Changes, a new fanfic by N1F.

[Reply #80 on:]

 

Originally posted by x-jeremy-x:
hiyar    mmmmmm funkay nd groovay! hehe

WOW!Since I found PEEL I knew that letters like u and r can be used like words like you and are, but 'nd'!Thats just crazily ingenious!And welcome to PEEL!

[Reply #81 on:]

Nice job! Can't wait for the rest

[Reply #82 on:]

I'm taking a break from this, but I'm open for ideas for the next section....

[Reply #83 on:]

these are really good but for the next section how about a twist . I know you have already put loads of twists in but how about a BIG twist 

[Reply #84 on:]

Lets see...hows about Zapp tells Leela that Fry used her and Zapp saved her. Due to the anesia, Leela beleives he and blanks Fry. Fry has to do something amazing to prove that Zapp is lying and that Fry loves Leela!...or something like that...

[Reply #85 on:]

Nop!I know I didn't do this a long time but I downloaded her ideas from her brain.It involves all Leela's ex-boyfriends.

[Reply #86 on:]

Lets wait and see

[Reply #87 on:]

I knew you'll say that jle.I almost predict the future.If I know atleast something about a person I can predict what he sais.When somebody attacks me I can start defending only hearing the first sound the attacker makes.I notice what other people don't.It's all because I'm...Well an ybody who took carth-ey or fan-siun(it's a not very famous kind of martial arts:roll-eyes: ) know this term.Unagy.Unagy is a state of ultimate avareness.You know I took lessons of carth-ey.

WU32:You know for some reason I got kicked out out off my class when I studied carth-ey.
WU32's evil twin brother number 53:Maybe it's coz you pronounce it 'carth-ey'.
WU32:I...
WU32's evil twin brother number 78:Your gonna say that you knew he was gonna say that.
WU32 : (suspeciously)You take fan-siun lessons don't you?(normally)They didn't even take me on those.
WU32's good twin brother number 14:Maybe it's coz you pronounce it 'fan-siun'...

[Reply #88 on:]

i was thinking about those ideas before you even said them (you guys are really spooky... :0)

[Reply #89 on:]

   

Originally posted by x-number1fan-x: (you guys are really spooky... :0)

Thx, it's what we do...

 

Originally posted by x-number1fan-x:
i was thinking about those ideas before you even said them 

Like I said, I downloaded it from your brain
Even if I didn't I would quess.I have Unagy.[WU32's good evil twin brother comes in]
AAAHH Danger![jumpes on brother]
Errr ye,like I said, Unagy

[Reply #90 on:]

IGNORE

[Reply #91 on:]

*sits with blank look on face*...okay now I'm scared...!

[Reply #92 on:]

WU32:Of what,Unagy?
WU32's evil twin brother number32:Maybe it's coz you pronounce it 'Unagy'

[Reply #93 on:]

IGNORE

[Reply #94 on:]

no... I'm scared of your brain... what am I thinking...?

[Reply #95 on:]

 

Originally posted by x-number1fan-x:
no... I'm scared of your brain... what am I thinking...?

Oh sorry,you propably have galusinations.It's a side effect of downloading thoughts.I had them once.I tryid to get rid of them using Unagy.

[Reply #96 on:]

Ahhh, Samon skin roll.

[Reply #97 on:]

 

Originally posted by LuvFry:
Ahhh, Samon skin roll.

You tried to teach someone the importance of Unagy didn't you?Or you just watch Friends

[Reply #98 on:]

hey number1_fan kwlio stories
i hope i see more of them and joel has reported me grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr to him and he said i dont make sense grrrrr b ut hope i read mor stowies
bibi
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[Reply #99 on:]

b ut if u maek mor cents peeple wont bee so angrie @ u!

[Reply #100 on:]

Saying u r wat now?

[Reply #101 on:]

yer lol brb

[Reply #102 on:]

hre s sayen tahha if hse mks mroe cents peeple like u wont e so adngryae @ he'rr's
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[Reply #103 on:]

Oh, I can't keep it up, it's making me feel dirty.

[Reply #104 on:]

I don't know what you're talking about... but i'm confuzzled 

[Reply #105 on:]

awwwwwwh number1_fan your making cold_angel feee l dutti hehe but  love the piccis

[Reply #106 on:]

People, please write proper english.. or at least try. Not all of us have English as a first language.

Secondly:

Chat talk = no-no
Spamming = Is not your friend.

[Reply #107 on:]

Exactly what I was saying Corvus... and how come your signiture works and mine doesn't?

[Reply #108 on:]

 

Originally posted by coldangel_1:
Exactly what I was saying Corvus... and how come your signiture works and mine doesn't?

