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jle1993

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« on: 11-11-2006 16:56 »

Okay, I'm carrying on my other story, but I felt like doing something different. So heres a Amy/Fry fic.

Chapter One
“I’m sorry Fry, but I just don’t feel like that about you, and I don’t think I ever will,” apologized Leela, fleeing the opera house. Fry watched her run, and when she was gone he fell to his knees and cried.

“I’m sorry Amy, I know I said I had the whole week off but I have to go back,” apologized Kif nervously. Amy looked at the floor so as not to show Kif the pain she was feeling inside.
“Let me guess, the jackass needs you for something important,” she spat, hiding her agony with venom.
“I don’t want to go, I have to. If I don’t…”
“I know, you’ll get a court marshal. Just go Kif, don’t make this harder than it is.”
“I’ll miss you Amy,”
“Just go!”
Kif cast Amy a longing glance, before hurrying over to Zapp. Amy watched him go, and as he entered the Nimbus, she turned away. Loneliness swallowing her, she began to cry.

Fry felt the last of his tears fall, and he wiped his eyes with his tux sleeve. Slowly getting to his feet, he picked up his holophoner and stared at it. Pain and rejection was all that it represented now, yet Fry couldn’t bring himself to snap it. Sighing softly, Fry placed it in its case and closed his eyes, think how close he thought he had been to getting Leela, how much more Leela’s rejection had hurt tonight, after all he had done to show her how he felt and she still didn’t feel the same. With a crushing revelation, he realised she probably never would. Picking up the holophoner case, Fry slowly made his way out of the opera house, alone again.

Amy struggled to stop the stream of tears that insisted on falling from her eyes. She thought how much she loved Kif, and yet how lonely she felt every time he left early to get back to the Nimbus, how his career seemed to matter more to him than she did. Stubbornly wiping her eyes, she told herself not to be so silly, that of course she meant more to him than his job, just because he picked Zapp and the Nimbus over her every time, it didn’t mean anything. The tears came harder, ignoring her efforts to clear them.
“You okay Amy?” came a familiar voice from behind her. Amy span round, frantically wiping at her eyes.
“I’m…I’m fine thanks Fry,” stammered Amy.
“Don’t look like you’re okay, you’re crying,” said Fry gently, as he wiped a stray tear that had escaped from Amy’s eyes. Amy shivered under Fry’s fingers, taking in a shuddering breath. Fry noticed, his face flushed and he dropped his hand.
“Yeah well, Kif had to go back to the Nimbus,” she said, trying to keep her voice steady.
“I thought he had the week off! What happened this time?” asked Fry concernedly.
“What always happens? The jackass called him in again,” replied Amy, the tears welling up again. She looked away quickly so Fry wouldn’t see, “Where’s Leela?” she asked, changing the subject so she wouldn’t start crying again. She looked at Fry when he didn’t answer and saw that his face had blanched. “Fry, what’s wrong?”
“I don’t know where Leela is,” Fry said, his voice close to breaking.
“But I thought she stayed for the ending,”
“She did, and she stayed long enough to say she didn’t feel that way about me, and she never will,” explained Fry, his voice cracking under the emotion.
“Oh Fry, I’m so sorry!”
“So am I, goodnight Amy,” said Fry briskly, walking off in a desperate attempt to hide the tears straining to escape. Amy watched him go, fighting the urge to run after him.
“Goodnight Fry,” she called softly, but he was already gone.
coldangel

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« Reply #1 on: 11-11-2006 20:55 »

Oooh... I can see where this is going.
Apple Tea

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« Reply #2 on: 11-12-2006 01:05 »

so far all I can say is interesting....
x-number1fan-x

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« Reply #3 on: 11-12-2006 03:42 »

oo-er, its quite good actually [[hehe]] I like the story lines you come up with  big grin
jle1993

