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Bending Unit
« on: 10-23-2005 19:57 »
« Last Edit on: 08-15-2006 00:00 »

This post has been edited due to extreme embarassment

« Reply #1 on: 10-23-2005 20:13 »

I just have a question...do "good comments" include constructive criticism? In my opinion, it is a good thing, because it shows you things that other people have seen that you may not have seen yourself, but some people don't like criticism, whether it's meant to be helpful or not. I know I just joined and it's probably not my place to post this, I was just wondering. I'm sorry for the disturbance.

Bending Unit
« Reply #2 on: 10-23-2005 20:16 »
« Last Edit on: 08-15-2006 00:00 »

Flaming:Not accepted.
It's my first fic.I had the frame of a story, but didn't know how to make it good.
I'm ashamed of my self.   no no

Space Pope
« Reply #3 on: 10-23-2005 20:45 »

Is Fry gay? Listen that "good comments" thing is the funniest thing I've heard all day. If you're going to post a fic on PEEL or any fan fiction site, you will get critisim. And if you can't deal with that then you're a very sad excuse of a person. Now I am going to point somethings out that didn't seem right.

1, Fry writing in a journal? That is very out of character. Fry is a guy and he would think that writing in a journal would be a very girlie thing.

2, That thing about Bender asking 100 dollars for each second of the song, that was in character. So good job.

3, How did Bender get a firework that said "Will you marry me Leela?" And why would Leela impusively say yes? Not good.

4, "I have to go and cry", oh my god is that ever-so lame. I understand your trying to bring out the more sensative side of Fry but you're making him too homosexual.

My dear, how old are you? That you can't except critisim but expect everyone to think that your story is perfect is annoying. Don't get emotional, just take that it.
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