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Author Topic: Crossing Over....a new story by KitKatBar-Fry  (Read 6376 times)
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Apple Tea

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« Reply #80 on: 11-12-2006 18:07 »

I thought they didn't have weapons
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #81 on: 11-12-2006 18:09 »

Yep. Look at my last post to see that.
coldangel

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« Reply #82 on: 11-12-2006 18:13 »

I thought they might take up arms further on.
Perhaps I am once again imposing my own warlike nature upon a world that has sought to divest itself of such barbaric affectations. I am a relic of a bygone era.
Hand-to-hand it is.
KitKatBar-Fry

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #83 on: 11-13-2006 06:35 »

Mmmhmmm. Claws, and fists of fury. I hope to see it soon.  big grin
FENIX

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« Reply #84 on: 11-13-2006 07:09 »
« Last Edit on: 11-13-2006 07:09 »

PHEW! Man that took a while to read but once I started I was gripped, truly an epic tale, you have a gift girl, it's originality is charming an somewhat insightfull, like a wise writing godess!

*Is in AWE and bows before KKBF*

  love
KitKatBar-Fry

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #85 on: 11-13-2006 07:14 »

Aw, thanks! I tried to make this story as insightful as I could. I mean, if mankind continues with its technology as it is, who's to say this realm of misery is not possible? Look what humans are doing to nature.

I truly thank you for that comment. I have put my sights in reading-reading and/or acting. I'm only 16, but I have high hopes.
FENIX

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« Reply #86 on: 11-13-2006 07:25 »

WHOA! All that from a SIXTEEN year old? You are truly gifted my friend.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #87 on: 11-13-2006 16:22 »

Thank-a-you. I plan on publishing something, someday-perhaps even this very story, only modified. (Longer) But it's strictly luck of the draw whether or not it is appreciated. roll eyes

Ta-da! Oooh, Jle's gonna love this update!

Chapter 15

The two parties ran at each other once again, creating a thunderous roar that rang across the clearing. Purple grass and multicolored weeds were smashed underneath paws, feet, and hooves. They collided again, crashing into each other like intertwining fingers. For a second time, the air was thick with electric tension, and the yells of dying beasts.

Vowls scooped up more enemies, but were also being cut down from the sky.  The Fackals, Yazzelles, and Lyenas were an equal match for the Fears, Feavers, and Kaguars, fighting valiantly despite their lack of a General to instruct them.

Every so often, the evil creatures would be caught in a situation where they didn’t know what to do, and Lauren’s team seemed to gain the upper hand. But just as suddenly, a group of the cackling maniacs would group together and take out all injured creatures, one by one, until the fight was once more anybody’s to win.

     A bundle of wounded Vowls shot down towards their foes, ready to pick them up. However, by this point in the fight, the malevolent creatures were beginning to wise up to the attacks. 3 Fackals and a Lyena waited patiently for the enormous birds to swoop down, and then sprung into action.

They grabbed onto the night creatures’ talons, pulling them back towards the ground. The Vowls flapped wildly, but once they were on the ground, escaping was but a miracle. Lauren watched in horror as her bird comrades were massacred, and decided she needed a new plan.

    “Vowls!” She called up to them. “Stay aloft! Do not come down until I tell you!”

She kept her nose pointed to the sky for a few moments before looking down. But when she did, a dark patch of brown flooded her view.

    “General, watch out!!!” She heard someone call out, before she was impaled.

     Todd saw it happen. He had watched as the Lyena snuck up on his friend, swerving in front of her at the last moment. But he had been too stupid to realize he should have called out.  And now, he stood staring as the fiend clawed into her back.

     “Hahaha! You hehe, killed our leader, now see how you heehee…see how you manage without one!” It sniggered, as it threw the blonde onto her stomach.

What do I do, what do I do? The boy cried silently inside his head. Drake, Caleb and Dreyfus, all were too far away to reach them in time. He could try to call out to them, but there were so many animals in the way, making such noise that it wouldn’t help.

 He took a good, long look at his claws for a moment, and remembered what he could use them for. What little beast was still inside of him gurgled, and thoughts of destruction rose into his mind.

