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TriggerHappyJim
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You, my friend, draw kingly pictures! Your scanning, however, could do with a little work. Especially the colouring. But hey! Practice makes perfect.
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Marcus
Starship Captain
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« Reply #408 on: 09-08-2006 19:58 »
« Last Edit on: 09-08-2006 19:58 »
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Originally posted by Chug a Bug: Yes the shading was intentional. More to try and add something interesting than anything else. And yes you're correct it was the dodge tool. There was rather a lot of burn and dodge used in general in fact. The sky was the only gradient and yes you're correct it was one of the lens flares, I can't remember which one.
P.s. any tips on lining would be gratefully received here. Shading worked well all in all I was in love with the dodge/burn tools on photoshop for ages, only recently moved to cell shading (I think I wanted to copy SPBPetr's style, what with him being my god and all). I suppose they're not as controlled/nuanced as other methods, but they give a solid, strong effect that lets you learn the tricks and opens the door to trying other techniques if you ever feel like it. Only thing is to pick a direction the light is coming from and A) stick to it, B) be able to imagine where the shadows fall, and you're away! Lining? I'm flattered, but I never found a way to get photoshop to line without a lot of time and hassle. Paint Shop Pro 7 has a great way though (very quick, very consistent), I could share that if you're interested - as it's an older program, it's fairly easy to 'obtain', or I'd be happy to try and send you a copy. But I do know that other folk have got photoshop to line for them, so there must be tutorials out there!
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my man-wich!
Starship Captain
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« Reply #409 on: 09-08-2006 20:40 »
« Last Edit on: 09-08-2006 20:40 »
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@ triggerhappyjim- thanks, man. My scanning needs alot of work, I can't seem to get that 'real'* look...ya know? * you probably don't know what I'm talking about, but anyway...@Zed 85- Thank's for the help & comments, I'm still trying to get the expression's right...sadly . I added the little slit's, (which I could have made thicker). @SO- Don't knock your art! I think it look's cool.
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my man-wich!
Starship Captain
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« Reply #421 on: 09-13-2006 01:54 »
« Last Edit on: 09-15-2006 00:00 »
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Awesome picture, Zed! Could Someone point out any/all the error's In this picture. I tried to fix as many as I could, but the character's have to be PERFECT: edited out due to crapness PS- I haven't drawn leela's hand. What I think needs fixing: -fry's neck -Leela's stomach -fry's left eye -leela's lips -the bottom line on leela's eye (?) NITPICK AWAY!......please
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Zed 85
Space Pope
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Cheers very much for all the comments - sorry about imageshack THJ - I myself had had problems before, unfortunately I don't know how to get round them I've got another pic that I didn't show here but seems to be going down well on the KotOR forums - Juhani: Technically speaking@manwich: I think it looks very good already. This will sound strange though because I could make several suggestions about Leela but then I don't know that it wouldn't just be from my own style and experience of drawing her. Fry I personally think looks alright - but then again, I draw Leela rediculously more often than Fry. I can point out a few points - please accept them just as constructive critism. -Leela's nose - slightly larger dimensions -Leela's stomach - needs to curve inwards a fair deal more - it will begin to curve back out as well before the cut-off. -Leela's chest - I personally feel they could be slightly lower. I always feel that the base of the...um...breast, (Oh I feel so dirty!) to be just above the line of the elbow - or there or there about. -Leela's tanktop - usually exposes more of her arm pit if you know what I mean. -Ears - you seem to be missing the top line of the inner-ear. -Leela's ponytail - would curve in more with the back of her head. The top of it is correct, but otherwise you wouldn't much more of it behind Fry's head - especially not the "tail" - USUALLY. -Eyes - Fry is staring into Leela's hair while Leela seems to be taking a fancy towards Fry's neck. But anyway - it looks very promising. You're drawing the characters a hellofalot better than I was drawing when I started out.
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my man-wich!
Starship Captain
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« Reply #425 on: 09-14-2006 04:52 »
« Last Edit on: 09-15-2006 00:00 »
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here's the edited version (thanks to zed for the help) complete with my stupid signature: What I changed: -Leela's Nose- I made it slightly bigger. (Zed) -Leela's stomach- Curved it in. (Zed) -Leela's breasts- Lowered. (Zed) -Leela's tanktop- I removed the tanktop that was over the side of her breast. (Zed) -Ear's- Fixed the lines (Zed) -Leela's ponytail- I brang it back behind fry's head. (Zed/Benders_fan/kit katbarfry) -Eye/s- Fixed where they were looking, and fry's left eye (Zed) -Leela's lips- I made the edge more curved. Thanks for the help, guy's! Edit: I can't get the damn hand right! and here's the version for fry1077: http://img174.imageshack.us/img174/1021/scan01lq9.jpg
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