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« Reply #4 on: 11-12-2006 06:14 »

coldangel, can you? I have some tricks left before I become predictable yet
Apple Tea, it's gonna get more interesting by time I'm done
N1F, Thank you, I'm glad you like the story line. This ones gonna be hard because I prefer Leela/Fry over Amy/Fry so I'll have to fight natural urges
coldangel

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« Reply #5 on: 11-12-2006 06:30 »

It's obvious that Fry's gonna get kidnapped by a giant monkey and Zoidberg will have to sacrifice his life to save him. You can't pull the wool over my eyes - I see EVERYTHING.
Apple Tea

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« Reply #6 on: 11-12-2006 06:38 »

no no no you got it all wrong, Bender will make a pie with his special cooking skills and somehow the pie will be alive and talks and becomes his best friend.  Then Bender has to travel back in time for some reason...and he has to decide whether his friend lives or dies...(courtesy of Ron Howard in the Simpsons in case you didn't know...)
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #7 on: 11-12-2006 06:41 »

You're all wrong, this story is about being driven to deceit, and choosing who you love.
coldangel

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« Reply #8 on: 11-12-2006 06:44 »

So... no giant monkeys or talking pies?
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #9 on: 11-12-2006 06:46 »

No monkeys or talking pies, unless they take a road trip to Vegas
Writer unit32

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« Reply #10 on: 11-12-2006 07:41 »
« Last Edit on: 11-12-2006 07:41 »

     
Quote
Originally posted by jle1993:
No monkeys or talking pies, unless they take a road trip to Vegas

Did you see yesterday's Friends episode?
"C'mon this is Vegas,people'll pay to see freaky stuff!"

And also I know where it's going.Fry will find his hand twin(the person with hands looking just like Fry's) and they'll start a TV show.Then a war starts and Kif gets killed.With nothing left to live for Amy'll try to comit suicide, only to be stopped by Helper.The aliens are gonna attack Vegas where Fry and his hand twin Jouy are making they're show.While Leela sees Fry and Jouy sining they're theeme song
("This is my hand,
This is your hand,
Oh wait it's my hand!
Errr nop, both hands are yours" )
on TV and tries to rescue them, a large rivalry starts between Bender and Helper.In a fight they damage the PE ship.In the same time Amy flies to Amphibios 9 to get her children and it turnes out that the Amphibians are the ones that attack Earth.The war continues.After some adventures Amy sucrefise herself to save Fry,Leela,Jouy and Helper.After Bender by a goof(he doesnt tell that by a goof) destrojes Amphibios 9(and 7,5 and 8) they bury Kif and Amy together they save a bunch of Amphibiand and take care of Amy's/Leela's and Kif's kids.And then the giant pie comes and tries to kill the last Amphibians.They would kick the pie's ass but right after the war...
I downloaded this right from jle's brain.Unfortunetly she doesn't know what to do with the pie bit.

P.S. She used the same thing I did  to download my ideas coz I was gonna make a fic with a trip to Vegas and put it in my 'A fic inspired by lots of different shows' thread.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #11 on: 11-12-2006 09:27 »

Wrong again

Chapter two
Fry hurried along the street, chilled by the cold New New York air. His head was spinning, skipping between pain and disappointment caused by Leela, to confusion and a strange hope caused by Amy. He had no idea why his talk with Amy had left his heart pounding, but it had. He took a deep breath and shook his head, trying to clear his mind, but his thoughts kept coming back to Amy. The way she had been crying because Kif was going back to the Nimbus again and Fry felt a pang of disgust for the squishy green alien as he thought about it. Kif had a woman that men would kill for, and he was leaving her alone for his job! Every time he left her for his job, and she just put up with it. Fry realised that Amy was just like him in that sense, she kept waiting for the day she would come above Kif’s job, and Fry had been waiting for the day when he would be above Leela’s standards. Neither day would ever come thought Fry, a bitter regret seeping into his mind.
“Leela will never love me, I could keep trying until I die, but she’ll never love me. Amy will keep waiting for Kif to put her above his job, but that won’t happen either. We’re both trapped by love,” muttered Fry to himself, “I love Leela so I’ll keep trying, and Amy loves Kif so she’ll keep waiting, but either way we’ll both get hurt again,”
Sighing deeply, Fry carried on walking.

