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Cerulean Shadow

« on: 03-11-2006 15:04 »

This is called "Angels". It is a songfic by Jessica Simpson, my second fanfic to PEEL. I noticed some of you reviewed "My Everything". It used to be a songfic, judging why it is so short.

This story has two chapters, takes place during "The Sting", and if you are NOT a fan of Fry and Leela, get the hell out of here.    laff

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"Well, the poison may have gone through your friend, Fry. But Leela has the real problem in this condition." the doctor explained to the Planet Express crew.

"What cause is it on her?" Amy Wong asked the medical doctor.

"It seems she must have recieved all of the bee poison in this case. Luckily, Fry will have a possibility that he would be okay. We just need a new spleen to replace his old one. In the meantime, many of our greatest doctors will discover the case of what will happen to her next."

"This is most certainly not a good day. Oh, I told them not to go on that misson!" Professor Hubert Farnsworth said.

"Easy, Professor. There might be a slim chance that Leela and Fry would be alive. Besides, Leela stands up for many things, and Fry is a healthy mon. He will get his new spleen done and things will be back to normal." Hermes Conrad responded.

Many doctors operated on Fry and Leela's incident about the space bees. For 2 hours, Bender, Amy, Professer, Hermes, and Zoidberg waited outside the room hoping that their two friends would be okay. They couldn't quite wait any longer. Just then, David Ferman, M.D, stepped out of the room, with his hands on his clipboard.

"Well, a dead patient had an extra spleen that could fit Fry perfectly. It just came from a man who died in a motorcycle accident. As for Leela, well, it seems that the effect has taken her too seriously. There isn't a possibility that she would die, but I'm afraid that she would last in her sleep for more than 48 hours."

"Are you saying Leela is in a coma for more than two days?" Amy asked.
"Yes. And I guess it is more than a week also."

"What about Fry?" Bender asked the doctor.
"The hospital's best doctors are putting their hands through replacing the new spleen in his stomach system. He will probably be awake in about ten or fifteen minutes. I think your friends should rest after the incident. And I think you need to too."
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In their dreams, Fry and Leela were both having the same flashback of what they remembered. It was a short time ago...


Fry, Leela, and Bender were in the honeycomb hideout. While Bender was destracting the bees with his dancing, Fry and Leela started collecting honey and royal jelly. Up at the stream of jelly, Leela spotted a small, baby queen. She was adored by the little bee, and decided to take it home to harvest more honey. During their collecting, Bender accidentally made all the bees angry by his dancing. He even insulted the gigantic queen! The three deliverers started to blast off to the Planet Express Ship for safety from the space bees. They managed to escape, but their troubles wasn't over yet.

"We did it! Burn down on that old crew!" Leela cheered.
"Leela, we got lucky this time. But you should be more careful. I don't want anything to happen to you." Fry told his friend.

But something bad was going to happen. Right behind Leela, the baby queen started to rise up and charge into the air. It appeared a few feet away in front of Leela. The bee was ready to sting Leela, but Fry jumped in front of her.

"You want her, you're gonna have to go through me!"

As the bee charged towards the two, it literally went right through Fry! Bender grabbed the bee and threw it out of the ship.

And that was all Fry and Leela could ever remember.

*End Of Flashback*
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Fry sat up from his sleep. After he caught the glimpse of him being stung by the bee, he gasped a little during the flashback. He looked around the room. Then he discovered he was in the hospital. He thought maybe he fainted after the trip. But until he tried to close his eyes and go back to sleep, be remembered something... Leela. Was she all right? Did she survive the sting? He kept searching around the room. She was nowhere to be found.

"Leela..." he said.

His voice was hoarse. He felt a little weak on his voice and his stomach. He looked down to investigate. He had a huge bangage right on his stomach of where his spleen was. Then it hit him. The bee. The sting. Leela. The stinger went through him! But he really couldn't believe that he actually survived. But if he survived, that means...

His heart nearly stopped beating.

He thought Leela didn't survive. But he was wondering, could there be a slim chance that Leela would still be alive? Just as he was about to wonder about something else, Bender, Amy, and Zoidberg walked in the room.

"Fry! You're awake!" Zoidberg yelled.

"Yeah, I guess. I thought I dreamt that me, Leela and Bender were... Leela! Where's Leela? Is she okay?"
"She's fine... and in a coma." Bender said.
"A coma? How long?"
"The doctor said more than a week." Amy replied.
"Where is she?"
"She's in the other room." Bender responded.

After Bender told Fry where Leela was, he jumped off the bed with all of his strength and ran to the next room; Number 196. He rushed in to see Leela fast asleep. He walked slowly over to her side. He carried small tears in his eyes. Fry fell on his knees and touched Leela's warm hand. He was in terror when he thought she was dead. But he remembered Bender saying she is in a coma. So he knows that she'll be fine.

"Leela?" he said in his tears.

Then Bender, Amy, Dr. Zoidberg, Professer Farnsworth, Hermes, and Dr. Ferman walked in. They noticed Fry crying, but they tried to avoid it by trying to get him back to his room.

