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Author Topic: Everything for her (Fanfic)  (Read 8522 times)
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jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #240 on: 10-19-2006 05:17 »

Ahhh, so no-one is going to linch me for the second case. Good good, glad you all like it big grin
Cyberphobia

Bending Unit
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« Reply #241 on: 10-19-2006 07:16 »

LOL!!! Good chapter!

"Sticks and stone may break my bones,
but whips and chains excite me!"

ROFLMAO!
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #242 on: 10-19-2006 07:58 »

WOO IM SO COOL!!!!!!!
yay a space prison
i suggested a prison!!!
YAY!

  big grin
LuvFry

Bending Unit
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« Reply #243 on: 10-19-2006 15:43 »

I was afraid to read your last installment, but I made it through. Hilarious stuff!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #244 on: 10-20-2006 05:49 »

Glad you liked it. Why were you afraid to read it in the first place?
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #245 on: 10-20-2006 05:57 »

got any updates for us jle?
its ok if you don't anytime soon, just wondering though
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #246 on: 10-20-2006 06:01 »

I'll write some more soon. I was going to yesterday but I went to the thetre instead and I'm not sure if I'll have time to write more today. I'll try though.
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #247 on: 10-20-2006 06:30 »
« Last Edit on: 10-20-2006 06:30 »

lol it just so happens that i was playing the game that had the weird prison i was talking about in it.

on topic
i'm looking forward to the next update, everyone says the longer you think the better the fic gets
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #248 on: 10-20-2006 06:31 »

I'm going to do another shippy bit before the prison bit, if that would please everyone
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #249 on: 10-20-2006 07:45 »

I managed an update, and I'm proud of this one.

Part three

Leela allowed Fry to pull her out of the hotel, enjoying the feel of his hand holding hers. A smirk pulled at her mouth, his hand wasn’t all she enjoyed.
“So where is this Space Prison then?” asked Fry, breaking into Leela reverie.
“Err, the tourist guide said it’s a mile or two down the beach,” answered Leela carefully, remembering Fry’s aversion to exercise. Once again, Fry surprised her.
“Cool, why don’t we have a slow walk down and enjoy the scenery, if you want to that is,” enthused Fry.
“That sounds nice. Can I ask you question Fry?” said Leela turning serious.
“Anything,” replied Fry.
“Why do you love me?”  Leela questioned.
Fry thought carefully, “I don’t know...”
“Oh,”
“Its like you’re beautiful and you saved my life more times then I can count, but it’s more than that. When I’m near you I feel…complete. Like no matter where I am, I’m where I’m meant to be as long as I’m by your side. When I hold your hand I feel so many emotions it scares me. Sometimes I feel afraid, afraid that if I let go then you’ll leave me. Sometimes I’m angry at the way you’ve been treated and the life you’ve had, and I promise myself I’ll never do anything to upset you or hurt you, because I’d rather die that see you hurt again. I get excited at the thought of us together, and raising our baby together and it’s like all my dreams have come true at once. When you smile it lights up my life, and I want to be the one making you smile. I feel so many different things when I’m near you and I’ve never felt anything like this before, but now I’ve started feeling this it feels so great and I don’t wanna lose this feeling. You’re the meaning in my life, you’re the inspiration, you are everything that I ever have and ever will need. I guess, that’s why I love you, you make me feel something I never felt before and if you left me I’d never feel it again. I love you, I love everything about you. I love the way your eye sparks when you’re angry or sparkles when you’re happy. I love the way your mouth can curve into a smile or a smirk, and the way your hair falls over your shoulders when it’s down or seems so controlled when you put it up. I love the way you seem so innocent when you’re asleep, and how you’re always in control when you’re awake. I love so many things about you, I love you. I think in some way I always have, and I always will.”

