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GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« on: 02-04-2006 21:40 »
« Last Edit on: 04-29-2006 00:00 »

This was a collaboration with Philibuster, who wrote the story, whereas I mainly wrote in the jokes.
   Itís a full-length comic, at 30 pages so sorry if you have dial up. And if you like shippy stuff, you should like this comic since itís about Fry and Leela dating. However, it definitely is more funny than serious so hopefully you get some amusement out of it.

Synopsis: Fry finally talks Leela into going on a real date with him. Meanwhile, Bender decides to start up his own catering service, which soon leads to other moneymaking opportunities. 

Upadate 4/29/06...

The comic's now on The Leela Zone, thanks to Teral. You can read it by going to the fan comic page at  http://www.futurama-madhouse.com.ar/fanscomic/index.shtml

  I'll leave the Imageshack links too, just in case but that version has little flub ups here and there FYI.

Cover
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Professor Zoidy

Urban Legend
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« Reply #1 on: 02-04-2006 22:14 »

Well, Since I have dial up, I only got through the first 15 pages *curses at internet* Very nicely put together, and I love how you captured each character's personalities! I must say if you come up with more stores, post them!
Ralph Snart

Agent Provocateur
Near Death Star Inhabitant
DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #2 on: 02-05-2006 00:22 »

nice storyline.  decent artwork.  futurama-type humor.

i give it an A+.

Okay you cunts, let's see what you can do now.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #3 on: 02-05-2006 02:03 »
« Last Edit on: 02-05-2006 02:03 »

You know i really like it. I even chuckled out loud a few times.

EDIT: i forgot to mention how much i loved the hairstyle you gave Leela for their date. It looked really cute on her i wish they'd done her hair like that in the show.
Blane

Professor
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« Reply #4 on: 02-05-2006 02:25 »
« Last Edit on: 02-05-2006 02:25 »

I read it before all of you!!! I just didn't want to reply first lol. But yeah Very good. The humor was very good and very fitting. Plus you went to the full 30 pages which a lot of people dont do. Good plot and illustrations. Nice ending aswell.

Edit: Oh and venus, update your fic!!! I'm dieing waiting for the next part, its too good.
Arkan

Bending Unit
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« Reply #5 on: 02-05-2006 15:00 »

I'm so glad I don't have dial up.
Excellent comic! Great art and plot, and the humour was very fitting for a Futurama story. Very impressive and enjoyable!  big grin
Corvus

Bending Unit
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« Reply #6 on: 02-05-2006 15:19 »

Great comic, several parts got me laughing out loud.  The dialogue was very good and the art was equally great!

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
 It looked really cute on her i wish they'd done her hair like that in the show.

I have to concur with Venus here. It was a nice detail.

Do we get to see some more comics like this one in future?? Pretty please?  big grin

"Finding your true love is like winning the lottery, it always happens to someone else."
Professor Zoidy

Urban Legend
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« Reply #7 on: 02-05-2006 15:23 »

Damn this dial up!!! I'll be back with weapons shortly... *goes off to kill whomever runs crappy dial up internet*
miss_bender

Starship Captain
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« Reply #8 on: 02-05-2006 19:56 »

This is my first post, I've been reading this forum site for quite a while and today I decided to make an account.
To the point great work on the comic it is so cool. And it's real funny, great jokes. I doubt you would care for my opinion but I would rate it a 10 out of 10. Again great job I LOVED IT!!  big grin
Professor Zoidy

Urban Legend
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« Reply #9 on: 02-05-2006 20:36 »

Well, I've succeeded in reading one more page x.x;;
miss_bender

Starship Captain
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« Reply #10 on: 02-05-2006 21:00 »

I know how dial up is sucks doesn't it. My family computer used to have it got it up gaded to high speed last year I think it was. I don't have my own computer have to share with the family.
GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #11 on: 02-05-2006 22:43 »

Awa don't be so hard on yourself, miss bender. Of course I care about you and everyone else's feedback. I spent quite some time on it so it's nice to know if people are digging it or not before I get to work on the next one.

By the way Venus brought up Leela's hair. It bothered me in the show how they never drew it long enough when she took it down. But I actually based that style off of a character on Gargoyles, just a random tidbit of info there.
fryismyhero

Bending Unit
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« Reply #12 on: 02-05-2006 22:50 »

That's the best thing I ever saw.

Poor Fry though, he gets lucky and then gets dumped.  Story of his life I guess  tongue

Great humour...It was like stuff out of the show.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #13 on: 02-06-2006 01:20 »

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Fry: Leela, i'll give you a ride any time you want.

Leela: *annoyed look*

Fry: That came out funny.

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I was walking to work today and that bit popped into my head and made me grin like an idiot in front of total strangers. Also the part...

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Fry: The alarm never went off. I must have kicked it off the bookshelf last night

Leela: *dreamy look* Nightstand.

Fry: *suave* Yeah that.

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Thanks for making me look like a schizo GS!
GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #14 on: 02-06-2006 01:34 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
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Thanks for making me look like a schizo GS!

