet Sparrow could still hear her above the shouting, screaming, panicking people about them.
   “What―” Sparrow started to say.
   “Don’t,” said the woman, gently putting her index finger to his lips, “just stay still. You’ve hit your head pretty badly.” Sparrow reached his hand up to his head. It hurt, so he withdrew it. He could see a sticky red liquid coating his fingers; blood.

-*-*-

Yup. A new character.



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Decapodian

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« Reply #44 on: 01-25-2007 00:11 »

I like it!
Is Fry or Leela ever going to try to find their son?
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #45 on: 01-25-2007 13:36 »
« Last Edit on: 01-25-2007 13:36 »

Maybe in the next story, but not yet. This one's only about Sparrow.   smile And thanks!
NJ_Bella

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« Reply #46 on: 01-25-2007 14:00 »

i like the originality of the whole story. the names, diaglogue, everything. it's interesting and well written. thanks for helping me kill some time at work reading this!!
RobotDevilRox

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« Reply #47 on: 01-25-2007 14:02 »

Thanks, NJ_Bella, and no problem! Here's some more!

Semi-colons are always a good idea, but they can be a little addictive! See if you can spot all of them in this next part of the story…

-*-*-

Lizard hurried forward, all his senses concentrating on where the noise had originated. He was sure he could locate it – he had the general area of the ship, he just couldn’t pinpoint it yet. He paused to sniff the air; yes, he could definitely smell smoke. He raced ahead, not thinking about anything except finding the source of the smoke. He could hear people below him shouting and screaming, but he could spare no sympathy for them; he had to discover what was causing this mass panic. He had forgotten all about Sparrow by now, more concerned with what was going on around him. He kept going, determined, turning corners and dashing down corridors. He had obstacles to avoid of course, such as openings to air vents, but he dodged them without even having to slow his pace. He wasn’t, however, sure how he was going to get back to his quarters once he’d dealt with the problem. Everything looked different from the ceiling, and he wasn’t even sure he’d ever been to this part of the ship before, anyway. He hoped everything would sort itself out.
   He started to think about his home planet, back in the Galaxy of Terror. It was a long time ago since he’d last seen it… But he didn’t need them, or their stupid traditions! He’d got along fine without them. He was going to make his way up in the balance of power! He had the bottom… And was, admittedly, still there. Zapp Brannigan’s crew! He would have laughed at the very idea before. But this was just the beginning. He would get better jobs, and eventually he would be respected by all! He sighed and shook his head; that was a long way away, and right now he had to sort out the problem at hand. He started to concentrate on finding the smoke again. Corridors, corners, more corridors. He stopped and sniffed the air. He was definitely getting closer. Just a few more turnings! He hurried forward, going the opposite direction to everyone else, until he eventually reached…

A door.

-*-*-

And that’s all you’re getting for now!  evil laugh



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Decapodian

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« Reply #48 on: 01-26-2007 00:11 »

I could only count 2 semicolons
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #49 on: 01-26-2007 13:07 »
« Last Edit on: 01-26-2007 13:07 »

Really? Maybe it just seemed like more to me... XD

Or maybe it's because I use loads of semi-colons in other stuff I write.
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #50 on: 01-26-2007 14:16 »

Time to meet the new character!

-*-*-

Gabriella was a human woman. She had got up early, taken a shower, eaten her breakfast and had got ready to do her job in a really half-arsed way, just like every other day. Then the fire bell had gone off. She had ignored it at first; it often went off (rumour had it there was an Exterminon on the ship), but it always stopped after a few seconds. But this time it just carried on. She had started to worry then. She had stopped what she was doing and stuck her head out the door to see hundreds of people charging down the corridor. She had quickly snatched up her valuables and joined the stream of people outside. Eventually she had seen a man, fighting his way through the immense crowd, bang his head on a low ceiling bar and fall to the floor, unconscious. She had immediately realised he would get trampled by this stampede, and started shoving aside other people in order to help him. Everyone else was just skirting around him or even stepping over him. She had knelt down next to him and tried to wake him up. He had hurt his head, and now there was blood on his fingers.
   Suddenly he sat bold upright, and she jumped back.
   “Lizard!” he cried.
   “What?” she asked, “What are you on about? My name’s Gabriella, by the way.”
“I’m Sparrow. Lizard’s my friend, I was following him. You haven’t seen him, have you?”
   “Uh… What does he look like?” Gabriella inquired, confused.
   “He’s purple and he has a tail and no mouth, and he was on the ceiling.”
   “In these uniforms?”
   “Long story― Wait a minute! You’re a girl!”
   “Last time I checked…” said Gabriella, confused by this strange man.
   “Then that means… I’m in the female section of the ship! I’m not allowed here!” Lizard seemed very upset.
   “Who cares? Most men on this ship would love to come here.” Gabriella told him.
   “Ohh, what if Zapp Brannigan finds out?” he asked, worried.
   “That idiot?! What’s he gonna do?” she scoffed. Sparrow’s eyes suddenly narrowed.
   “Did you just insult Zapp Brannigan?” he asked coldly.

