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« on: 12-07-2005 18:15 »

This is the idea I have formulated so far. I'm not sure if I will continue to develop it or go with a different idea. I hope it doesn't make your eyes bleed.

Opening scene: Bender and Fry are on the couch watching Television while Leela is reading the paper with her morning cup of coffee.

Bender: All My Circuits is on everybody shut up!

Leela: Turn that damn thing off and come over here or I will throw my magnetic coffee cup at you! Fry, you too I need to talk to both of you.

Fry: Fine Iíll go out with you but only if we can snuggle.

Bender: Relax fleshwad she just wants us over there so she can order us to deliver a package to some dangerously remote location that we can only reach by shrinking ourselves to the size of 20th century cell phones.

Fry: Fine! Iíll go on your crazy mission but only if we can snuggle.

Leela: Not going to happen.

Fry: Good I can still watch the last five minutes of All My Circuits and then stay tuned for scenes from our next episode.

Leela: How do I stay sane working with these idiots?

Bender:  [coughs overtly] I think Hermes might have something to do with it.

Fry: Yeah, I heard he had nothing to do with putting Momís Robot Oil in your coffee. [Leela spits the coffee she just drank all over Zoidberg]

Zoidberg: Thanks for the drink Leela, too bad I canít enjoy luxuries like this every day.

Leela: HERMES!

Hermes: Wait! Are you sure you really want to do this Leela?

Professor: Good News Everyone, we are all going on a mission to deliver a broken beer bottle to the universeís oldest parking lot. Coincidentally the lot is located at the edge of the universe.  I hope you are all on good terms with each other; the trip is going to be long and excruciating.

This is all I have so far. What is the verdict?

Urban Legend
« Reply #1 on: 12-07-2005 18:32 »

i like it  smile.  The dialogue needs a little fleshing out, but its a nice start.  A mission to deliver a broken beer bottle to the universe's oldest parking lot... I love it  big grin

Urban Legend
« Reply #2 on: 12-07-2005 18:41 »

Yah I like it too.It's a nice start.

« Reply #3 on: 12-09-2005 17:37 »

Good work, I like where this is going.
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