"Fry, you need to get back to your room to rest!" Dr. Ferman said.
"No!" Fry exclaimed.

They tried tugging on his T-shirt and pulling him away from the bed. He kept on tugging free from his friends' holds. But no matter how hard they tried, Fry wouldn't leave his best friend's room.

"You can do what you want with me, but I won't leave her alone!" he yelled.

His co-workers and Dr. Ferman had no other possible choice. Fry was a little way from getting better after replacing his sleen with a new one. Fry never wanted to leave Leela's side. Even if it means starvation or more.

"... If you are sure about this..." the doctor said.
"I am. I know I am." he said.


Urban Legend
« Reply #1 on: 03-11-2006 15:35 »

That's really good.I can't wait for the next part.

Urban Legend
« Reply #2 on: 03-11-2006 15:42 »

I have a story similar to this, it's not a songfic though.

Starship Captain
« Reply #3 on: 03-12-2006 02:00 »

Whoa this is good! Please update soon I would like to read the rest...again this good. XD
Cerulean Shadow

« Reply #4 on: 03-12-2006 02:22 »
« Last Edit on: 03-12-2006 02:22 »

Thank you. Today's your lucky day!
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Hours passed. Fry still never left Leela's side. He hoped that she could still hear him even if she was asleep. He wanted to talk to her. He wanted to wake her up. But he knew that the coma could be even longer.

"Hey Leela? There was a surprise for you in my locker. I got it in a swedish novelty shop before we left." he said.

He reached into his jacket pocket and took out a present that was green with a purple bow wrapped around it. He set it on the table beside her, hoping that she would reach out and open it.

"You know you can open it. But there's just one thing I want you to do-- I want you to wake up."

I sit and wait,
Does an angel contemplate my fate and do they know,
The places where we go when we're grey and old,
'Cos I've been told that salvation lets their wings unfold,
So when I'm lying in my bed thoughts running through my head,
And I feel that love is dead I'm loving angels instead,

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"Fry, no offence. But you've gotta eat something!" Amy exclaimed.
"I don't need to."

"Fry, I hate to break this up to you in a time like this. But... the doctor said that Leela might never wake up."

"What! No! She will wake up! She has too! She can survive things like this! Just, just... give her a little more time!"

"Fry, calm down, I-"
"You don't know how much I want her to wake up! I'll do anything! Anything! Anything, just to wake her up."

"... Fry, what you're doing is, sorta crazy, but sweet. You may want to starve to be by her side, but you need to face it. Leela might not wake up for a long time."

"... You're wrong! Leela will wake up soon! Maybe not today, but soon! I know she will! She's strong enough to do these things! I know she is!"

"... Maybe you're right. I better leave you alone. But, just in case you need something to eat, tell me. 'Cause I'm worried about you."

"Don't be. I'm just worried about Leela." Fry said as Amy left the room. "And I always will be."

And through it all he offers me protection a lot of love and affection,
Whether I'm right or wrong,
and down the waterfall,
Wherever it may take me I know that life won't break me,
When I come to call he won't forsake me,
I'm loving angels instead,

When I'm feeling weak and my pain walks down a one way street,
I look above,
And I know I'll always be blessed with love,

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Fry's direction was always towards Leela. No matter what, he didn't take any chances of leaving her. His love for her was right beside her. And he's wishing that she would know that. He's loved her for so long, but hasn't gotten the chance to tell her. He tried saving her from that baby queen, but he was particularly putting himself in danger. But he would rather put himself in that kind of danger just to let Leela live. He spotted her shaking in her sleep.

"Here's my jacket. You look a little cold," Fry said as he put his jacket around Leela's shoulders. "I hope you wake up sometime. Everyone is scared into thinking you will never wake up. Even me. Amy told me that the doctor said that you would never wake up. But I know you will. You can survive everything. And you can prove it. All you have to do is wake up."

And as the feeling grows,
He breathes flesh to my bones and when love is dead,
I'm loving angels instead,

And through it all he offers me protection a lot of love and affection,
Whether I'm right or wrong,
and down the waterfall,
Wherever it may take me I know that life won't break me,
When I come to call he won't forsake me,
I'm loving angels instead,
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Fry fell asleep next to his friend. His head was spinning in his dream. Around and around over and over. All the colors he could ever discover was in his dream, spinning like a random. Fry had no idea what was going on. It started to spin faster and faster, making him dizzy. He finally found out- he was heading towards the center! Everytime he even flew to the end sides of the random, it started to sting him like the bee stung him. It hurt even worse when he reached to the core. As he touched it with his finger tips, a huge blast of purple and blue horizon came. He was halfly scared, but he thought about Leela. Where was she? Is she okay? Is this a dream? Or a nightmare?

"Leela..." he whispered.

Then the horizon reached in his soul. It was his life and death path.

Then he woke up.