Tears pricked the back of Leela’s eye, she had known that Fry loved her, but she couldn’t have begun to guess the depth of his feelings.
“That’s the most romantic thing anyone has ever said to me,” she murmured.
“I meant every word of it. Now I’m asking you the same question, why do you, a wonderful goddess of a woman, love a plain guy like me?”
“You never gave up on me. You did amazing things for me and I pushed you away, but you never gave up. I think I’ve always loved you, but I’ve been hiding behind a wall of denial and hurt that’s built up over the years of loneliness and hurt. I stopped feeling, stopped trying to find someone who would make me happy, because I though no-one could love me. That’s all I ever wanted, you know, just someone to love me and tell me that they care, and actually mean it. I hid behind my wall and forgot to add a door. You took a sledgehammer to it and forced me to feel again. Every time I look at you I have a rush of emotions that I never knew existed, and at first I was scared. I didn’t know what the feelings were or why they were so strong. I got scared, I thought that if I told you how I feel then you’d leave me alone, and I’d be hurt again but you kept trying so hard, and I was so confused. Then you ran away to DOOP, and I thought that you were dead and I’d never given us a chance. My heart shattered at the idea of never seeing you again, I couldn’t take it. When I saw you on TV I was so relived, and I had a second chance. I tried telling you, but you didn’t believe me, and then I realised what I’d been doing to you all this time. I’d been hurting you. Now we’re together I don’t ever want to hurt you again, I just want to be with you, and hear you say you love me and be able to tell you that I feel the same, and I want to know that you’ll always be there for me and I’ll be there for you. You’re my rock Fry, you’re the one I cling to, the one I love, and always have, and always will. I love you because you showed me what love is, and you showed me how to feel it. You never gave up hope, and you kept trying. You make me complete, the touch of your hand on mine, the scent of your hair when your sleeping next to me, the way you always know just what to say when I’m upset, how you can make me happy with a single glance, how you calm me when I’m angry, the way you defend me and love me. I don’t want to lose any of that, I love you and if you left I’d never love again. Please don’t leave me Fry,”
“I’d never leave you, ever. I promise you Leela, I will always be with you, now and forever. I love you,” promised Fry
“I love you too,” whispered Leela, tears falling from her eye.
“If those aren’t tears of happiness then please stop crying,” murmured Fry.

He pulled Leela into a gentle hug. Leela rested her head against his shoulder and relaxed in his comforting arms.
“They are Fry, I’m always happy when I’m with you.” Leela breathed into his ear.
“Good, because I never want to see you unhappy again,” Fry replied, his grip on her tightening slightly, into a reassuringly protective embrace, and he lightly kissed the top of her head.
“As long as you’re here I could never be unhappy,” Leela said contentedly.
“Good, and as long as you’re happy, I’m happy. Maybe we should get going if we want to see the Space Prison today,” said Fry softly, releasing Leela from his embrace, but still keeping hold of her hand. Leela smiled.
“Let’s go,”

This message was brought to you by the mistress, bow down and be grateful
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #250 on: 10-20-2006 13:38 »

Wow thats a long monoloque
Albert 207

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #251 on: 10-20-2006 16:19 »

That is so beautiful...
ZoidFryLeelaAmy
Bending Unit
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« Reply #252 on: 10-20-2006 21:59 »

wow
Freela

Bending Unit
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« Reply #253 on: 10-20-2006 22:50 »

That chapter made me cry a little. Happy tears.
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #254 on: 10-21-2006 02:40 »
« Last Edit on: 10-21-2006 02:40 »

thats funny...
writer unit i dont see how that was a long, it took me 3 minutes to read the whole thing, although i got a bit confused and read a few sentences twice lol
but its good none the less, great job jle!
coldangel

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #255 on: 10-21-2006 04:57 »

WARNING: Emotion overload.
System has been rebooted to prevent brain damage.
Beginning dump of sentiment data...
100% complete
RESTARTING...

Phew!!
Great stuff.
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #256 on: 10-21-2006 05:37 »
« Last Edit on: 10-21-2006 05:37 »

 
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Originally posted by Bending Unit 99:

writer unit i dont see how that was a long, it took me 3 minutes to read the whole thing,
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But it wasn't me who wrote that it's long,it was my third evil twin brother
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #257 on: 10-21-2006 05:58 »

AHH!
how many evil twin brothers do you have anyway?
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #258 on: 10-21-2006 06:31 »
« Last Edit on: 10-21-2006 06:31 »

 
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Originally posted by Bending Unit 99:
AHH!
how many evil twin brothers do you have anyway?

About 20 that look EXACTLY like me and 79 that you can distinguish from me.
And thats only the evil ones   frown
With so many brothers I newer get anything new   red face
Just like Calculon
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #259 on: 10-21-2006 10:47 »

Hello everybody, glad you all liked the update, I tried to make it as emotional as my limited skills would let me. More update soon...maybe.
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #260 on: 10-21-2006 11:08 »

Give me liberty or give me a update  mad
And turn of that sentimental junk.(Said by the Professor,Bend her)
Sorry I just always wanted to be a fan-fic critic    evil laugh
coldangel

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #261 on: 10-21-2006 11:25 »

Couldn't have been more emotional if you'd bled onto a floppy disk and uploaded it.