 He could kill with these claws. But, no, they weren’t allowed to kill. At least do something! His mind roared at him. You haven’t taken out a single enemy this whole time! Help her! The teen looked sadly at his friend. To his surprise, she looked back at him as the Lyena prepared to gauge her with his nails.

     “Help…Todd.”

A thin line of blood trickled down her back as the spotted dog toyed with her, sending out two light swipes when it could have easily killed her. Todd felt a growl bubble up inside his throat before he even had time to realize what he was doing.

   He leapt upon the attacking beast as it brought its paw down, inches from the girl’s back. It let out a high-pitched whine as he slammed it to the ground, mouth foaming in fury. Lyena fur filled his mouth as he bit the scruff of the creature’s neck.

 Using a quick movement of his jaws, the boy flung it across the purple field, sending it barreling into a pack of Yazzelles. The enemy squealed as it saw the horns and ran off, its tail between its legs.

Todd panted angrily, then remembered his comrade. He bent down and picked the blonde up gently, setting her on her feet. She smiled whole-heartedly at him.

      “Hey, Lauren? He rasped in a deep voice. “Are you...mpphh!”

His words were cut short as Lauren grabbed his shoulders and pressed her lips against his furry mouth. It wasn’t him saving her this time that truly caused her to do it, but the emotions that had been pent up inside her for so long.

 The rescue only helped to open the gate. At that moment, she didn’t care about the battle that was raging on around them. She didn’t care that Todd wasn’t in his true human form. All that mattered was that she was with him.

His mind was racing as he closed his eyes and kissed back, unsure of what exactly was
happening. All he knew was that he was enjoying it. A lot.

    Lauren pulled back from him, smiling.
    “Gee, Lauren, I um, .. I, ...” he blushed and stuttered, too ecstatic and confused to think clearly. A goofy grin spread across his animal face.

She put a finger to her mouth, silencing him.

    “We have to keep fighting.” She said calmly.
The girl gave him a quick hug, and winked.

    “Do you think you could be of a bit more assistance this time?” She asked.

Of course he did.


he climactic shippy. I've been building up to this moment for practically the whole story.  big grin
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #88 on: 11-13-2006 20:08 »
« Last Edit on: 11-13-2006 20:08 »

Sorry to double post, but I am as happy as a clam right now, eh!
  big grin  big grin  big grin
Umm, my family is kind of, well, wealthy, sortof, and today, just over an hour ago....
I got this story copyrighted!
Woot! (My parents did it for me, of course)
So (I'm not saying you guys would, hell no) if any theives or whatever pop into this thread to try and steal the idea-they can't!
 I'm not even sure any publishers would be willing to publish it. I'm going to have to edit the story someday. And it really shouldn't be such a big deal. After all, all it means is that no one can take the names. But it really feels great to know that no one can steal my work.
Crossing Over©
Vowl-©
Tox-©
Fackal-©
Feaver-
Frocodilian-©
Yazzelle-©
Fear-©
Lyena-©
Kaguar-©
coldangel

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« Reply #89 on: 11-13-2006 23:23 »

How much did that cost just BTW?
Apple Tea

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« Reply #90 on: 11-13-2006 23:33 »
« Last Edit on: 11-13-2006 23:33 »

Nice...
Hm...your parents are rich eh?  Suddenly I consider you to be my best friend!
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #91 on: 11-14-2006 06:45 »
« Last Edit on: 11-14-2006 06:45 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by coldangel_1:
How much did that cost just BTW?

My parents wouldn't tell me that. I'll see if I can get back to you on that.
It's kind of silly, really. I actually asked them how much it cost, and they said it was none of my buisness. I got the rights to do that not because I'm spoiled-but because I reached my goal of saving 2000 dollars in my bank account.

(Babysitting, etc.) It took me a long time to do that, but my folks said that as a reward I could pick something that wasn't ridiculous. (Like a Golden Pony   laff ) And I thought of you guys.....and how much I wanted to keep my story safe.
 
But they never told me exactly what it cost. However, I'm pretty sure they said something like 80 cents a page. And if my story is right now about 100 pages in size 14 font  that's....
roughly 48.00. About.  I'm not 100% sure though, but that's about what it would be.