Amy took a slow walk across the parking lot towards her car, thinking about Kif and Fry, comparing them. Sure she loved Kif, but sometimes she couldn’t help wishing he showed her the same amount of devotion that Fry show to Leela. Even though Leela kept knocking Fry back, he was always there for her when she needed him, whether it clashed with his job or not. With Kif it was the other way round, Amy accepted him, yet he if his job clashed with her needs, the job always won. Amy had no idea why Leela kept rejecting Fry, she was lucky to have him. Wondering over to her car, Amy felt a pang of pity for Fry. He just kept on trying, no matter how often Leela rebuked him, and Amy had no idea how he managed it.
“Or maybe I do, Leela rejects Fry, Kif chooses his job over me, me and Fry are the same really,” speculated Amy wistfully. Getting into her hover car, Amy started to drive.

Driving slowly through the darkness of the New New York streets, Amy struggled to clear her mind of a certain redhead, particularly memories of when they had been dating. Amy had been happy, Fry was there for her and they’d had fun, but Amy couldn’t shake the feeling that the whole time they’d been dating, Fry had wished it had been Leela. Indeed, she had noticed the glance he had thrown at Leela when Amy had mentioned a picnic for just the two of them.
Shaking her head, Amy expelled the thoughts of when he had done something to her no other guy ever had, when he had dumped her. She dispelled memories of the humiliation and pain that she had hidden with indifference. It had hurt like hell, that she had been so happy and clueless and she hadn’t seen what was coming.  The funny thing was, Fry hadn’t even known how much he had hurt her, he was too busy getting rejected by Leela again.
Suddenly, Amy noticed a lonely figure walking along the street. Slowing the car down, she turned the headlights onto high beam and lighted up the figure. She rolled down her window and slowly approached.
“Hey Fry, what are you doing out?” she asked.
“Bender locked me out, he said I was an embarrassment to all meatbags and not to go back. Right now I’m trying to find somewhere to sleep,” explained Fry dejectedly.
“Spleese, things really aren’t going you way tonight! Where’re you going to go?” said Amy anxiously.
“I’ll probably find some soft garbage or something. Well, goodnight again Amy, I gotta get going or all the comfy spots will be taken,” sighed Fry, starting walk off. Amy took one look at Fry’s slouched posture and the defeated air that hung around him, and she couldn’t handle it.
“Wait Fry!” she called. Fry stopped and turned round, looking at Amy impatiently. “You could stay at mine until you get back on your feet, I have a pretty big couch you could sleep on…if you like,” explained Amy quickly. Fry’s features softened into a relived smile.
“Sure, thanks Amy,” said Fry, getting into the passenger side of the car.
“No problem Fry,” said Amy, driving off again.   
coldangel

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« Reply #12 on: 11-12-2006 10:19 »

Aww, Bender's a bastard.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #13 on: 11-12-2006 10:22 »

I'm sure Fry'll get over it  wink wink
Freela

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« Reply #14 on: 11-12-2006 10:29 »

I usually hate the Amy/Fry ship, but I like this story.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #15 on: 11-12-2006 10:51 »

I normally hate the Fry/Amy ship too, which is why this storys hard for me to write. But I do try.
x-number1fan-x

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« Reply #16 on: 11-12-2006 10:56 »

aww, its good i usually hate fry/amy ship asweel, but you seem to make em seem good!
jle1993

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« Reply #17 on: 11-12-2006 10:58 »

Only coz I can get inside their heads... big grin
Glad you like it, everyone that is.
Any cricisim welcome, that way I can try to improve.
Writer unit32

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« Reply #18 on: 11-12-2006 11:48 »

Very good jle, but wasn't Fry supposed to find his hand twin already?
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #19 on: 11-12-2006 12:51 »

NO TWINS!!! hehe, you can use it in your fic wink
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #20 on: 11-12-2006 13:56 »

More update, things are gonna get interesting here on in.