You are an exceptional talent that should be given plenty of sunlight and water and the best fertilizers money can buy. You shall grow tall and strong and bear juicy literary fruit for all the world to feast upon.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #262 on: 10-21-2006 11:32 »

Now you're making me blush, I like it wink
coldangel

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #263 on: 10-21-2006 11:35 »

Clever metaphor, I thought. Except for the fertilizer part... I don't really want to dump manure on you... unless you think it would help.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #264 on: 10-21-2006 11:37 »

No manure, I'd have to spend forever in the bath to get it off and I wouldn't have time to write more story. It was a very clever metaphor though big grin
coldangel

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« Reply #265 on: 10-21-2006 11:50 »

I enjoy metaphors, especially served with a side dish of similes.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #266 on: 10-21-2006 11:54 »

Very nice. I'm working on the update now.
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #267 on: 10-21-2006 13:37 »

for real?
lol i don't know how anyone can like metaphors, i reckon that their stupid and only complicate the time consuming task of reading good fan fics...
bender - "whatever floats your boat"
or was it flexo...
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #268 on: 10-21-2006 13:59 »

Prepare for a shock in...
Part four

Fry and Leela slowly strolled along the beach as the waves gently washed over their feet. The sun felt pleasantly warm as the rays rode on a soft breeze. Fry was holding Leela’s hand lightly, wondering how such a simple act could make him feel so elated. He glanced over at her and admired the way the sun shone on her face and how her eye sparkled. He gazed at her, in awe of her beauty. Leela looked over at him and caught him staring.
“What, do I have something on my face?” she asked, subconsciously running her free hand over her face. Fry caught it in his free hand.
“There’s nothing wrong with your face, nothing,” reassured Fry.
“Then why were you staring at me,” Leela questioned.
“Just admiring the view,” Fry said suavely, Leela blushed.

The Space Prison slowly came into view as Fry and Leela walked towards it. A giant hulking building, made of grey rock and titanium bars, it seemed oddly out of place on the island paradise.
“Wow, that’s some prison,” gasped Fry.
“Yeah, and no-one has ever escaped,” informed Leela. Fry eyed the bars and the solid rock.
“No surprise,” he said, slightly in awe of its solid structure. He moved as close to Leela as he could, shivering slightly.
“You okay Fry?” she asked concernedly. Fry’s face darkened slightly as he looked up at the prison.
“I just don’t like prisons,” he said, casting his gaze to the floor.
“Why not Fry?”
“It doesn’t matter okay, let’s just go and find out how much it costs to get in,” Fry snapped throwing his hands up.
“Okay, I just asked,” said Leela in a slightly hurt tone. Fry glanced over at her and saw a bewildered on her face. Fry took a deep breath and ran a hand through his hair.
“Sorry Leela, I didn’t mean to snap, I just…” Fry trailed off.
“You just what?” Leela prompted.
“It’s nothing, let’s visit the prison okay,” replied Fry in a softer tone. He re-took Leela’s hand and led her to the ticket booth.
“Two tickets please,” requested Fry, trying to ignore Leela’s questioning gaze.
“That’ll be forty bucks,” said the ticket seller handing over the tickets. Fry fumbled for his wallet and handed over the money. He reaffirmed his grip on Leela’s hand and entered through the hulking entrance.

Fry and Leela wondered through the maze work of cells and walls, and the deeper they went into the belly of the prison, the tenser Fry became.
“You okay Fry?” asked Leela, noticing that Fry was becoming upset.
“I’m fine, a-okay, no problem here.” Fry babbled.
“You’re shivering,” observed Leela.
“It’s a bit cold in here don’t you think?” said Fry, hugging himself as if to express how cold it was.
“Not really…” trailed Leela, staring at Fry, observing him.
“Hey look, it’s the cell they held Mille the kid in, lets have a look,” rushed Fry changing the subject and pulling Leela into the cell. A confused look overcame Leela’s face as Fry began pacing the cell, seemingly observing every detail.
“What is with you Fry? Ever since we came here you’ve been acting odd,” Leela said bewilderedly.
“Nothing is wrong Leela, why would anything be wrong?” asked Fry accusingly.
“I don’t know. I’m just worried about you, you’re pacing around and getting snappy and I want to know why.” Leela said.
“Some things shouldn’t be explained, some things shouldn’t even be mentioned,” snapped Fry.