-*-*-

There you go. Enjoy.



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Decapodian

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« Reply #51 on: 01-27-2007 05:04 »

So far so good.
Is an Exterminon one of Lizard's people?
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #52 on: 01-27-2007 10:45 »

Yup.  big grin
Decapodian

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #53 on: 01-28-2007 02:41 »
« Last Edit on: 01-28-2007 02:41 »

Hmmmm...   The plot thickens.....

Also, could we have some pictures of Sparrow?
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #54 on: 01-28-2007 10:23 »

Yeah, I was gonna do a pic of him next, actually, but I forgot. Thanks for reminding me!
Decapodian

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #55 on: 01-28-2007 23:28 »

Id like to see what a son of Leela and Fry look like...
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #56 on: 01-29-2007 02:11 »

Yay,a update!  big grin

 
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Originally posted by RobotDevilRox:
“Did you just insult Zapp Brannigan?” he asked coldly.

ARGHH!I hate Sparrow only for this line!  mad
RobotDevilRox

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« Reply #57 on: 01-29-2007 13:10 »

 
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Originally posted by Decapodian:
Id like to see what a son of Leela and Fry look like...

Actually, I've done a picture of him before, it wasn't very good though. It's here.

 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
Yay,a update!   big grin

 ARGHH!I hate Sparrow only for this line!   mad

XD
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #58 on: 01-30-2007 15:21 »

It wasn't that funny...  sleep
Why the hell did you use 'XD'  evil laugh
It's official.I get confused with smilies  eek
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #59 on: 01-30-2007 16:02 »

Is that why you use so many of them? XD
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #60 on: 01-30-2007 16:43 »

I didn't use them,my evil twin brother #17 did!.
Bender_the_Grea

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #61 on: 01-31-2007 03:17 »

Hi peoples, anywho not to sound like a nub for interducing my self in the wrong section i want to say this, nice story. It inspired me to write one of my own.  If i do I will post it up... so again hi and nice story.
Decapodian

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #62 on: 01-31-2007 03:56 »

It's always good to have a new PEEler on the team.
So many new PEElers are joining!
They must be breeding like rabbits!
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #63 on: 01-31-2007 13:07 »
« Last Edit on: 01-31-2007 13:07 »

 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
I didn't use them,my evil twin brother #17 did!.

Suuuuuuuuuure!

 
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Originally posted by Bender_the_Grea:
Hi peoples, anywho not to sound like a nub for interducing my self in the wrong section i want to say this, nice story. It inspired me to write one of my own.  If i do I will post it up... so again hi and nice story.

Thanks, and good luck with your own story! I look forward to seeing it!
Bender_the_Grea

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #64 on: 02-01-2007 00:26 »

not sure what to write about... I have two ideas.  A square unit story(he's kinda like bender except he's boxy) and Kiff's child that has 1 eye(you know at the end of that one episode were Kiff got pregnant and one of them had 1 eye.)
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #65 on: 02-01-2007 13:07 »

Yeah, that'd be cool!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #66 on: 02-01-2007 17:00 »

Hmm,I need to update my own fic...

 
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Originally posted by RobotDevilRox:
Suuuuuuuuuure!

Hey,I do have evil twin brothers!
Bender_the_Grea

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #67 on: 02-01-2007 19:11 »

Ok I'm doing the one about kif's kid with 1 eye.
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #68 on: 02-02-2007 13:05 »

 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
 Hey,I do have evil twin brothers!

Okay, okay, I believe you. I just have evil brothers, no twins though.  tongue
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #69 on: 02-07-2007 16:11 »
« Last Edit on: 02-07-2007 16:11 »

Sorry for double posting.

Another new character! Yay for new characters and yes I will put up some pics soon!