Chapter three
Fry and Amy drove in an awkward silence, each wanting to break it, but neither knowing what to say.
“Thanks for putting me up Amy,” said Fry quietly, not able to tolerate the oppressing quietness. Amy sighed, relieved that she hadn’t had to speak first.
“No problem Fry, but I can’t believe Bender chucked you out! That’s so mean, even for a robot.”
“Probably a good thing really,”
“Why’s that?”
“If I’d gone home I would have done the same thing I do every time Leela rejects me, I’d have drawn pictures and played my holophoner,” said Fry, blushing with embarrassment.
“Whoa, hold on a mo Fry! You draw things?” said Amy, her voice ringing with disbelief.
“Only when I’m really happy or really upset, or if I get bored,” explained Fry quietly.
“What sort of things do you draw?” questioned Amy, sounding interested.
“Well, I like doing portraits, but I’m not that good,” answered Fry, his voice going quieter and quieter, expecting the same sort of ridicule he had suffered from Bender. Instead Amy beamed, “That’s cool Fry, maybe you could draw mine sometime?”
Fry blushed harder, “I’m not that good at drawing, and I’m not that good at anything really,”
Amy pulled into her driveway and stopped sharply, and then she turned to Fry.
“Don’t ever say that!” she ordered.
“Say what?”
“That you’re not good at anything!”
“It’s the truth,” said a bewildered Fry.
“It’s a lie! You’re good at lots of things, like being a friend, and being there for people, and being forgiving and understanding!”
“Obviously that’s not good enough for Leela,” muttered Fry.
“Stuff Leela! No-ones good enough for her except guys who want to use her, she can’t love a decent guy like you because she can’t love herself. She’s in denial Fry, she’s going down and I refuse to see you get dragged down with her!” shouted Amy.
“I can’t help it, I have to keep trying!”
“Why?”
“I love her Amy! Okay, she’s the first person I saw when I came to the future, and the first person I really cared about!”
“But she doesn’t feel the same Fry, you can keep trying but you’re just going to get hurt!”
“I could say the same to you,”
“What?”
“You keep waiting for Kif to put you before his job, but it is not gonna happen! You’re gonna keep putting up with him because you love him, even though it hurts you inside to do it! It’s the same with me and Leela,”
“But I actually have Kif!”
“Do you really? Then where is he now? He’s on the Nimbus!”
“It’s his job!”
“He’s owed over a weeks leave, but he isn’t taking it is he!”
“He’ll get a court marshal!”
“You’re worth it!” yelled Fry, clapping a hand over his mouth as soon as the words left his lips. Amy opened and closed her mouth, completely speechless.
“I…I’m sorry Amy, I’ll leave now,” Fry murmured under his breath, reaching for the door handle.
“Did you mean it?” asked Amy slowly causing Fry to freeze.
“I…well the thing is…I…I…” Fry trailed off, not sure what to say.
“Did you mean it?” repeated Amy
“I…I…Yes,” stammered Fry nervously, “You’re worth a court marshal any day,”
Amy gazed into Fry’s eyes, completely entranced, and she leaned in slightly as did Fry. Then they kissed, a gentle heart stopping kiss to build dreams on. The whole world melted away around then. Amy closed her eyes, savouring the moment, feeling the heat of his kiss on her lips. Then it was gone, the illusion shattered as Fry pulled away, horrified.
“Fry, what’s wrong?” asked Amy concernedly.
“Everything! I…We shouldn’t have done that, its all wrong! You’re with Kif!”
Amy thought of Kif, the loneliness and pain he caused, and then of Fry, the warmth of his lips, the way he made her feel. She made up her mind.
“I don’t care,”
Writer unit32

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« Reply #21 on: 11-12-2006 14:30 »
« Last Edit on: 11-12-2006 14:30 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by jle1993:
NO TWINS!!! hehe, you can use it in your fic   wink