 How much did it cost for you to get your book copyrighted? Maybe I'll get a better understanding....
coldangel

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« Reply #92 on: 11-14-2006 08:21 »

Well I'm from Australia. I dunno where you hail from, but I've got a book on Australian copyright laws for writers and illustrators, and the first page states:
When you write a story - or a letter or a shopping list, or sketch a scene from a dream - you automatically create intellectual property called copyright. Once it exists in material form, the law protects it, giving you the exclusive right to control and benefit from it...

-'Between the Lines - A Legal Guide for Writers and Illustrators'. Spender, L. 2004


...Now, I have really only skimmed through it, but I can't see any reference to any requirement for registration of material. It seems that if you did it, it's yours... I dunno... may need to look into it further, and as I said it may be different abroad.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #93 on: 11-14-2006 08:40 »
« Last Edit on: 11-14-2006 08:40 »

I'm not sure exactly how my parents did it, either. But I do remember them saying that the cost of copyright was about 80 cents a page. That's all I know.   big grin

BTW, I'll have more of my story posted by this afternoon-I would do it now but I'm in a rush to get to school and I don't have time to space evrything out.

Also, was the emotional part of my last update good? I was wondering if it was too sappy....
coldangel

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« Reply #94 on: 11-14-2006 08:53 »

Oh yeah, very nifty  big grin.

80 cents a page... my novel is 334 pages long... that's... maths...

"I need a calculator!"
"You are a calculator."
"I mean a good calculator."

I can't be bothered adding that up. It's probably different here anyway... even if there is a charge, those are... what, American cents? Are you from America?

Also, you do want Todd in animal form when I draw the pic, right?
x-number1fan-x

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« Reply #95 on: 11-14-2006 11:58 »

$267.20... I think...
jle1993

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« Reply #96 on: 11-14-2006 12:43 »

sorry I took so long but...
YIPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEE
Lauren and Todd
Sitting in a tree
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love
Then comes marriage
Then comes baby
In the baby carriage

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY
I love this story
I LOVE this story
And know something special as a thanks, a poem that ment to be from Lauren's POV, its not that good, but its my thanks.

Don't know what to do,
I don't know this guy no more,
This ones sorta new,
Olds gone out the door,

He like a child at times,
Makes me wanna scream,
Gonna keep trying though,
Now he's on our team,

Thought I was a goner,
Then he came to save me,
Feeling something strange now,
Whatever could it be?

Feeling something strange,
Haven't felt like this before,
Can't feel like this now,
We're in the middle of a war,

Gotta keep fighting,
Ignore what's in my heart,
Gonna keep on going,
But its tearing me apart,

He had to save me again,
I'm glad that he did,
Now I get to show him,
The feelings that I hid,

A single kiss,
In short time,
He's forms a bit strange,
No reason or rhyme,

Don't care about that,
Make the most of the time,
Sure we're in a war,
But together we'll be fine.
x-number1fan-x

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« Reply #97 on: 11-14-2006 12:54 »

the storys great, and oo-er the poems quite gurd!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #98 on: 11-14-2006 12:55 »

Not as good as the story, just my little tribute
KitKatBar-Fry

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #99 on: 11-14-2006 18:00 »
« Last Edit on: 11-14-2006 18:00 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by coldangel_1:
Oh yeah, very nifty    big grin.
those are... what, American cents? Are you from America?

Also, you do want Todd in animal form when I draw the pic, right?

About...370.00, I think. And no, I'm not American-why do you think I say eh, eh? I'm Canadian, WOOT!
Oh, and yes, Todd should be an animal please and thankies.

@jle: Aw, dudette, I love you. That poem was so great-exactly what I wanted the reader to think of Lauren. It is also emotional, yes. That kiss is going to haunt me someday, I know it...  wink


@x-1-x: Thanks, buddy. I try.
Apple Tea

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« Reply #100 on: 11-14-2006 18:15 »

Canadian eh? The land of moose and other stuff...I know virtually nothing about Canada despite having it as our neighbor...

