MIX UP fanfic TLZ

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Okay for a while now there's been an on going fan fic on TLZ called the MIX UP fanfic, it's being written by numerous members of TLZ, including XT, BIG RED, SARAH, FROGGY, RAMON 51 and reaently myself (my appoligies if I left anyone out there), now as yo probably already know TLZ is temporally off-line. So (on the advise of Nasty Pasty) this thread has been created so that we can discuss our fanfic, brainnstorm ideas, make rough notes, etc. If anyone here on PEEL wishes to contribute in any way, whether they wish to get involved in the writing of the fanfic, or if they have an idea, or maybe just some words of advice/friendly critizem then please feel free to post it here.

I'll get us started.

 

Originally posted by BIG RED:
Hopefully. I had a good idea to add to the Fan Fic we've been working on.

 

Originally posted by Btyrie:
I too have an idea I've been toying with, firstly I was thinkg of changing the way I delt with Werstrum as when I wrote it I think I may of had too much coffee.

Ans secondly I was thinking that maybe when the crew returns to planet express one goes to check on Zapp, only to find he has gotten lose, as they run to warn the others they run into him, they start to draw a gun to take him out, but as they do Zapp turns on them and shoots them, the others hear what's going on, rush in and take out Zapp, the person who's been shot is take to hospital where they then fall into a coma.

What do you think BIG RED? Good idea or Bad idea?

 

Originally posted by BIG RED:
Hmm...Not bad Btyrie. Not bad at all...My idea was different in a sense. Zapp is turned over to the cops, and is transferred to a supermax penal colony on a faraway planet. MOM, and Wernstrom feel the heat, and wisely decide to lie low so they can bide their time with their next plot. James and the other at PE think they have it good now that Zapp is locked away and MOM and Wernstrom are in hiding, but unfortunately Crime does not take a break. A serial killer caling himself "The Railroader" has resurfaced in NNY following a seven year hiatus, and he has set his sights on one of the PE crew.

This is just a preliminary brainstorm, and is subject to change...

Why not combine both ideas? After the charcter gets shot the others run in Zapp tries to shoot them, his gun jams, they beat him unconcious, the character whose been shot is taken to hospital and slips into a coma, then Zapp is put in that prison you mentioned, and then that serial killer turns up etc.

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I didn't even know you were on this site. So thats what that fan fic was about, I knida dont read fan fic. Got no ideas at the monment.
Do you know why TLZ is offline?

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I think that Gort (Graham) said something about DNS and server changes took out the site, hopefully it shouldn't be long before it's back up, Chelsea asked BIG RED if he knew what was going on and he posted saying

 

Originally posted by BIG RED:
Chelsea, other than the site not working and offline, I'm completely in the dark about what's going on. Like I said previously, I e-mailed Graham as to the status of the site but all I got was some gibberish... Might take a few days or at worst a few weeks to get the site back on track. I'm not a techie, and I have no clue as to what the future of TLZ is...God willing somebody will be able to sort this damn mess out. Until then sweat it out. It the only thing we can do...for now.

Hopefully the site will be operational soon, cause if I have to wait to long I'm gonna go crazy... I mean crazier.

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I don't know. Whoever did this, I KILL THEM!!!!

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Now, Now, violence never solves anything...

Oh what the hell...(Revs up his chainsaw)

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Right... Steering us back on topic, one off the things I was planning on doing was extending the part where Brad's ship gets shot down, and I was also planning on changing the way he delt with Werstrum, any suggestions?

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How bout Farnsworth killing Werstrum.. 

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I supose we could kill Werstrum, it would make Brad's escape a bit better if instead of just driving Wernstrum mad he just killed him.

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I got an Idea, Zapp Brannigan cloned

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Nah, we destrot HIM 

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Good News Everyone!

TLZ is back online.

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Hello dudes from TLZ. I am new here too but I think an episode about the Big Brain would be relly funny. Waht do you guyz thuink?

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Sure, We could probably write that into the fic, at the moment it's starting to go from a fan fic to a mini series. I'll sugest your idea to them and see what they think.

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Yeah. And just to say this is Sarah from TLZ but the name Sarah was taken

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Also I think maybe we/anyone should really assosiate TLZ with this site. They're two different sites and should be treated that way. Annnnndddddd I think we should post it here...I have most of it saved so if that's okay I'll post some of it.

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You should really use the button

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I thought I deleted the first one. Anyway sorry.

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I don't think you cn delete your own threads here, I think that only mods and/or adims can do that.