I'm loving angels instead,
And through it all he offers me protection a lot of love and affection
Whether I'm right or wrong,
and down the waterfall,
Wherever it may take me I know that life won't break me,
When I come to call he won't forsake me,
I'm loving angels instead...

"I don't know if you can hear me Leela, but there's something I wanna tell you- I-I love you. So, for me, just wake up Leela. Please, just wake up." Fry said.

"Just wake up Leela, please... just wake up..." Fry said in tears.
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Then Leela started moving her head. She opened her eye! She looked around the room to see who was causing the sobs. She looked to the left side of her bed. She saw Fry crying on his bended knees. His face wasn't shaved, and his hair was completely disheveled.

"Fry... you're alive!" she said.
"Leela! You're awake!"
"Of course I'm awake, you wouldn't stop waking me. Where am I?"
"In the hospital. The ambulance took you here after the bee stung you."
"But the bee stung you! It barely touched me!"

Fry raised his shirt up to let Leela see his bandage.

"The stinger went right through me and you got all the poison." he explained. "My new spleen came from a guy who rode the motorcycle."

Then he lowered his shirt and started imatating a motorcycle engine. Just then, the rest of the crew walked in the room.

"Sweet ice toad sloth of ice Planet Hoth! She's awake!" Hermes exclaimed as the rest of the crew started cheering.

"You were in the best coma I've ever seen!" Bender also exclaimed.
"The doctor said you never wake up." Amy said.
"Really? How long was I out?" Leela asked.
"Two weeks. Fry never left your side for a minute." she continued.
"And he talked non-stop. Like the parrot of the sea he was!" Dr. Zoidberg said.

"I thought maybe if you heard a familiar voice, it might help keep your mind together. But, who knows if it really got through." Fry said to Leela.

"It got through Fry." she said.

They both reached for each other and hugged. Fry and Leela never have been happy to hold each other after two long weeks. Fry rubbed her back as she spoke.

"It got through."

~The End~
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Whatcha think? OK, here's the question: I'm writing a series about two kids (technically Fry and Leela's kids) called "The Lily and Brandon Chronicles." Since The Futurama Madhouse's fanfiction link didn't work, this place is my only hope. There will be drama, comedy, and adventure. I'll try to put it in the best Futurama style as I can.

What do you think about "The Lily and Brandon Chronicles?"
Foxxy Gurl

Bending Unit
« Reply #5 on: 03-12-2006 16:26 »

AWESOME! And as your friend, I'd advise you to GO FOR THE SERIES!
Cerulean Shadow

« Reply #6 on: 03-12-2006 20:41 »

Thx, I thought that I was gonna get bummed because there a few Fry & Leela romance. If that's ok...
Ralph Snart

Agent Provocateur
Near Death Star Inhabitant
DOOP Secretary
« Reply #7 on: 03-12-2006 22:26 »


Pretty good for a first effort.

With this story, you have very stiff competiton - Venus' story is much more in-depth and much more emotional, so yours being based on the same event doesn't really make a fair comparison.

However, doing the next story may give you a more fair playing ground (note:  There are already some stories about Fry and Leela having children - some good, some not).

Give it a try - I know from experience that writing is hard, but do it for yourself, not to get praise, and enlist in the aid of a beta if your don't already have one.  Beta's make life and writing so much less complicated (sometimes).
Cerulean Shadow

« Reply #8 on: 03-16-2006 21:02 »

Yeah... Hehe. I never read Venus's before. But I guess it might be a lot better than this. Plus, it's not about them HAVING kids. It's about their adventures through hilarious and dramatic obstacles in the future.

If... that's how you want to put it.
Foxxy Gurl

Bending Unit
« Reply #9 on: 03-19-2006 11:42 »

Yeah. I read some of it myself, and it's nothing like them having kids. It's about the adventures that a nine and seven year old can create and fix. It's pretty good.
Cerulean Shadow

« Reply #10 on: 03-19-2006 12:19 »

Yeah... But I think I can give you the summary in the series:


Lily- Lily has two eyes, long, curly orange hair with purple streaks and bangs like Leela's, a pink tank top with a peace sign, blue jeans, and white tennis shoes. She loves to sing, and spend lots of time with her father. Her father and her are extremely close, more than anybody knows. She's nice to animals, but not a true fan of her brother. She likes to tease and torment her brother, but he can't stop loving her. She's got two friends at school named Nicole and Kia. Like she is with her father, she loves to be near her Uncle Bender, which is the only time she likes her brother.

Brandon- Brandon has one eye, purple hair with orange streaks and bangs like Fry's, a red T-shirt, blue pants, and white sneakers. He loves to play with his pet turtle, Matt, and to hang out with his sister, Lily. He has no idea that she always torments him, but focuses on her. He's like a troublemaker, but only with his Uncle Bender. He's never ashamed of his one eye, and spends lots of time with his mother. He's got a friend named Standler, who is technically, a robot. He likes girls, but is always idolized by Kia, Lily's friend, which apparantly he likes as well.

Together, they'll face obstacles like never before, in the face of the future.
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