Anyways, you say you have about 48 pages typed up?  does that mean you've already finished the story?
coldangel

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« Reply #101 on: 11-14-2006 20:01 »

Canadians are cool.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #102 on: 11-14-2006 21:09 »

@ coldangel: Yes, we are.  wink
@Apple Tea: No, not 48 pages. $48.00. It's about 100 pages size 14 font now. (On my computor, anyways.)
Aye carumba, I forgot the update! Well, here it is:

 The half-man raced back towards the screams and cries of the unseen. Something, he felt suddenly, was not right. A suspicion that he had left something undone, something important, crept into his mind. He felt a presence behind his head, and turned to face:

    “Trof?” Todd whispered.

No, no. This couldn’t be him. It shouldn’t have been him, he was dead. The teen had left him for dead! But the demon was not unhurt. Blood matted his fur, making it sticky and a deep red color.

Along his broad chest puncture wounds thrust themselves outward, showing the world that he had survived the fall. Some even stopped what they were doing and stared right at him.

    “It’s Trof!” They yelled. “He’ll save us!”
The beast growled at each of them, carefully dodging any animal that happened to get in his way. He was gray, he was solemn.

And he did not come for a good reason.

    “That’s impossible!” Todd cried out in fear. “He was dead-I saw him fall!”

He turned to face Trof completely. No matter what, he would not allow this fiend to hurt any of his friends anymore. The Tox-man was not scared of the being that was confronting him now. No, he was angry, oppressed. He had beaten this enemy, fair and square. And now it was coming back to get him.

    “I am not dead! “ Trof answered. “I am far from dead. The potion, the miracle drink that you humans have created has helped me to survive!” He held up Drake’s pouch for all to see, and the fighting ceased. A hundred pairs of eyes rested on the Frocodilian.

 “I am hurt, yes, but alive. See what you have done, HAHA!”

The reptilian gassed one last Fackal, and turned around.

    “He got hold of my cosmetics bag.” He whispered.

     “Cosmetics?” Todd asked, barely stifling a laugh.
     “Yes, C.O.S.M.E.T.I.C.S-Chemistry, Odor, Solutions, Materials, Experimental, Tristructualar, Igneous, Criteria Storage bag. I hold all of my most precious works in progress in that bag, including a very dangerous solution that I have been working on for quite some while now. Originally it was supposed to make animals tamer, less hostile. But, due to a lack of proper ingredients, I could only come up with a rather cheap liquid. My predictions stated that it would not make the beasts calmer, but more irrational and strengthened. I am afraid that many of the things stored in that sack or dangerous, untested, not to be used. It was being tested at the moment, so I kept it in that bag. And now this creature has gotten hold of it.”

This was not good news to the Peace Officers. Trof could do virtually anything to the army now; kill them, take them hostage. They were under his prowess.

     “I do not care to hear about how I was created!” The demon raged. “I have come to end it all! I am wounded, almost unable to fight. So I will beat you with my only other option.”

He pulled out a silver, bullet-shaped object from the pouch. “With this.”

     “NO!” Drake screamed at him. “Do not touch that! Read the label, idiot!”

Warning: Explosive. Do Not Drop! It read.

      “I know what it is for!” Trof
snarled. “And if I cannot kill you with my own paws or army, I shall kill you with this!”

He stretched out his furry arm, and with strength no other could match, heaved the device at the ground.


Too be continued...
coldangel

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« Reply #103 on: 11-14-2006 21:18 »

Sweet mother of Odin...
Apple Tea

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« Reply #104 on: 11-14-2006 22:08 »

Great feast of Valhalla!  What happens next??!?!?
coldangel

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« Reply #105 on: 11-15-2006 04:26 »
« Last Edit on: 11-15-2006 04:26 by coldangel_1 »



I ran out of talent halfway through, but with some creative smudging I think it passes beneath notice.
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #106 on: 11-15-2006 07:22 »

