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Freela

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« Reply #160 on: 10-12-2006 19:48 »
« Last Edit on: 10-12-2006 19:48 »

You make me cry, laugh, and flip out from excitement! Good for you! Lol love the story! As you can tell from my name, I'm a shipper too, a huge one at that. Please make more while I'm still in this excited mood!

PS: Huzzah! TOTPD!
Albert 207

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #161 on: 10-12-2006 21:05 »

I think your really good with words, in other words, your fanfics kick ass!!1
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #162 on: 10-13-2006 08:43 »

Thank you, and with out futher adue

Part eight

Bender took the ship down and landed in the PE hanger. Everybody filed out of the ship and into the boardroom. The journey home had been in near complete silence, Fry because he was brooding over Zapp, the others because they were stunned at what Fry had done. They all went and sat at the table in the boardroom, Fry looking at everyone looking at him.
“Fry, why did you say all those things to Zapp,” asked Leela quietly.
Fry remain silent.
“Please Fry, you’ve been brooding since we left the Nimbus, talk to me,” she encouraged.
“Two reasons. Firstly, he had no right talking to you so disrespectfully; I should have done something about it earlier. The second reason…” Fry trailed off.
“The second,” Leela prompted.
“The war,” Fry shuddered, “It was horrible. Those men were all my friends, my family, and he sent them all to die just so he could be more famous. My family was dieing around me while he was sat in his ship. He never came out, he just ran off when he saw we were losing. He left us to die like dogs.” Fry said breaking into restrained sobs. “I should have died with them, I shouldn’t be here. I’m just as bad as him,”
Leela stood up and went over to Fry, pulling him into her arms, “Don’t ever say that Fry. You’re more a man than Zapp ever will be. You would have died with the rest of those soldiers if you’d had to. But you didn’t, and I’m glad you didn’t. Now I can marry you and I’m going to give birth to your child and we’re going to be happy together.”
Fry clung to Leela as though she were the only reason he could stand, and she probably was.
“I see them at night, dieing and yelling out, and I can’t do anything to save them, I run to them but I’m always too late, always too late,” he cried, sobs racking his body.
“You did all you could Fry, but they’re gone now, you need to let go,” soothed Leela, holding Fry tightly.
“I’m trying Leela, I’m trying so hard, but the more I try to let go during the day, the more tightly the memories grip me at night, and I can’t escape.”

Nobody knew what to say as Fry sobbed into Leela, the pain of the past gripping him in its guilt spiked talons. Kif slowly decided to speak.
“Fry, I understand,” he started, “When I first joined DOOP, it was in the middle of a war. My battalion was sent to the front when the battle reached its peak. I was the only survivor. Not because someone loved me enough to save me, but because the people we were fighting against wanted someone to tell of how great they were. You have something to live for and now so do I. I’m not saying that the nightmares will ever completely go, but think of Leela when they come, the way I think of Amy, it helps.” Kif finished.
Fry looked up from Leela and stared at Kif.
“I never knew,” he said
“Nobody did,” replied Kif, “This is the first time I’ve mentioned it in years.”
“I’m sorry,”
“Don’t be. Now why don’t we start arranging this wedding then?”
“Great idea,” agreed everyone

This message was brought to you by the mistress, bow down and be grateful
Freela

Bending Unit
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« Reply #163 on: 10-13-2006 09:08 »

This is the best story ever! I <33 it to pieces! This is like heaven to shippers everywhere.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #164 on: 10-13-2006 09:23 »

Thanx Freela, I try my best big grin
coldangel

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« Reply #165 on: 10-13-2006 10:44 »

Ohh, ouch. Bit of reality there.
mookie427

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #166 on: 10-13-2006 10:56 »

Yep, Fry suffering from shell shock, really a very touching chapter, that
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #167 on: 10-13-2006 11:04 »

Thanx, I try to add a bit of my life in my storys, I don't know much about shell shock but I do know about a painful past.
Albert 207

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #168 on: 10-13-2006 16:25 »

Yeah this is like that movie windtalkers!

great job anyway!!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #169 on: 10-13-2006 16:27 »

 smile
Bending Unit 99

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« Reply #170 on: 10-14-2006 01:50 »

this is a legendary story... *tears*

also hi everyone  smile
Cyberphobia

Bending Unit
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« Reply #171 on: 10-14-2006 04:12 »

^Hi Bending Unit 99, welcome!
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #172 on: 10-14-2006 06:50 »

but i do honestly have to say that this fics been outliving itself, i liked all that Fry leaving and Leela getting all sad and Bender's yell session, but i believe that it should have ended with them getting married. Just a bit of constructive criticism   smile

but other than that this fic is comparable to some of the more experienced fic writer's work, good job!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #173 on: 10-14-2006 06:57 »

Hi Bending Unit 99, welcome to PEEL. Glad you like the fic, and Fry and Leela will get married. They were going to already except that damn Michelle interfered
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #174 on: 10-14-2006 10:18 »

Heres some illastrations for my fic by the wonderful Coldangel, for more brill pics, visit his thread










This message was brought to you by the mistress, bow down and be grateful
mookie427

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #175 on: 10-14-2006 10:22 »

Love the pictures, the only thing is Leela doesn't have freckles!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #176 on: 10-14-2006 10:23 »

I like them, and you can thank Coldangel for the pics, brill arn't they
Cyberphobia

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« Reply #177 on: 10-14-2006 10:43 »

LOL maybe I'm looking at it wrong but why is Amy not wearing any pants in the pic of her restraining Bender? LOL

But other than that, brilliant pics!
coldangel

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #178 on: 10-14-2006 10:56 »

Yeah, that coldangel fella sure is dreamy. Why can't I ever meet men like that?

