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Fry1077
Liquid Emperor
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« Reply #367 on: 09-02-2006 03:40 »
« Last Edit on: 09-02-2006 03:40 »
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Originally posted by Zed 85: I think the only criticisms I would have would remain with the lines - not the colouring. The colouring's very good. The lines kind of look bad because: 1. I was half asleep when I did them 2. my man-wich didn't pay me for it edit: I know where you can get a free copy of Adobe Photoshop CS2 9.0 for free, i'll email it to you if you don't mind my man-wich
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Marcus
Starship Captain
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« Reply #374 on: 09-04-2006 06:59 »
« Last Edit on: 09-04-2006 06:59 »
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Cool pic - impressed by the shading No errors, but if you want to be _really_ nit-picked, the knob on the end of his antenna is a little off centre, and not a perfect circle. Also, some of the linework doesn't perfectly match up/is a little wavery - the lower chinline, the top of the dome of his head, the stalk and plate of his antenna. But these are things I'm sure you'd catch in photoshop anyway, at the lining stage, rather than anything needing any sort of re-drawing. As I say, you have to be appallingly pedantic to point these things out, but as you asked... @Zed - cheers for kind words, guy! I wanted to reply sooner, but was waiting until I had a new pic to post. That's taking too long, so thought... anyway! No, I've always left notes to self on my pics, so I can tick them off as I correct them I also often bother friends with them when they were works in progress and ask for opinions/critiques, so this was a quick way of saying what I'd already caught, do you agree with it, spot anything else etc. without having to write it all out in an email! Habit's stuck with me
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Marcus
Starship Captain
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« Reply #378 on: 09-05-2006 10:44 »
« Last Edit on: 09-05-2006 10:44 »
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Hah! An extra day was all it took! Behold! Um... OK, this turned out a little bit 'meh' - colouring and shading are not my strongest suits, and my backgrounds are always more functional than a part of the pic. So, a picture that relied heavily on lighting effects and character/background interactions was always going to be a challange! I think you can see what I was _going_ for though, and it's a nice idea. Originally posted by Spacedal11: I like it Marcus. It's like she's getting sucked into a void or something. You need to finish it and add some badass detail. I liked the void/vortex idea, and ran with it - thanks! Huge thanks also to futz, who very kindly fixed Leela for me (see page 9 of this thread)! Seriously, wouldn't have got this far if the main character hadn't been corrected, many thanks, man And a close up of Leela - she works quite well, I think, it's just the overall pic that was a bit weak in the execution.
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my man-wich!
Starship Captain
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@marcus-Great picture/s. The shading on leela is fantastic! How did you make that void? @laptopmoerder- sweet...now I'm gonna have to make one. p.s- I was true to my word.. I destroyed the 'bender's head' picture in photoshop. I'll post it when more people have commented on marcus' picture. I'm still getting use to the pen tool. If anyone has any tips, could you share them
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Marcus
Starship Captain
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« Reply #389 on: 09-07-2006 05:27 »
« Last Edit on: 09-07-2006 05:27 »
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@ man-wich: lining looks better than my early attempts Was taught by the inestimable Paul M (above! - inbox now registered, btw, check yours!) and that helped a lot. I don't know much about the pen tool on photoshop, but if you ever 'obtain' a copy of paint shop pro 7 (or ever ask me to send you it), I'd be happy to pass on the 'Knowledge' Cheers for kind words too! Spacedal's void idea (thanks again!) was done by: image-googling 'vortex'; finding an image of the mathematical grid structure; resizing and rotating it to fit; lining the horizontal bands, and working from there. Easy! I liked the pink glow, but I think purple might have been a better vortex colour, or maybe an electric blue. Thanks, all, for comments, makes it really worthwhile Heh, no plans for a follow-up (Zed!) yet; I think I need to do an Amy pic next - or something a little different, who knows. Actually, if it is Amy... do you know, it's been, what, 3 years or so since we learned she's got talking tattoos plastered across her buttocks? And in all that time, I've never worked out a way to draw them in action. For shame. ooh, ooh, never worked in the Federal Sex Bureau either... (edit: 'worked in' the FSB into a pic, I mean [obviously I've never _worked in_ the FSB... a man can dream, but... <Marcus is brought down by an Anti-Parentheses SWAT team>])
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Xanfor
DOOP Secretary
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I like the one of Leela falling down. Very nice. However, in the interest of respect for women and blah blah blah, you might want to consider moving her legs to a less suggestive... Hey, what the... Ow! Hey stop! I was just- Ow! Ow, ow! Stop! OW!
