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Dead Composer
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Interesting and well-written. Fry being imprisoned for Bender's crime is a clever development. As for the opening scene with the female version of Fry, I can't wait to see what it has to do with the rest of the story. Perhaps Leela somehow encounters the female Fry and takes her on in place of the male Fry, or perhaps male Fry and female Fry exchange parallel universes, so that Fry is now in a universe where everyone believes him to be a girl. Please write more soon.
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coldangel
DOOP Secretary
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Wow, wicked! I hope female Fry and Leela get it on!
...uhh... ignore that.
But seriously, good stuff.
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coldangel
DOOP Secretary
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When realities collide. I'm reminded of an old episode of Sliders... Just can't wait to find out how Fryette got there.
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Corvus
Bending Unit
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@totalnerduk: I'll try to keep them in character. @KurtPikachu2001: Dunno about posting it to TLZ. We shall see. @PCC Fred: A+?? Never go that good grades.. ever. Whee! @coldangel_1: Oh there will be more reality colliding. Much more.
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coldangel
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Corvus... I hate it when realities collide. Just last year I got caught in a quantum flux storm when my old High School science teacher tried to demonstrate his time/space resonance generator. Long story short, I ended up having to fight an army of coldangel_1 duplicates. Bastard of a day that was... After killing them all I can't even be sure if I am actually the original.
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coldangel
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Stories often are. Ever seen one of them 'book' things? Talk about long...
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Corvus
Bending Unit
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« Reply #16 on: 11-15-2006 11:16 »
« Last Edit on: 11-16-2006 00:00 »
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@jil1993: Thank you. @Coldangel_1: Ahh.. the old evil twins from alternate universes problem.. @Bendersucksfry: Long? As in tl;dr long or exciting long? Sorry folks no new update yet. Don’t worry, I'm working on it. Just that I’m very busy right now. Stupid real life. In the mean time enjoy some non-futurama art I made out of boredom: Hobbes from Calvin & Hobbes. Shows how crappy I am at drawing, no? Edit: Nevermind
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Ralph Snart
Agent Provocateur
Near Death Star Inhabitant
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Nice start.
Poor Leela - lost her husband and even Nibbler has left her for Rana.
But she will always have Zoidberg.
Seriously, very good
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fryismyhero
Bending Unit
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*takes huge breath* SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!![/fangirl squeal] I love it already! Rana reminds me of me- a lazy junk food addict. Rana, like many other young women, had a metabolism like a blast furnace. Except I wish I had that sort of metabolism
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Corvus
Bending Unit
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@fryismyhero: I'm writing, I'm writing! I mean how can I resist your fan girl squeal? @Decapodian: Thanks! You might not have to wait that much longer. @JustNibblin': I will try and finish. RL can really mess up even the best laid plans. @Unregistred: Stands out, eh? In a good way I hope? To the rest that suffer through my "writing". I have sent a first draft of Somewhere I Belong - Chapter Three to my beta reader and I'm writing on Part Two of A Red Letter Day right now. So stay tuned, an update might not be far away.. (yeah right.. )
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Corvus
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« Reply #28 on: 06-16-2007 10:07 »
« Last Edit on: 05-22-2008 00:00 »
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*Bump* Oh look. It only took me about a month. Whoo! So, here's Chapter three of Somewhere I Belong. For those of you that are waiting for A Red Letter Day. An update may not be that far away. Edit: snip
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Corvus
Bending Unit
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« Reply #31 on: 06-17-2007 11:43 »
« Last Edit on: 05-22-2008 00:00 »
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@soylentOrange: Hurray indeed. @JustNibblin': Rains eh? It sure does where I am. Glad you liked my "rabtriever". You know, I just might swipe that name. What's this? Two updates in less than two days!? Had it no been for soylentOrange's stellar work this would not have happened. Just so you know. So, On with the show train wreck. Edit: snip
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Corvus
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@Unregistered: Hmm.. I was a bit hesitant to post ARLD in the same thread as SIB because of that. @Decapodian: The professor owning the Planet Express as a head in a jar? Perhaps, but Cubert is so much more fun to write. @THM: Yes, where will Rana end up? Stay tuned for possible excitement in a near distant future. @say what now: Glad that you like them. Hopefully you won't have to wait too long. Yeah right..
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