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Writer unit32

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« Reply #80 on: 10-20-2006 12:44 »
« Last Edit on: 10-20-2006 12:44 »

Great now i know where it all goes.Theyll all die.Why do you have to be so mean PCCFred   cry
Sorry PCCFred I just always wanted to be a fanfic critic    evil laugh
This is definetly one of those nightmares about   :rolleyes:spideres
The problem is who are those voises(if they exist)
They could be even the stomach worms(again if they exist )
   confused Please explain soon who are they(if they exist of course)   confused   
Great fanfic   big grin
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #81 on: 10-20-2006 12:49 »

Hello,any body in here?
I posted this a minut ago and I'm still the last one who posted something
Writer unit32

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« Reply #82 on: 10-20-2006 12:54 »
« Last Edit on: 10-20-2006 12:54 »

  I'so lonely     cry
Why have everyone forget about our obvious greatness?(Said by Lepnard Nimoy,Where no fan has gon before)
Please     frown somebody write something     frown I'm a talker,I meen writer    cry
OK now I'm bored and depressed.I'll go cry my self to sleep     frown      cry      sleep
SpaceCase

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« Reply #83 on: 10-20-2006 14:04 »
« Last Edit on: 10-20-2006 14:04 »

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Writer unit32

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« Reply #84 on: 10-20-2006 14:19 »

Hhhmm...There's asong somewhere there
Dont hurry
BEE patient
Well if I get stinged by a space bee and will fall in a coma I know what my friends'll be sinnin
PCC Fred

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« Reply #85 on: 10-20-2006 17:26 »

 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
Great now i know where it all goes.Theyll all die.Why do you have to be so mean PCCFred    cry

Do you honestly think I'd kill everyone off in Part 6 of a 20 part story?  wink

 
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The problem is who are those voises(if they exist)

YES!  Somebody finally asked that question!!!  smile

Er, wait and see...

 
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Great fanfic    big grin

Thanks.  And welcome to PEEL!  smile

Arkan

Bending Unit
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« Reply #86 on: 10-20-2006 17:44 »

20 parts? Me like...
Corvus

Bending Unit
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« Reply #87 on: 10-20-2006 17:49 »

 
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Originally posted by PCC Fred:
Do you honestly think I'd kill everyone off in Part 6 of a 20 part story?   smile

20 part story?! Wow. I'm impressed. Mine isn't anywhere near that long.

"Finding your true love is like winning the lottery, it always happens to someone else."
PCC Fred

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« Reply #88 on: 10-20-2006 18:37 »

Neither's mine, as yet.  With one thing and another I've only written one full scene beyond what you've already read.  However I have a pretty good handle on what happens where in the story, and 20 parts seems about the right length for it.
Zed 85

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« Reply #89 on: 10-20-2006 19:29 »

 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
The problem is who are those voises(if they exist)

Me!  big grin
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #90 on: 10-21-2006 05:32 »
« Last Edit on: 10-22-2006 00:00 »

You know this fanfic is a great time for Fry,absolutely no rivals.Yeah and speeking of rivals,I made a museum of Fry enemies and rivals.And some other people.
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Fry rivals:
EXIBIT A:Yancy Fry(older brother,you can figure out the rest)
EXIBIT B:Guenter(Monkey roommate from University)
EXIBIT C:Flexo(Best friends evil twin brother)
EXIBIT D:Sal(They just don't like eachother)
EXIBIT E:Polly Shoer(Dates Fry's secondary girlfriend Michael)
EXIBIT F:Lord Nibbler(Actually a friend I mean pet,but still frozed Fry in cryogenics lab
EXIBIT G:Trisol liquid emperor(Fry drunk but didn't digest)
EXIBIT H:Mom and her three sons(in Futurestock and A Fishful of dollars)
EXIBIT I:Melllmer(claims to be the greathest Star Trek fan ever)
EXIBIT J:Zookeeper(in Less than hero)
EXIBIT K:Bubblegum Tape(Fry plaid basketball against him)
EXIBIT L:Robot Devil(in the end he left Fry with his stoopid fingers)
EXIBIT M:a ski instructer(he was just friends with Fry's old girlfriend Michaele)
EXIBIT N:The Omicronians(there not technically rivals,but if some earth-skum and a adult poppler can be friends...)
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Leela's boyfrends,men:
EXIBIT A:The Zapper(A little moment of pity and a big flight throw the night)
EXIBIT B:The never seen Sean
EXIBIT C:Alkazar(the last'cyclops')
EXIBIT D:Chaz the mayor's aide
EXIBIT E:Adlai Adkins(crazy eye surgent)
EXIBIT F:doug(Lizard tonque gui)
EXIBIT G:Scrunchy(Fry mentioned in Farnsworth's Parabox that he had a date with Leela on Nill Dimond's concert)
EXIBIT H:Kif(in areally nontraditional way)
EXIBIT I:Ipgee(boss from AC)
EXIBIT J:Stomach worms(throw Fry's body)
EXIBIT K :dean Vernon(Only one date)
Bill what's his name from Star Trek(Slept right ther on Omega III
They newer even been on a date,but still last but not least)
EXIBIT L:Phillip J Fry   big grin
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And some other people
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Bender's old friends:
EXIBIT A:Roberto
EXIBIT B:Fender
EXIBIT C : one of the wale-killers on the moon
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Professor's co-workers:
EXIBIT A:doctor Wernstrem(greatest rival)
EXIBIT B:dean Vernon(I'm not even sure if they know eachother)
EXIBIT C:dean Epsilon
PCC Fred