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futz
Liquid Emperor
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I knew you'd say something like that and you did. Can't a woman fall down without you reading something into it. You have a dirty mind. A dirty, dirty mind.
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Marcus
Starship Captain
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« Reply #392 on: 09-07-2006 15:36 »
« Last Edit on: 09-07-2006 15:36 »
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Originally posted by Xanfor: I like the one of Leela falling down. Very nice. However, in the interest of respect for women and blah blah blah, you might want to consider moving her legs to a less suggestive... Hey, what the... Ow! Hey stop! I was just- Ow! Ow, ow! Stop! OW!
lol! Actually, futz is right on this one: the pose was based on action/realism concerns rather that what'd-look-hottest. If I'd been moved to do Fry, he'd have got a similar pose - it'd be sexist not to draw Leela the same way! Besides, she's trying to keep all her bodyparts clear of the vortex (originally, stop herself falling into an unexpected hole by bracing herself against the sides), so I think the pose makes sense. Actually, if it had been a bloke, I think it'd have to be drawn in the nude (the guy in the pic in the nude, not me. Don't have nightmares). The suction effects of the vortex would have been... entertaining.. Well, if your humour expectations are low enough, anyway!
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Zed 85
Space Pope
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Originally posted by Marcus: Thanks, all, for comments, makes it really worthwhile Heh, no plans for a follow-up (Zed!) yet;
Dyyooooh! I think I need to do an Amy pic next - or something a little different, who knows.
Actually, if it is Amy... do you know, it's been, what, 3 years or so since we learned she's got talking tattoos plastered across her buttocks? And in all that time, I've never worked out a way to draw them in action.
For shame.
That's an interesting concept... *get's sidetracked* etc ooh, ooh, never worked in the Federal Sex Bureau either...
(edit: 'worked in' the FSB into a pic, I mean [obviously I've never _worked in_ the FSB... a man can dream, but... <Marcus is brought down by an Anti-Parentheses SWAT team>]) Working for the FSB...I think you've given me an idea for a pic, Marcus Anyway, in the meantime - I have two pics for you Fairly large so fairly warned be yee. Leela with a Lightsaber at night (Like I haven't done that before...) Fry...er...don't ask - A strange idea entered my head while watching an advert and impulsively I decided to act upon it. Look at me go; never know what crazy thing I'm going to do next!Hope you all likes
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Marcus
Starship Captain
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« Reply #395 on: 09-07-2006 18:54 »
« Last Edit on: 09-07-2006 18:54 »
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Originally posted by Zed 85: Working for the FSB...I think you've given me an idea for a pic, Marcus #..workin' 9 to 5, oh what a way to make a living, 9 to 5, it's all taking and no giving...# And 'rah, some Zed pics! Originally posted by Zed 85: Leela with a Lightsaber at night (Like I haven't done that before...) Och, bonny! I like that - the lighting effects go with the colouring/shading nicely, comes together well. I can't now get the Drawn Together scene out of my head, but other than that, great pic! Originally posted by Zed 85: A strange idea entered my head while watching an advert and impulsively I decided to act upon it. Look at me go; never know what crazy thing I'm going to do next!
Hope you all likes I'm trying to decode the advert... Otherwise, usual great pic-making skills on display here, good deal Pink Frosting Fry needs a follow up, explanitory pic, I think... <feverishly works on possibilities>
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Nasty Pasty
DOOP Secretary
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Doug, awesome new pics. Leela with the lightsaber definitely needs to be your new avatar.
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