@Apple Tea: The suspence really shows there, eh?  wink

@coldangel: I love it man! I especially like how Lauren and Todd turned out. The girl looks especially like I thought she would.  smile And Todd's a bit more humanoid then I imagined, but that doesn't stop it from being the greatest 'doodle' I have ever seen!
Ah, yes the smudging. It did add nicely, didn't it? Although that big gray thing in the distance (Trof?) Looks kinda odd.
But me love it to bits!  big grin big grin
coldangel

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« Reply #107 on: 11-15-2006 07:31 »

Working A4 is always a bit of a problem for me when multiple figures are called for. I can't draw figures smaller than a certain size because detail becomes muddled and it turns into a right royal mess.
Converesly when I draw at my normal size (and on this size paper) too many entities turns it into a cunfusing cluttered mish-mash. That's why I haven't really done much of the enemy there. It'd just make things confusing in that constrained area and detract from the main protagonists.
I wish I had an A3 scanner.... although I'm not even sure such a thing exists.
Corvus

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« Reply #108 on: 11-15-2006 07:55 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by coldangel_1:
I wish I had an A3 scanner.... although I'm not even sure such a thing exists.

There is... A Canon A3 Scanner.

"Finding your true love is like winning the lottery, it always happens to someone else."
coldangel

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« Reply #109 on: 11-15-2006 10:43 »

Interesting... looks expensive. I suppose it would be though. Hmmm. This is something I might consider investing in, probably around the end of this financial year.
I do cartoons (simpler, funnier ones than my usual) for a few augmentitive communication agencies for use as training aids for people with intellectual disibilities. It's kind of an offshoot of my work in the field of Disibility Support. So perhaps it could be a tax deduction...
As it stands right now I'm nearly broke and I gotta somehow pull enough out of my arse to cover Christmas. The filthy amoral scum-sucking police took away my driver's licence and made me unable to work for three months. Everyone who carries a badge is now my mortal enemy.

PS - I'm sorry KitKatBar, this is the wrong place for it.    cool  We'll stop.
jle1993

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« Reply #110 on: 11-15-2006 13:24 »

Sweet Hell Fire!!!! That was an unexpected twist, loving it Kitkat, can't get enough of it!

ps, glad you liked the poem  wink
Apple Tea

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« Reply #111 on: 11-15-2006 15:01 »

@coldangel: Very nice pic sensei!
jle1993

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« Reply #112 on: 11-15-2006 15:10 »

Which reminds me, nice pic Coldangel, very good.
KitKatBar-Fry

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #113 on: 11-15-2006 16:21 »

@coldangel: Thanks for apologizing-no harm done. Eh, no problem bud. The picture is beyond Godly now anyways.  :)I swear to the Holy Lord, if I ever get the book published, I shall write something about all of you, and of your support and illustrations.
Speaking of which, I know you're probably busy, but do you think you could draw a normal Todd and Drake? No problem if you can't but it would be really interesting for me to see how you would draw them in your own style, as I have already seen Lauren and Kit.
Thankies!

@jle: Yes, m'am, I love that poem. Glad you like the suspence too, eh. Which gives me an idea-
Just to make you hurt, I think I'm going to wait 'till tomorrow to pull the surprise twist outta my ass.  wink  evil laugh
coldangel

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« Reply #114 on: 11-15-2006 22:11 »

Todd in human form and Drake... he's the crocodile dude right?
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #115 on: 11-15-2006 23:08 »

Yuppers.
coldangel

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« Reply #116 on: 11-15-2006 23:21 »

And what do you want them doing?
jle1993

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« Reply #117 on: 11-16-2006 05:13 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by KitKatBar-Fry:
@jle: Yes, m'am, I love that poem. Glad you like the suspence too, eh. Which gives me an idea-
Just to make you hurt, I think I'm going to wait 'till tomorrow to pull the surprise twist outta my ass.   wink   evil laugh

Awwwwwwwwwwww man!! Thats meany


This message was brought to you by the mistress, bow down and be grateful
KitKatBar-Fry

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« Reply #118 on: 11-16-2006 07:27 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by coldangel_1:
And what do you want them doing?

Anything. Fighting, talking, standing around. Use that imaginative brain of yours, and I know you'll come up with an excellant picture.  smile

Here's the update:

Chapter 16


The metal object flew at the dirt, but did not explode.