Do you tick this box?

[Reply #109 on:]

Oh arse... okay. Thanks for that. I usually use quick reply, that's the problem.

Ha... there we go.

[Reply #110 on:]

hope you enjoy my next update (its a little bit jumbled, but it should be easy to understand...:


(5)

   As they heard the sound of the door creaking open, Fry and Leela separated and smiled wearily at the not-yet-opened-fully door.
“Oh hello Leela, how are you, we haven’t seen you in months!” said Morris.
“MOM! DAD!” exclaimed an awed Leela, stepping forward and hugging her parents one by one as they shared uneasy glances at one another.
“Erm, Leela honey, it hasn’t really been that long…” Munda said with a concerned expression lurking on her face.
“You see,” claimed Fry, starting to talk as fast as a cheetah running for its life, “Bender and Amy pushed me and Leela into a rogue suicide booth, then Leela had her head chopped off, and that’s when I started screaming, and this girl got scared and gave me her phone thingy, and I nearly held, but then said no to the hospital man, who said he was appalled with my childishness…ness, and then doctor Zoidberg said something about math… and…erm… this creepy girl scared me and was all sarcastic, so I ran down the corridor to find Leela after this brain operation thing, and she was all ‘Oh my god who are you?!’ so I figured she must have forgotten stuff, and she said she had never met you and we decided to come down to the sewer to see you, and then we kissed and then you wondered what was going on, so I said ‘You see…’”
Fry was cut off by Amy who said “Okay Fry we get it…”
Who was then cut off by Munda who said “So my baby can’t remember me!” and then burst into heartbreaking sobs.
“Oh mom…” starting to sing she added “I always thought you’d look just like me,
and I would sit on my Papa’s knee,
and you’d tell me stories and sing me songs,
and we would always get along,
I wanted a normal teenage life,
with my parents putting me though strife,
and now I found you and it is clear,
that that’s what would happen if I were here…”
“Wow Leela that was beau…”
“I’ve always been so insecure,
about my eye and my need for more,
love and cherish and hope and faith,
and love that I don’t have to chase,
I knew that you were always there,
when I needed you to heed and care,
and hug me love me till I do too,
‘cause I have to say that I love you…”
“Aww sweetheart that’s a lovely song. We love you too,” said her parents in unison.
“And so do I…!”
Gasps came from all around, as the entire populace of the sewer house stared in horror at the figure in the doorway, with a smirk on his rascally face, as the person staring Leela in the eye was Zapp Brannigan.

[Reply #111 on:]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHH
NONONONONONONOONONONONONNONON ONONONONO
YOU ARE EVIL, WHY THE HELL ZAPP
PLEASE HAVE MERCY, WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

*blushes* Good update, love Leela's little song, but please let Fry convince Leela that Zapp is a scumbag, or let Fry hit Zapp for being an a**h*le

[Reply #112 on:]

"...and hope and faith..."
Do you watch Hope and Faith?
Zapp doesn't stand a chance...It was stupid for him even to come!
Cool song!I had to practise my carth-ey not to go mushy.

[Reply #113 on:]

 

Originally posted by jle1993:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHH
NONONONONONONOONONONONONNONON ONONONONO
YOU ARE EVIL, WHY THE HELL ZAPP
PLEASE HAVE MERCY, WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

*blushes* Good update, love Leela's little song, but please let Fry convince Leela that Zapp is a scumbag, or let Fry hit Zapp for being an a**h*le

As I said Zapp doesn't stand a chance

[Reply #114 on:]

nah, i don't watch hope and faith, but i saw some of the episodes, and knew that someone would mention that line...

and i will find it in my cold heart to get zapp out of the picture... ooh i just had an idea... don't know how to gt to it though...

[Reply #115 on:]

Hm...yes, very interesting.

[Reply #116 on:]

Oh, not Zapp.... Grr

[Reply #117 on:]

noooooooooooooo please let fry and leela be together and let them rub it in zapp's face hes a mean ugly selfless.....no hes worse than that hes a big MEANI...but the story is good other than him ¬_¬ but i luv it

[Reply #118 on:]

No story can be good without Zapp.He isn't even something that doesn't let Fry and Leela be together,he'as more like a...He's not even the bad guy,he's just a idiotic jerk.Every show should have it's oun idiotic jerk.And idiotic jerks NEVER get the main girl of the show.Especially when they come like this.I only hope N1F knows that.I hate Zapp!

[Reply #119 on:]

I do, but you still have to wait for what comes next... i do have an idea, but i'm not sure its good, so if you have any suggestions please tell me them...