Suddenly, the door to the cell swung shut. Fry raced over to the cell door and rattled the bars. The door was locked. Fry stepped away from the door before racing at it and slamming into it with his shoulder. Still the door remained shut.
“DAMN IT, LET ME OUT OF HERE!” roared Fry, repeatedly ramming into the door.
“Fry stop it, you’ll hurt yourself,” screamed Leela as Fry’s attacks on the door became more frantic.
“I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING THIS TIME, LET ME OUT!” Fry yelled in blind hysteria. Leela rushed over to him and grabbed him into a bear hug.
“Calm down Fry,” Leela soothed, tightening her grip as Fry struggled to escape from her solid grip.
“I didn’t do anything this time, I swear I didn’t!” sobbed Fry, his struggles slowly stopping as sobs racked his body.
“Shhh, it’s okay Fry, I know you didn’t do anything. These doors have locks that are activated as soon as the door closes. No-ones locked you up.” Explained Leela gently as she felt Fry collapse against her.
“I didn’t do anything this time, I didn’t, really I didn’t, not this time,” Fry whimpered quietly. Leela slowly stroked Fry’s hair, trying to calm his frantic breathing.
“I know you didn’t Fry, it’s okay, it’s all okay,” she whispered.
“No it isn’t, I didn’t do anything but I’m locked up again, I SERVED MY TIME!” screamed Fry breaking free of Leela’s grip and resuming his assault on the door. Leela was torn between the urge to curl up in a confused ball on the floor and the urge to grab Fry and shake some sense into him, so she chose a middle ground. She re-grabbed Fry and forced him to look at her, though it was difficult with Fry struggling and thrashing about.
“Fry stop it now! You’re beginning to scare me and me being scared isn’t good for the baby!” she yelled in his face. At the mention of the baby Fry instantly stopped struggling and sank to the floor in a quivering heap.
“Sorry Leela, I didn’t mean to scare you, I’d never deliberately scare you,” whimpered Fry.
“Tell me what’s wrong,” Leela softly demanded, crouching down next to Fry.
“It’s nothing,” insisted Fry weakly, turning away. Leela used both hands to gently turn Fry’s face towards her.
“You didn’t just get upset over nothing Fry. I love you and I’m your wife, tell me what’s wrong,” she demanded softly again.
“I can’t,” said Fry quietly, lowering his eyes.
“You can, whatever it is it won’t change to way I feel about you. You said you’d never hurt me, well keeping secrets from me is hurting me Fry. I trust you, why don’t you trust me?” questioned Leela, gazing deep into Fry’s eyes searchingly.
“I do trust you, but I’ve never told anyone this particular secret…”
“You said yourself you’ve never felt the way you feel about me before, doesn’t that count for something?” Leela asked, hurt. Fry remained silent for a minute before admitting his biggest secret.
“I was convicted for assault, grievous bodily harm. I was in prison for five years.” 

This message was brought to you by the mistress, bow down and be grateful
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #269 on: 10-21-2006 14:32 »

HOW THE HELL COULD FRY BE IN A PRISON ??????????
It's nonsense with all the flash-backs
He knew Seymour minimum a year and that means he got in jail maximum in 19 years
I would prefer 5 months or 1 year
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #270 on: 10-21-2006 14:40 »

But we don't know anything about before he was a pizza boy. If Fry went to prison when he was 18 for five years, then he would have been 23 years old then he knew Seymour for 2 years before being frozen. So he's now 25. Correct me if I'm wrong. Besides, I think Fry being in prison was a good idea.
mookie427

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #271 on: 10-21-2006 16:54 »

Wooow, Part 3, absolutely beautiful, part 4 whoooooaaahhhhh, reality check! It's a good idea, a bit risky whether you'll be able to pull it off but I'm still loving it!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #272 on: 10-21-2006 16:57 »

mookies back yay!
I have an idea to continue from part four but you'll either love it or hate it, no middle ground
Freela

Bending Unit
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« Reply #273 on: 10-21-2006 21:20 »

Well, that was a shocking twist.
ZoidFryLeelaAmy
Bending Unit
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« Reply #274 on: 10-21-2006 22:06 »

Once again, wow. great story!!!
coldangel

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #275 on: 10-21-2006 22:28 »
« Last Edit on: 10-22-2006 00:00 by coldangel_1 »

Aha. This could explain the crappy state of Fry's life in the 20th century. At 25 he'd probably only just gotten out of the slam.
Good twist.
I wonder who he assaulted. I hope it wasn't a lady.


BU99 - Some of us literary giants like to make a little *art*.
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #276 on: 10-21-2006 23:23 »

Im scared...
im on the edge of my seat now as well
Albert 207

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #277 on: 10-22-2006 01:56 »

So scared... hhhh
mookie427

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #278 on: 10-22-2006 03:33 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by jle1993:
mookies back yay!
I have an idea to continue from part four but you'll either love it or hate it, no middle ground

Yep, I was away for a week, so I couldn't comment on the story. I had a big reading-fest last night at about 11PM. I think I'll love it, whatever happens
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #279 on: 10-22-2006 05:02 »

wow i've never looked forward to the next instalment of a fan fic this much!
*shiver* *shiver*
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