       “WHAT?!?” Trof raged, demanding to know why there was no fire.

But when he looked at the ground, he knew. He understood.

There, underneath the metal, lay Artimus.
His puffy chest had deflected the blow, creating a soft enough landing for the object not to explode.

But he hadn’t meant to.

      “Stupid dead carcass!” The Tox leader bellowed, kicking at the body. An unmoving, bloody body.

     “Don’t kick our friend like that!” Todd yelled, reeling from the sight of the body.

     “What? You mean this pile of rags right here?” Trof taunted, shoving it across the ground.

HHHHHHHRRRROOOOOAAARRRRR!!!!!!!

The teen raged, this time bonding with his animal power. He ran straight at the monster, trying to pin him to the ground before it had the chance to throw the device yet again. The two super-humans snarled at each other, pulling their lips up to reveal glistening fangs. Paws were a blur, and mouth and arms moved faster than lightning.

      “Run away! He’ll kill us all!” Screamed the enemy, and began to stampede back towards their pod.

 Lauren too knew that they had to leave, and quickly. The ship was too far away; it would take too long to reach it. Her eyes danced over each rock, each pebble, searching for an answer.
 
      “GRRAAH! I will not let you escape, humans!” Trof screamed, flinging Todd of off his body. The boy uttered a short yelp, and fell to the ground.

      “Vowls! Come down!” Lauren yelled on impulse. “Help us!”

The demon Tox lifted the prize high above his head, chuckling in malice.
 
      “See here! I have the very object that could-Hey!” He cried out as a feathers talon reached out and snatched the metal from his paw.  “Give that back to me you turkey, or I will destroy you!”

Trof leaped up as the Vowl pumped its wings, trying to get airborne. He clawed at the scaled leg, trying to reach the metal object. But the bird flapped on, not about to let go of such a precious item easily.
 
      “I’m getting very annoyed with you humans!”

 He bit his claws into the Vowl’s leg, attaching himself right to it. The winged creature bellowed in pain, and unable to keep flying, began to plunge towards the ground.

       “Vowls!” Lauren commanded. “Come right to the ground-we can't stay here for long!"

The raptors spiraled down, hovering near the animals in an attempt to help them out. A tumble of wings and claws fell below them, nearly hitting the ground. A loud shriek was heard, and quite suddenly, it was only Trof who grasped the metal device, and only he who moved.

Stretching out his legs to absorb the impact when he hit the ground, the fiend was an easy target for Todd, who was still standing on the ground. The teen leaped upwards, determined not to let his friends die.

    The two thrashing mutants collided again as creatures below them were picked up by Vowls who soared overhead. At the instructions of their leader, the birds also picked up the fallen figure of Artimus.

       “Give me the device! You humans are better off dead anyways!” Trof growled.

Todd did not reply, but instead punched the monster in the chest, straight into a long wound that ran across it. The beast screamed in pain and fury, and swiped at the teen’s head.

   He yelped, unable to bear the pain of his wounds anymore. His eyes fluttered shut, begging to allow him a few moments’ rest.

         “TODD!” A female voice screamed, and his mind snapped back into action.

The girl stood on a large Vowl’s back, using only her outstretched arms to balance on the unsteady floor. With a wild, desperate wave of her arm, she snatched the boy in her arms, teetering uneasily by the impact. The two teens fell, head over heels, as Todd’s enormous weight could not be supported.
 
         “Die, human filth!” The mad Tox screamed. “Die alongside me!”

The two parties dropped silently through the air, hearing only the wind howling in their ears. The Tox leader hit the ground first, and the yells of the beasts, the cries of terror were swallowed up, into oblivion.

 Fire erupted from the Earth below, sending out a blast of heat none had ever seen or felt before. It seemed as though the entire Earth trembled and shook as the tremor threatened to skin them alive. Todd faintly saw a flash of talon and blonde hair before plunging into the explosion.

To be continued....
coldangel

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« Reply #119 on: 11-16-2006 08:26 »

Oooh!
Fires from the Earth below!
They have to toss the One Ring into the fires.
...no, wrong saga.
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