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Writer unit32

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« Reply #120 on: 11-16-2006 16:16 »

Zapp eats nut,nut's poison,Zapp dies
LuvFry

Bending Unit
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« Reply #121 on: 11-16-2006 22:11 »

Long version: confusion over who to believe, Fry or Zapp
Short version: Leela suddenly remembers Zapp and punches his lights out, to the amazement of the crew, memories come back in bits, yadda, yadda, yadda... happy ending
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #122 on: 11-17-2006 02:23 »
« Last Edit on: 11-17-2006 02:23 »

Long version:
(Star Wars music)
       Long ago,in a galaxy far away
        Changes
     Dart Veider uses The Force to
      destroy the Nibblonian army.
     Meanwhile on The Securesphere
   Frodo Bagins goes by the ring's
     will and kills Oby Van.Now in
       the darkest of times, who's
          side will the mysterious
         Half-blooded Prince take?

Short version:dǎ sì nǐ, fung cha gu lee, dǎ sì nǐ!

Even shorter version:Zapp eats nut,nut's poison,Zapp dies.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #123 on: 11-17-2006 12:05 »

Long version
Zapp tells Leela that he loves her and Fry used her
Everyone screams in objection
Zapp says everyone was in on Fry using her
Everyone screams in objection
Leela doen't know who to believe and runs off down the sewer.
Finds the letter she flushed that contains all of Fry's personal feelings for her
Relises that Zapp lied and that Fry loves her.
As she relises this, Zapp comes and kidnappes her.
Fry gives chase and beats the crap out of Zapp.
Then take your pick of shippy endings.
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #124 on: 11-19-2006 13:18 »

ooh, great ideas!


 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
Long version:
(Star Wars music)
Long ago,in a galaxy far away
Changes
Dart Veider uses The Force to
destroy the Nibblonian army.
Meanwhile on The Securesphere
Frodo Bagins goes by the ring's
will and kills Oby Van.Now in
the darkest of times, who's
side will the mysterious
Half-blooded Prince take?
Short version:dǎ sì nǐ, fung cha gu lee, dǎ sì nǐ!

Even shorter version: Zapp eats nut,nut's poison,Zapp dies

What. The. Hell...

PS, I will seriously consider the other ideas thank you vair muchly!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #125 on: 11-19-2006 14:16 »
« Last Edit on: 11-21-2006 00:00 »

Sorry I needed to post that... red face
I think the best idea is LuvFry's short version, but you need to make it a little longer.Maybe Leela'll come with Zapp(amnesia) for some reason(remember how Alcazar proposed) and the others'll give a chase and in the end Leela'll be the one who'll beat the crap out of Zapp because her memory'll be coming back in peaces.Of cource Fry'll be the hero too  wink
LuvFry

Bending Unit
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« Reply #126 on: 11-19-2006 21:48 »

I agree with Writerunit32, which means I am essentially agreeing with myself. I love how that worked out, because, heck, I love me!  wink

But seriously, I think what unit32 said about going with Zapp temporarily will give your story more mileage. Oooh! While she's with Zapp she could remember things like in a dream, all echoey and stuff, sketchy enough to have no idea what she remembering, or even if it is a memory.

Or you could ignore me altogther and come up with some brilliant plot twist that will leave us all breathless.

Whatever.  wink
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #127 on: 11-20-2006 02:21 »

Ye,what LuvFry said...
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #128 on: 11-20-2006 04:14 »

 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
Ye,what LuvFry said...

[scruffy] Second [/scruffy]

Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #129 on: 11-20-2006 10:55 »
« Last Edit on: 11-20-2006 10:55 »

[hermes]Very well ,I nominate the professor[/hermes]
x-jeremy-x

Crustacean
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« Reply #130 on: 11-20-2006 11:22 »

hi dude!like keep writing or there will be a very bad treat for you at school tomorrow probably worms for starter,maggots for main,eyeball stew for desert and poison for drink(only jokin` u know i love you really!)keep going!hehe!xxx
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #131 on: 11-20-2006 11:33 »
« Last Edit on: 11-20-2006 11:33 »

   
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Originally posted by x-jeremy-x:
hi dude!like keep writing or there will be a very bad treat for you at school tomorrow probably worms for starter,maggots for main,eyeball stew for desert and poison for drink(only jokin` u know i love you really!)keep going!hehe!xxx

Errr...Plain English,please?And about what you said:
[scruffy] Second [/scruffy]

I'll shut up now
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #132 on: 11-20-2006 11:37 »

I might keep on writing later, I'm still running ideas through my brain.
superfairy fan

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #133 on: 11-21-2006 07:15 »

keep on goin im sure it willbe good i will give you some ideas if you give me some of that kit-kat
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #134 on: 11-21-2006 10:58 »

