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wu_konguk

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« on: 12-17-2001 05:11 »

Okey I'm not usually in for self promotion but since this forum is designed for it  flirt So far I have only published one fiction at http://www.leela.com.ar  called And Then There were Two undeer the same sceen name of wu_konguk. Tewh reason I am posting this is I want to know if people like it beacuse I am thinking of either doing a sequal or doing a new fic with a Serial Experiment Lain spin to it well let me know what you think  smile
Tor

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« Reply #1 on: 12-17-2001 08:01 »

I haven't read it yet, but if it has Futurama in it, I'm shure it's great. Keep up the good work!
Kryten

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« Reply #2 on: 12-17-2001 13:42 »

I liked your first one. Keep it up.

AstroZombie

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« Reply #3 on: 12-17-2001 14:48 »

I liked your first one too. 

So keep it it up also

 smile
wu_konguk

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« Reply #4 on: 12-17-2001 15:27 »

Thanks you it is nice to hear praise  love  and I know this might sound weird but could you tell me the things you did not like about it consturctive critism only please it would help allot  big grin
DrThunder88

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« Reply #5 on: 12-17-2001 15:28 »

To quote Kryten, "It's different, I give you that. I've only read chapter one so far, though."
DrThunder88

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« Reply #6 on: 12-17-2001 15:39 »

I would criticize constructively, but every time I give an honest-to-goodness review, I get a worse and worse reputation for being mean.  I think I'll stick with giving pusillanimous kudos.  Everyone asks for a review, and every time I try to help by being honest and straightforward I take heat.

"A lot" is two words.  Heh heh.
Chump

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« Reply #7 on: 12-17-2001 16:17 »

Don't use the same phase twice in a short length of time. The thing that jumped out at me was "The young woman known as Toronga". You said it twice in about 6 lines. It was ok the first time, but the second time it was very awkward.
Good story though...

And Dr. T, everyone needs a good enemy. When something is wrong, your friends don't want to upset you, and strangers couldn't give a damn, so without enemies, you are worse off.
]PaulFSAC[

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« Reply #8 on: 12-17-2001 18:24 »

I got lost reading Chapter 1, gave up, sorry.

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FSAC is not just about my art, it's for the fans, any art or fictions will be gratefully received.  I'm not going to go on forever, so if I stop, then without support the site would stop, wish will be a great shame, since it seems to have some popularity

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wu_konguk

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« Reply #9 on: 12-18-2001 07:59 »

Thank you I now will try not to use the same senrences as I realise they can make the story abit clumsy. As for the confusion I would sort that out but my plan for the next story is already confusing to me but I will try and sort it out ta  roll eyes
nasteve

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« Reply #10 on: 12-18-2001 14:01 »

 
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Originally posted by DrThunder88:
I would criticize constructively, but every time I give an honest-to-goodness review, I get a worse and worse reputation for being mean.  I think I'll stick with giving pusillanimous kudos.  Everyone asks for a review, and every time I try to help by being honest and straightforward I take heat.

"A lot" is two words.  Heh heh.

i don't think you're mean, i appreciated everyone who read and critisised my fic, I may have defended a few of the points raised but i felt that was just. But all constructive critisism is always appreciated.

And as for your fic wu_konguk, i think i sent you a e-mail a while back sayin what i thought, but if you've forgotten it i'll sum it up for you.

it wuz good

wu_konguk

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« Reply #11 on: 12-18-2001 14:10 »

No I remember and I am grateful.
FishyJoe

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« Reply #12 on: 12-18-2001 17:46 »

 
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Originally posted by DrThunder88:
I would criticize constructively, but every time I give an honest-to-goodness review, I get a worse and worse reputation for being mean.  I think I'll stick with giving pusillanimous kudos.  Everyone asks for a review, and every time I try to help by being honest and straightforward I take heat.

If someone asks for reviews, they shouldn't get mad if you criticise them. But on the flip side, you shouldn't get mad if they take issue with your criticisms.

I don't recall anyone getting super pissed off because of your reviews, so I don't see why you'd quit now. I usually agree with you, so I say keep going and try not to be so sensitive when someone says you are mean or whatever.

VelourFog

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« Reply #13 on: 12-18-2001 18:55 »

if you want you can borrow my disclaimer siggy


"cuter than a chinchilla, and only twice as bitey" -rach
wu_konguk

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« Reply #14 on: 12-23-2001 15:30 »

After a long time thinking about it I have decided not to make any more fan fictions at least not in the forseeable future. For one thing I am very tired  sleep  and I have an idea for a full fiction. I just found using other peoples chaacters to limiting. But thanks for the comments an all   love
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