Leela has freckles when I draw her because I think it adds a certain cuteness that acts as a counterbalance to the eyeball. I find it hard to make her look cute with the facial structure necessitated by her being a cyclops, hence freckles. Anyhow, it's an ever-so-more-realistic version than the one in the TV show so you can say that a certain level of detail has been added... perhaps she DOES have freckles in the series and they're just not shown.
You'll notice also that the characters in my drawings have five fingers. Same reason - heightened realism.

And Amy is so wearing pants, Cyberphobia, you dirty-minded laydee!!  tongue  She's Amy - they're just skin-tight... showing off her curvaceousness... for all to see... *drool*
Cyberphobia

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« Reply #179 on: 10-14-2006 11:00 »

 
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Originally posted by coldangel_1:
And Amy is so wearing pants, Cyberphobia, you dirty-minded laydee!!   tongue  She's Amy - they're just skin-tight... showing off her curvaceousness... for all to see... *drool*

LMAO I really don't see pants!
coldangel

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« Reply #180 on: 10-14-2006 11:03 »

I think that really says more about you than it does about me.  big grin
Hahaha!
Question is - are you drooling at her?  tongue
LOL
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #181 on: 10-14-2006 11:06 »

And now the update. Forgive the fact I seem to have ingored Kif and Amy but I prefer to focus on Leela and Fry

Part nine

“I do,”
“I do,”
“I do,”
“I do,”
“You my now kiss the brides,” stated the Preacherbot.
A cheer rang out through the church as Fry pulled Leela into his arms and gently kissed her while Kif did the same to Amy. As the couples broke apart you could have felt the pure love floating in the air, and they were happy.

At Fry and Leela’s reception they had their first dance, to ‘You’re the inspiration’ by Chicago. As Fry held Leela they swayed in time to the music and Leela rested her head on Fry’s shoulder.
“You have the most beautiful eye Leela,” he whispered softly, “You completely beautiful anyway but your eye is amazing.”
Leela looked up at him, uncertainty clouding her face, “Do you really mean that Fry?”
“I wouldn’t say it if I didn’t mean it. It was the first thing I noticed when you looked at me,” he reassured
“Because I only had one,” remarked Leela huffily
“Because I though that apart from the rest of you it was the most beautiful thing I’d ever seen,” Fry corrected gently.
“Really?” asked Leela unsurely
“Really,” replied Fry, slowly kissing Leela to show her just how serious he was.

The music faded out and Bender stood up.
“You’ve had it skintoob, it’s time for the best manbot’s speech,” he announced.
“Oh god,” Fry whimpered, shivering.
“Now I’ve known the meatbag since he arrived at the future and for as long as I’ve known him he’s been after Leela. He made these cartoon strips, all of them ending with him wooing Leela; his artistic skills have really improved. There were times when you couldn’t get in his room from all the drawings he’d stacked up. He was unbearable at times, all ways going on and on about how wonderful she is and how much he loves her and how he could treat her so much better than the rest. I guess now he has his chance to prove it. Good Luck Fry,” finished Bender sitting down.
“That wasn’t so bad,” sighed Fry in relief.
“You drew pictures of me?” said Leela questioningly.
“Err, yeah I did. Every time you said you wouldn’t go out with me, I drew a picture of how the date could have gone if you’d said yes.”
“Ahh, you have to show them to me,” Leela gushed.
“Errrm, maybe after the honeymoon okay, Leela,” hesitated Fry, breaking into a blush.
“Okay,” said Leela, “But why do you look so embarrassed,”
Fry glanced around quickly before whispering something to Leela. Leela exploded into giggles, making everyone turn and look. Fry turned a deeper shade of red.
“Don’t you think its time to throw the flowers Leela,” he said through gritted teeth.
“Good idea Honey,” smirked Leela through stifled giggles, “Okay, all you ladies gather round, I’m about to toss the flowers.”
No sooner were the words out of her mouth, Leela was surrounded by a crowd of shrieking women, all jostling for the best position. Leela flung the flowers and they went sailing over the hands of the grasping women, sailing, sailing straight to Zoidberg.
“Yay, Zoidy’s going to get married!” yelled an ecstatic Zoidberg, until he realised that everyone had fled the hall, “Ahhh,"

This message was brought to you by the mistress, bow down and be grateful
Cyberphobia

Bending Unit
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« Reply #182 on: 10-14-2006 11:13 »

 
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Originally posted by coldangel_1:
I think that really says more about you than it does about me.   big grin
Hahaha!
Question is - are you drooling at her?   tongue
LOL

ROFL You drew her to have no pants deliberately but your just saying she does have pants to throw your no-pants fetish back at me... or something.