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« Reply #91 on: 10-21-2006 18:51 »

[ELZAR] Who let this guy through the metal detector? [/ELZAR]  wink

Anyways, it's not like this fic's been a cakewalk for Fry so far, what with Leela being deafened, being knocked unconscious in Part 1, missing the date in Part 4, getting blown away by Angie in the last installment.  Not to mention eating the meal Bender cooked in Part 3...

@TLF & Venus - Okay, I guess I'm not giving too much away by saying that nobody's really died.  Things'll be (marginally) clearer after the next update.

@Ralph - I'd disagree with you over how the story's paced, although I guess it's a subjective thing.  In my mind, the first five parts were largely introductory pieces, setting up the background for the story and introducing the new characters.  Whereas after two largely stand alone installments, Part Six is largely geared around advancing the plot.

As for the Leela/Angie thing, well, wait and see...  (I'm starting to think that maybe 'wait and see' should be the tag line for this fic...)

As for battle of the captains, Sisko decks Picard with one punch while Jean-Luc's tugging on his designer Starfleet uniform, then smashes a bottle over Kirk's head while Jim's trying to get it on with Janeway.

Then Janeway repolarises the dynamic quadratic alignment of the bipolar tachyon array (like putting too much air in a balloon!) and beats Sisko somehow.

Now, Seven of Nine vs Leeta.  Naked.  In mud...

@Arkan & Corvus - Yep, 20 parts.  Which at the current rate of output should bring the story to an epic conclusion sometime in mid-2011.
Ralph Snart

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« Reply #92 on: 10-21-2006 19:32 »

 
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As for battle of the captains, Sisko decks Picard with one punch while Jean-Luc's tugging on his designer Starfleet uniform, then smashes a bottle over Kirk's head while Jim's trying to get it on with Janeway.

I like it, except Kirk and Janeway?  Even Kirk has better taste than thatpuke

 
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Now, Seven of Nine vs Leeta. Naked. In mud...

Use baby oil.  Mud obscures what we want to see.  love

Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #93 on: 10-22-2006 07:56 »


What my list sux?
Aaaaahh man  red face
Corvus

Bending Unit
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« Reply #94 on: 10-22-2006 08:29 »

 
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Originally posted by PCC Fred:
@Arkan & Corvus - Yep, 20 parts.  Which at the current rate of output should bring the story to an epic conclusion sometime in mid-2011.

Yikes! I've posted 2 chapters and 1 prologue so far. I've got 9 more chapters and an epilogue to go. In this tempo I'll be finished somewhere mid-2008.

Not to mention another Futurama fan fic I've started on.. Still, you win!  big grin


"Finding your true love is like winning the lottery, it always happens to someone else."
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #95 on: 10-23-2006 11:27 »
« Last Edit on: 10-23-2006 11:27 »