-*-*-

Kayte cowered in the corner of her room, surrounded by fire on all sides. It was hard to breathe because of all the smoke, so she coughed and spluttered. She heard a sound come from the opposite end of the room and turned her head to see the door open. She stared; nobody had come in, and nobody was standing outside – unless… She looked up to the ceiling, and there was an Exterminon. But that’s impossible! she thought, All Exterminons hate fire! Except that one that was exiled. The Exterminon on the ceiling looked up – er, down – and she could see it’s face. It was male, and she thought she recognised him from somewhere, but she didn’t have time to think about that now.
   Help! She screamed in her head, not being able to speak herself because of the way the smoke was affecting her lungs, knowing that Exterminons could read thoughts. Help me! I’m trapped! The other’s gaze fixed upon her, and then he glanced around the room and spotted the fire extinguisher. She hadn’t been able to reach it but he could. She watched while he hesitated, then finally went and got it.
   I NEVER THOUGHT I’D HAVE TO DO THIS, came what must have been his voice in her head. What? she thought, confused. He closed his eyes and turned his head away, before using the fire extinguisher to put out the fire. She jumped as he suddenly came towards her, grabbed her hand and dragged her out of the room. He went back in afterwards, and she saw him get out a lighter and hold it to the smoke detector until the noise stopped. He came out of the room and stood next to her.
   WHAT IS AN EXTERMINON DOING IN A ROOM FULL OF FIRE? he asked her.
   I MIGHT ASK YOU THE SAME QUESTION, replied Kayte.
   I AM IN MY ELEMENT NEAR FIRE, BUT I DIDN’T KNOW THERE WAS ANOTHER OF MY KIND ON THIS GODDAMNED SHIP. He told her. Suddenly something clicked within her, and everything seemed to make sense to Kayte now.
   YOU’RE THE GUY THAT GOT EXILED! she realised.
   YES, BUT WHO ARE YOU AND WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE? he replied.
   MY NAME IS KAYTE. WE ARE THE ONLY TO EXTERMINONS NOT ON EXTERMINO RIGHT NOW. I AM HERE TO SPY ON HUMANS AND BRING BACK INFORMATION ON THE KIND OF WEAPONS THEY HAVE, she said.
   WELL YOU’RE CERTAINLY ON THE WRONG SHIP. THIS CAPTAIN IS COMPLETELY INCOMPETANT, said the other.
   AS I’VE DISCOVERED, agreed Kayte dryly. Suddenly the other Exterminon stopped, and his eyes widened.
   WHERE’S SPARROW?! he exclaimed.

-*-*-

I’ve put stuff like ‘he said to her’ because, although he isn’t actually saying anything, it sounds much better than ‘he thought to her’. XD



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Writer unit32

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« Reply #70 on: 02-07-2007 16:52 »

Hehe,Exterminons.I like the name but planet 'Extermino' sound a little weird.
Decapodian

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #71 on: 02-07-2007 19:35 »

The plot thickens...

What does Zapp look like now that hes middle aged?
PazuzuJr

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #72 on: 02-08-2007 12:35 »

^ha- that would be great to see^

Please make him bald and fat. er

need more story!
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #73 on: 02-08-2007 13:14 »

WU32: 'Extermino' is Latin for 'set fire to' or something like that. Found it on some Internet translator.  big grin

Decapodian: I'll start working on that, when he comes into the story!

Pazuzu: Bald and fat, got it. More story comin' right up.  tongue
PazuzuJr

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #74 on: 02-12-2007 13:05 »

Great! can't wait fat zapp. hehe
Decapodian

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #75 on: 02-14-2007 01:56 »

 
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Originally posted by PazuzuJr:
Great! can't wait fat zapp. hehe


He already is fat. And balding

Twilight is quite possibly the worst popular book ever written.
RobotDevilRox

Starship Captain
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« Reply #76 on: 02-14-2007 13:15 »

Ah, yes, Decapodian, but he's gonna be even more fat, and even more bald! And the little hair he has left will be grey!  evil laugh
PazuzuJr

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #77 on: 02-14-2007 13:40 »

Yay! PLEASE POST PICTURES!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #78 on: 02-14-2007 17:42 »

Hah,fat Zapp.
Decapodian

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #79 on: 02-14-2007 19:26 »
« Last Edit on: 02-16-2007 00:00 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by Writer unit32:
Hah,fat Zapp.

Correction FATTER Zapp

Hurray! Bottom of the the Page Dance!(BOTPD)

Twilight is quite possibly the worst popular book ever written.
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