And no! I was not drooling! LMAO

I drool at Fry  flirt

But excuse me for a moment while I read the update that was just posted!  big grin
coldangel

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #183 on: 10-14-2006 11:15 »

Chicago? Girl - RESPECT!
Ah, you did the eye thing - good. That's sweet.
Ahh, good old Bender.
Heh heh... yeah, I've drawn nude Leelas as well.
WOO! Go Zoidberg!
Cyberphobia

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« Reply #184 on: 10-14-2006 11:19 »

Awesome update (as per usual)! Yeah good with the eye complement! That was so sweet!
Bending Unit 99

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« Reply #185 on: 10-14-2006 11:21 »
« Last Edit on: 10-14-2006 11:21 »

*dies of heart attack because of detail and realness in coldangel's pics* i've always wondered what the futurama characters would look like with an touch of real look in them, i thought about that after my miniature heart attack     big grin

wait... i died.

on the update note

is this the end?
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #186 on: 10-14-2006 11:24 »

Thanks guys, glad you like it. I picked Chicago coz they are my favirite group ever, and the eye compliment was sorta to emphisize that Fry thinks all of Leela's beauiful  big grin

I swear you guy compliment me too much, I'll get a big head. wink
I didn't say stop...
coldangel

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« Reply #187 on: 10-14-2006 11:24 »
« Last Edit on: 10-14-2006 11:24 by coldangel_1 »

Well I can hardly resist an opportunity to further bolster my massive ego by directing you to my picture thread where thare are a bunch more in that style over the course of a few pages: http://www.peelified.com/cgi-bin/Futurama/4-001392-1/
Cyberphobia

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« Reply #188 on: 10-14-2006 11:25 »

I don't really know if they're more realistic (well a bit I suppose), they just look more like anime to me.

But still good though! I like anime! Especially Sailor Moon! LOL! How amazingly awesome is Sailor Moon!?
coldangel

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« Reply #189 on: 10-14-2006 11:26 »

Oh God... Sailor moon? Surely I'm closer to Cowboy Bebop than that?
Bending Unit 99

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« Reply #190 on: 10-14-2006 11:30 »

I was gonna say... an anime twist in the characters makes them seem so different...
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #191 on: 10-14-2006 11:30 »

I think his version of Fry looks Hot, shame Fry is Leela's...

Why am I talking about a cartoon this way?
Cyberphobia

Bending Unit
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« Reply #192 on: 10-14-2006 11:32 »

Ummm never heard of Cowboy Bebop but probably. Sailor Moon's one of the only animes I remember. Would you prefer me to say Pokemon instead? Ahhh we all had a pokemon phase, didn't we! That brings back memories!
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #193 on: 10-14-2006 11:33 »

Had a Pokemon phase, I'm still suffering through it, that and Yu-gi-oh. Damn it, why can't I leave my phases behind?!
Cyberphobia

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« Reply #194 on: 10-14-2006 11:35 »

 
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Originally posted by jle1993:
I think his version of Fry looks Hot, shame Fry is Leela's...

Why am I talking about a cartoon this way?

LOL I know exactly what you mean! Haha!
Bending Unit 99

Bending Unit
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« Reply #195 on: 10-14-2006 11:36 »

*bender style laugh*

pokemon is kinda weird and stupid

but yu-gi-oh has a more serious twist to it
coldangel

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« Reply #196 on: 10-14-2006 11:41 »

Pokemon... Yi-Gi-Oh... all that 'younger audience' anime... I wouldn't touch with a ten-foot pole. I only get into Serious detailed stuff. I think you'd all like Bebop actually - a a ragtag band of misfits in the future floating around in a rusty old spaceship... and one of the characters is a cryogenic patient  wink

Okay... we should probably stop talking anime stuff in jle's fanfic thread. It may constitute hijacking.
jle1993

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #197 on: 10-14-2006 11:42 »

To get back on topic
How did you like the update?
Cyberphobia

Bending Unit
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« Reply #198 on: 10-14-2006 11:43 »

 
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Originally posted by jle1993:
Had a Pokemon phase, I'm still suffering through it, that and Yu-gi-oh. Damn it, why can't I leave my phases behind?!

OMG I could kill Yu-Gi-Oh!!! My brother is majorly obsessed with it and it drives me crazy!

Seriously, I think your drawings are most like Dragon Ball Z!
Bending Unit 99

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« Reply #199 on: 10-14-2006 11:44 »
« Last Edit on: 10-15-2006 00:00 »

good idea...

on a better note
i think that jle should send her fic into a fansite like TLZ or something, what are other good futurama sites with massive fanfic collections
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