REPLY ALERT
Episode 1.I like the idea of Calculon geting his ears back and Leela staying deaf.It gives lots of oportunities,like a new captain,a reason for Leela to hate Bender,not all day long Fry/Leela shippiness and lots of other things.I'm glad you didn't forget about Robot Devil headnaping Nixon.I can really emagine all this happening in the show.Angela's a great new character.
Episode 2.Fry because of his stupidness becoming the owner of a sports team and after that winning a lot of money is kinda like becoming the Emperor of Trisol .I think Amy really would go to the cops.But finding a friend after a 1000+something years is too much.Espessially because  he already found Michelle.Moon disease heh.Although he even found his dog so why shouldn't he find a nother person he knew?And in the end he still had 10000 dollars[victory dance]
Episode 3.Well I cant say anything about this one.I have to read it again.But I remember That Lucy Moon becomes the doctor of Planet Express.I guess the guy who wanted to work only three months was the same guy who sold Zoidberg Miracle Cream in Less Than Hero?
Episode 4.I like the bit where all knowing Fry tells whats a Dyson sphere.Although there's nothing strange if there was one in Star Trek.Now thats edutainment.Thats the greatest line I ever heard.But I don't like the Fry-and-Leela-go-on-date-Fry-mis-date thing.You did the professor's explanation about the canon great.Short and simple.But  lots of radar wessels is too much.Getting attacked by space pirots.Thats just the thing that could happen to such losers.There lucky Kif still isn't fired.
Episode 5.A flashback episode where Leela's writing with flashbacks about what she's writing.Thats weird.But I like it.Michelle Hennessey.Where did you hear HENNESSEY?Or you made it up?Lucinda Moon heh.Who cured her?So Leela knew about Fry when he was still frozen.Mr Disney won't be with us after all.
Episode 6:Well that was short and disturbing.Angela killed 'The Mighty One','Zink Sausier'(Bender's titol from 30%Iron Cook),a starship captain,a professor from The Mars University+inventor,a bireucrat,one of The Marsian Wongs,and a defrostey doctor.
Xanfor

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #96 on: 10-24-2006 06:26 »

 
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Originally posted by Writer unit32:
Michelle Hennessey.Where did you hear HENNESSEY?Or you made it up?

An 'Eight Simple Rules' reference, perhaps?

PCC Fred

Space Pope
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« Reply #97 on: 10-25-2006 06:27 »

Got it in one, Xanfor.  I was originally thinking of Rodriguez, but a)it's Bender's surname, and b)isn't the chick that plays Ana-Lucia on Lost called Michelle Rodriguez?  (Actually that's probably where I got the name in the first place.)

 
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But finding a friend after a 1000+something years is too much.Espessially because he already found Michelle.

Funny you should mention that.  I wasn't until I'd written Part 2 and sent it for beta reading that I realised the idea'd already been used in the show.  It just goes to show what a "memorable" episode The Cryonic Woman is.

Speaking of "memorable":

 
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Episode 3.Well I cant say anything about this one.

Hmmm...

 
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I guess the guy who wanted to work only three months was the same guy who sold Zoidberg Miracle Cream in Less Than Hero?

[BBC] And then he was gone!  With hundreds of thousands of our pounds! [/BBC]

 
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I like the bit where all knowing Fry tells whats a Dyson sphere.Although there's nothing strange if there was one in Star Trek.

There was, in a TNG 6th season episode called "Relics".

 
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Lucinda Moon heh.Who cured her?

Good question.  Wait and see...

@Ralph: Janeway is everything Kirk looks for in a woman - female and living.
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #98 on: 10-25-2006 07:07 »
« Last Edit on: 10-26-2006 00:00 »

 
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Originally posted by PCC Fred:
  Wait and see...

I'm sick of waiting,I wanna see!But actually no need to rush.

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after four days:
OK now you need to hurry up!
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #99 on: 11-11-2006 13:03 »

 
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Originally posted by PCC Fred:
"Door's broke."

Lucy watched Scruffy continue to struggle with the mechanism.  "Maybe there's a penny stuck in there," she suggested helpfully.

Scruffy turned his head to look at her, a frown on his face.  "Why a penny?"

Lucy shrugged.  "I don't know."

Scruffy's frown deepened.  "You stick a penny in there?" he said accusingly, indicating the mechanism with his screwdriver.

Lucy began to worry.  Why did this guy think she'd deliberately jammed the door?  "I'm just making small talk!" she said defensively.

Scruffy pointed the screwdriver directly at Lucy.  "Scruffy finds a penny in there, he's taking you down."
That's a reference to the first episode of Scrubs!You only have to change Lucy to JD(both doctors) and scruffy to theyre janitor and make scruffy talk like anormal human being(though it's righter like this) and BAM!JD's second day in the hospital.
No offence,it's still my fav.
Ralph Snart

Agent Provocateur
Near Death Star Inhabitant
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« Reply #100 on: 11-16-2006 05:17 »

Hey Fred:

I got your e-mail.  you didn't acknowledge my response, so here's my note letting you know it was received.
Writer unit32

Professor
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« Reply #101 on: 11-16-2006 05:25 »

Wait!Even more...Lucy Moon's really like Elliot Rid from Scrubs!Both doctors,both blonde,both...Errr,I ran out...
Still my fav.
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