Hey,I aim to please.

soylentOrange

Urban Legend
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« Reply #15 on: 02-06-2006 12:15 »

awesome comic.  The humor was great, the art was great, all in all an A+.  You should submit it to the Leela Zone when you get the chance  smile
SpaceCase

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #16 on: 02-06-2006 15:08 »

Well, I finally downloaded the whole thing, but haven't had the chance to read any of it yet.
I have dial-up: This means I wouldn't live long enough to download everything, so I must use the broadband at the workplace...
When nobody's looking...  roll eyes
I'll be reading it as soon as I have the chance.
Venus

Urban Legend
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« Reply #17 on: 02-06-2006 15:12 »

pg 15 won't load for me.
Fryman28b

Bending Unit
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« Reply #18 on: 02-06-2006 16:02 »

God bless you, Geno.
commie detector

Starship Captain
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« Reply #19 on: 02-06-2006 16:15 »

great job! amazing storyline, amazing likeness to the show.... great job! I rate it a 99/100.... make more!!!!! if you have the time  smile
Wooter

Urban Legend
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« Reply #20 on: 02-06-2006 19:26 »

 
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Originally posted by Venus:
pg 15 won't load for me.

Me neither, and I refuse to skip a page!
Blane

Professor
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« Reply #21 on: 02-06-2006 19:45 »

It loads for me. Try getting it direct
 http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/5656/page153pi.jpg  (direct link to image)
my man-wich!

Starship Captain
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« Reply #22 on: 02-07-2006 01:14 »

great work,good pictures to... some comics ive seen the people slack off at the end and do crap drawings... good work A+
GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #23 on: 02-07-2006 01:24 »
« Last Edit on: 02-07-2006 01:24 »

Thanks all. I think there is some bandwidth limits per day or something at imageshack, which may be why it's not loading for some of you. And if you must know, the reason the drawings look better towards the end is because when I actually started the comic, I never drew a Futurama character before so I kinda just learned as I went. Thanks for all the comments!

Well it's about 1:30 in the morning, and i tried the link and page 15's loading fine now...so I'm sure it was just a bandwidth limit issue.
KurtPikachu2001

Urban Legend
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« Reply #24 on: 02-07-2006 14:38 »

That is a really cool fan comic you made there!  Fan comics are accepted at Futurama Madhouse.  You ought to post it there!  Really cool!
Fryman28b

Bending Unit
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« Reply #25 on: 02-08-2006 16:01 »

Damn it! I cant load page 30!
Shiny

Professor
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« Reply #26 on: 02-08-2006 19:17 »
« Last Edit on: 02-08-2006 19:17 »

That could've been an episode.  Everyone was perfect, and the jokes were great.

And man, you must have put a LOT of work into it.  I've done some comics before, and they are a major effort.  I'm highly impressed.
Crash_7

Professor
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« Reply #27 on: 02-10-2006 08:28 »

Ah, there!  I finally got it all to load.  Very impressive, I must say.  But it does kinda seem like Nibbler talking to Leela ended up being unnecessary since Fry came back on his own. 
The Stranger

Poppler
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« Reply #28 on: 02-10-2006 11:55 »

Looks great.. I agree with Shiny that it could've been an episode.  Look forward to seeing more from you.
CrapBag

Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #29 on: 02-10-2006 17:57 »

havent read it all. but great art work
im sure the writing is good
TriggerHappyJim

Professor
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« Reply #30 on: 02-10-2006 18:18 »

Oooh, all that downloading left my computer reeling! But I prevailed!

Very, very good. Very good. You should be damn pleased.

Unfortunatly, I thought up a similar plot and was just about to write it out. Cocks. Oh well. I should have started earlier anyway so I guess I learned my lesson, eh?
No.Im-Doesnt

Bending Unit
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« Reply #31 on: 02-12-2006 18:46 »
« Last Edit on: 02-12-2006 18:46 »

Amazing!!! really awesome!!! Dialogue was perfect! i absoloutly loved it
100th post! now im a bending unit!  big grin
GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #32 on: 02-17-2006 04:28 »

Alright, I finally finished all the litte tweaking that needed to be done...page numbers and stuff like that. So now I shall attemp to flood the Madhouse with this beast...stay tuned.
GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #33 on: 03-28-2006 03:36 »

Bump to say that I submitted the comic to the Leela Zone, and it's being posted now so check it out. I fixed all the little flub ups and added more little details. Boomba!
TriggerHappyJim

Professor
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« Reply #34 on: 03-28-2006 07:42 »

Any ideas for the next one?
GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #35 on: 03-28-2006 13:55 »

Actually, yeah even had enough to start the first page. Most of the script is done (by Philibuster) so now I have to go edit it.
Arkan

Bending Unit
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« Reply #36 on: 03-28-2006 16:30 »

Cool, looking forward to it. Your last one was so good.  smile
TriggerHappyJim

Professor
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« Reply #37 on: 03-28-2006 19:06 »

Could you post it as it comes this time?

Not only am I really impatient, but it will save me downloading everything at once. :P

I look forward to it!
GenocidalSmashr

Delivery Boy
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« Reply #38 on: 03-29-2006 01:31 »

Maybe, i'll see how it goes. It's just that the first one took so long and I changed a lot of things last minute. But I'll see how this one shapes up.
Kagome

Bending Unit
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« Reply #39 on: 04-28-2006 13:26 »

Great job working on the futurama comics  smile
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