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wolves95

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« on: 08-07-2006 13:05 »

"fry the vegitarian"

fry watching 2 minute microwave beans go round and round.

fry: can;t this thing go any faster!

leela: you have been saying that for the past 1 minute 25,26,27,28,29,30 and so on secondsyou only have 2o more seconds !

fry . you (beeep!) thing.

zoidberg: temper temper now wheres my 2 minute beans?

leela looks at fry.

fry: i'm of to the pizza place

leela: always goes that step to far.

the next day at the zoo.

amy: look kim and sheepie lamie thingie.

kim: i love being married hearing the sounds of..

amy: BURRPPP! sorry i had 2 minute beans for lunch.

kim: what his it about 2 minute beans.

leela: look a pig.

pig ( the best meats in the rump)

leela: that would make a lovely dinner.

fry: oh my god! your all helpless beings.

fry: i will stand up for animals because i will become a vegitarian.

all: ooohhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!  flirt   flirt   flirt   flirt
Dave B

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« Reply #1 on: 08-07-2006 13:12 »
« Last Edit on: 08-07-2006 13:12 »

Hmmm to be completely honest I am sorry to say I didn't like it that much    frown. The phrases were out of character it was going nowhere and it was quite boring, sorry man...
germanfryfan

The Listmaker
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« Reply #2 on: 08-07-2006 13:15 »
« Last Edit on: 08-07-2006 13:15 »

hey wolves,
Not bad for a start, has to develop some more though.   smile
btw. It's "Kif" not "kim".  wink

Sadly you posted it in the wrong forum, but I think a mod will gladly move it to the right one.

Welcome to PEEL,
should you need any help with PEEL or why things are done the way they are done, I recommend you to read our little FAQ, the PEELers' FAQ. It gives you a lot of useful tips on how to get along here. Not too much to read either.

after all, enjoy your stay here.   smile
TheGlob

Starship Captain
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« Reply #3 on: 08-07-2006 13:51 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by wolves95:
"fry the vegitarian"

fry watching 2 minute microwave beans go round and round.

fry: can;t this thing go any faster!

leela: you have been saying that for the past 1 minute 25,26,27,28,29,30 and so on secondsyou only have 2o more seconds !

fry . you (beeep!) thing.

zoidberg: temper temper now wheres my 2 minute beans?

leela looks at fry.

fry: i'm of to the pizza place

leela: always goes that step to far.

the next day at the zoo.

amy: look kim and sheepie lamie thingie.

kim: i love being married hearing the sounds of..

amy: BURRPPP! sorry i had 2 minute beans for lunch.

kim: what his it about 2 minute beans.

leela: look a pig.

pig ( the best meats in the rump)

leela: that would make a lovely dinner.

fry: oh my god! your all helpless beings.

fry: i will stand up for animals because i will become a vegitarian.

all: ooohhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!   flirt    flirt    flirt    flirt

Uhhh.. Welcome To Peel

I'm Sure You'll Get Better At All Of This You just Had A Rough Start

   hmpf




Daves Not Here Man...
Cap.JackSparrow

Bending Unit
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« Reply #4 on: 08-09-2006 13:53 »

How...To put this hmmmm 2/5.

It's a very lame story and if I was you, think before you share.
soylentOrange

Urban Legend
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« Reply #5 on: 08-09-2006 14:15 »

alright Cap.JackSparrow, now that was a bit much.  Don't be nasty to the other newbies.

Wolves: Your story isn't quite as developed as most of the others on this board.  Would I be right if I guessed you were under 15?  If so then this is pretty good.  I know I wasn't confident enough in my writing back when I was that age to post it on a message board.  Try writing some more.  The more you write, the better you'll be.
TinnyTim

Crustacean
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« Reply #6 on: 08-13-2006 13:51 »

It's ok. I'm 14 but It's a bit much... like Fry swearing that badly it needs to be bleeped.
Cap.JackSparrow

Bending Unit
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« Reply #7 on: 08-14-2006 14:04 »

 
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Originally posted by soylentOrange:
alright Cap.JackSparrow, now that was a bit much.  Don't be nasty to the other newbies.

Wolves: Your story isn't quite as developed as most of the others on this board.  Would I be right if I guessed you were under 15?  If so then this is pretty good.  I know I wasn't confident enough in my writing back when I was that age to post it on a message board.  Try writing some more.  The more you write, the better you'll be.

Pirate soylentOrange Pirate!
ZoidZoid

Bending Unit
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« Reply #8 on: 08-18-2006 03:48 »

How could you even think about making Fry a vegitarian!  mad   mad   mad   mad   mad

It's nature to eat meat. If we never ate any meat humans would not be as smart as we are today. and if we never became smart that would mean no tv, no video games and God forbid NO FUTURAMA! so I say that vegitarians are a lower form of life than humans.

Insult me about my opinion if you will but I'm standing up for what I beleive in!
wolves95

Crustacean
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« Reply #9 on: 08-19-2006 10:35 »

i'm 11.
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