I will!I do it as a joke anyway.Well not really as a joke I just want to make it funny.
And the update...Dunno...It's good but, like Fry said-it's wrong.
Hey is Amy Fry's hand twin?  wink   tongue   laff
coldangel

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« Reply #22 on: 11-12-2006 14:31 »

Uh oh... I smell a jealous catfight on the horizon.  big grin
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #23 on: 11-12-2006 14:32 »

Now why would there be a catfight...I mean Leela 'said' she can't love Fry... wink
mookie427

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« Reply #24 on: 11-12-2006 14:39 »

This is shaping up to be really good!
coldangel

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« Reply #25 on: 11-12-2006 14:41 »

Leela says a lot of shit that ain't exactly true.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #26 on: 11-12-2006 14:58 »

Mookie, thank you, I wasn't so sure because I don't ship Amy/Fry, but I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Coldangel, Yeah but Amy ain't exactly gonna boast about kissing Fry when she's still with Kif
x-number1fan-x

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« Reply #27 on: 11-12-2006 15:03 »
« Last Edit on: 11-12-2006 15:03 »

oo-er! its good! i have been floating in limbo for the past hour so when i came round i decided to read a good fanfic, and this one hit the spot
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #28 on: 11-12-2006 15:04 »

Thankee big grin Glad you like it!
Apple Tea

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« Reply #29 on: 11-12-2006 16:30 »

Ooo nice going so far
Writer unit32

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« Reply #30 on: 11-12-2006 17:13 »

You know jle this is agreat fic but your wrong.Two wrongs don't make a right,two wrongs make one big wrong
Apple Tea

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« Reply #31 on: 11-12-2006 23:30 »

It's good despite the absence of the talking pie...
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #32 on: 11-13-2006 04:02 »

No pie, it'd be irrelovent to the story.

And the two wrongs are the ways that Amy and Fry have been treated by Kif and Leela, which leads to a 'right' Fry/Amy relationship...so something like that
Writer unit32

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« Reply #33 on: 11-13-2006 13:28 »
« Last Edit on: 11-13-2006 13:28 »

Ye right,you just don't want people to know about the pie.Face it jle,the pie is the only way to continue the fic after they find KIf's and Leela's/Amy's children.And it already took enough,Fry already should find his identical hand twin.
Also I tried to download your ideas from your brain again and I evem know that your gonna end it with Bender sinning:
"It only takes two heart attacks,
To finally make you see,
Coz only one wont do it all
But two will set you free"
And Fry and Jouy(the identical hand twin) sining theyre theeme song:
"This is my hand,
This is your hand,
Oh wait it's my hand,
Err no,both hands are yours."
You make such weird songs jle.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #34 on: 11-13-2006 13:29 »

Thats your brain, THERE IS NO PIE!!!!!!!!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #35 on: 11-13-2006 13:31 »

Sorry jle it turns out there's no pie...It's pizza!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #36 on: 11-13-2006 13:33 »

Give it up, you're wrong!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #37 on: 11-13-2006 14:00 »

No,I mean I'm making some kind opf pizza though I was trying to make pie
Albert 207

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« Reply #38 on: 11-13-2006 16:19 »
« Last Edit on: 11-13-2006 16:19 »

“Stuff Leela! No-ones good enough for her except guys who want to use her, she can’t love a decent guy like you because she can’t love herself. She’s in denial Fry, she’s going down and I refuse to see you get dragged down with her!” shouted Amy.
“I can’t help it, I have to keep trying!”
“Why?”

Stuff her!?
Wow Amy with her strong (and for some people bitchy) words makes the story very dramatic, angry and sorta new, I like it keep up the amazing work! Even though I don't like Fry/amy fic.
Writer unit32

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« Reply #39 on: 11-14-2006 02:53 »

Don't worry, Albert.Soon Fry'll find his identical hand twin and the ship will stop.And after the pie bit it'll be even Fry/Leela ship
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