Please don't take ideas from superfairyfan.Please,oh please,oh pleeaase!
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #135 on: 11-21-2006 11:51 »

don't worry, I won't... [her advice was to kill Leela off... for what reason? none]
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #136 on: 11-21-2006 11:55 »

AAARGH!!!Kill Leela?!When Fry got his biggest chance yet?!
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #137 on: 11-21-2006 12:21 »

exactl, which is why I am not taking her advice  wink
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #138 on: 11-21-2006 12:56 »

If you kill Leela, I swear I'll get out my steel toe caps, or I'll, I'll, I'll cry I will, Don't kill Leela, please!!!!!!!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #139 on: 11-21-2006 13:34 »

Still have the steel toe caps,Jle?Well I still have my collection os granades and Revaliutionary War weaponry!
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #140 on: 11-21-2006 14:54 »
« Last Edit on: 11-21-2006 14:54 »

OK... I'm staying well clear of you two...

PS, I'm bungled in homework, thats why I'm takin; so damn long   red face
x-jeremy-x

Crustacean
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« Reply #141 on: 11-22-2006 07:28 »

Aww well I have an idea for you...

  • special guest
  • Zapp dies
  • Leela dies
  • Fryh dies
  • Zoidberg marries Leela
  • Farnsworth marries Bender
  • Bender divorces Farnsworth, gets all his money, and leaves Farnswortn suicidal.


if you have any objections (and I mean ANYone) tell me.  big grin
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #142 on: 11-22-2006 11:18 »

Eeeer...Lets just kill Zapp with a nut!
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #143 on: 11-22-2006 16:04 »

Oh, I'm not going to kill Zapp just yet, he's a big part of the plot
monkey_nibble

Bending Unit
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« Reply #144 on: 11-22-2006 16:12 »

wow that's just unfair you can getlots of ideas for stories that will just come out of your head but I can't think of one little thing
x-number1fan-x

Starship Captain
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« Reply #145 on: 11-22-2006 16:40 »

Next update, kinda rushed cause I'm tired, but an update all the same...

(6)   

“What’s all the fuss about?” questioned Leela, as she looked curiously at Zapp.
He is the one person that you most certainly do not want anything to do with!” claimed Fry, a vein standing out on his temple.
“Really?” Not seeing what all the hoo-ha was about, Leela pondered over who she preferred, the blonde stallion that everyone else seemed to have a grudge against, or the red-headed sweetie, who had helped her find her parents… She thought… and couldn’t decide, so running into the old library down the lane, she curled up in a corner, to accomplish peace at mind.

   Calling to her best friend, Amy followed Leela into the library, and crossed her legs to sit down.
“Leela, you’ve got to tell me what’s up, you can’t just run out of your parents house and not even say goodbye! What’s wrong with you?!”
“Like you don’t know…”
“What's that supposed to mean?”
“Well, you saw it all, me and this whole amnesia thing, that red-haired guy, my parents, the blonde guy! I just don’t know what to do… What's going on…?”
After a half hours explanations of Zapp, Leela’s parents, and Fry, Amy stopped talking and waited for Leela's response.
“I still don’t know”
This statement caused the Martian to roll her eyes and ask Leela what she didn’t understand.
“Well, I like them both”
“Who both?”
“These Fry and Zapp guys…”
“Whoa there big girl… You like Zapp?”
“Well yeah, I think he’s cute…”
“You hate him! He’s a pompous ignoramus jerk!”
“He is… Well, I’m just going to have to figure that out all for myself… again.”
“What about Fry?”
“Well, he is sweet, but I don’t really know… it feels like I’ve been putting him on a reserve list…”
“Wait, you think you’ve been doing what with Fry?”
“It just feels in the air, that he’s the sort of guy that… well… I don’t deserve…”
“Aww, Leela that is NOT true!”
“Really?”
“Really. Now you sit right here and make up your little amnesia filled mind about what you want to do with you life.” Amy walked out of the building, and winked at Leela through the window, before muttering “Splu’h, of course, its her that Fry and Zapp like, I’m stuck with worked based Kif…
‘Who…who…who’ thought Leela, she didn’t understand any of this. Why did these sort of things always happen to her, being used, abandoned, amnesia for crying out loud! That’s when she had an idea, her first real one since she could remember… which wasn’t long.
At this, the full Planet Express crew, and Zapp, walked up to Leela, and pulled her up.
“I’ve got it” she said triumphantly.
They merely stared.
“Zapp…Fry… can the both of you date me?”
monkey_nibble

Bending Unit
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« Reply #146 on: 11-22-2006 16:43 »

n1f wow that is really long actually too lo ng to read all of it please can you come up with a plot for me tommorrow at school as I have sat here for half an hour doing nothing
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #147 on: 11-22-2006 16:44 »

Fry!She likes Fry!
monkey_nibble

Bending Unit
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« Reply #148 on: 11-22-2006 17:06 »

see what you have done number1fan leelas mind should never change .
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