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AstroZombie

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« on: 11-15-2001 14:41 »
« Last Edit on: 11-15-2001 14:41 »

OK OK Everyone seems to be asking people what they think of their Fan Fiction and surprise, surprise I'm not going to be the exception.

First off I just want to know if anyone read them

And secondly were they any good   smile

Hmmm I suppose I better tell you which fanfics they are eh   smile

1 "Crash Course In Love" (My First Fic)

And

2 "Precious Memories" (My, uh, second fic)

They can be found on TLZ, LIC and FSAC, (I'm still waiting on Slimmy posting them on CGEF)

Note: Beware I'm a postman and as such I know where you all live, if you post a bad review   wink
nasteve

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« Reply #1 on: 11-15-2001 17:43 »

Firstly, your fics are immense, mate. They are absoloutley brilliant. I loved crash course in love to bits, its definetely one of my favoutire futurama fanfics.

And secondly:

 
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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Beware I'm a postman

That has got to be one of the least daunting threats i have ever been issued in my life  wink
Kryten

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« Reply #2 on: 11-15-2001 18:58 »

 
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Originally posted by nasteve:
Firstly, your fics are immense, mate. They are absoloutley brilliant. I loved crash course in love to bits, its definetely one of my favoutire futurama fanfics.

And secondly:

 That has got to be one of the least daunting threats i have ever been issued in my life   wink


In the US, saying you're a postal worker is like walking up to someone with an axe and screaming "THE TIME OF PURIFICATION HAS ARRIVED!"

Chump

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« Reply #3 on: 11-15-2001 19:48 »
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Unfortunately I'm not a fan of much romance in Futurama, unlike many of you. I also have a short attention span. To date, I've only read 2 full FanFics. But I've started "A Crash Course in Love" and its very well written. I'm also working on one of my own.
DrThunder88

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« Reply #4 on: 11-15-2001 20:55 »

I agree with Chump.  It's assembled very well, and I liked it until about three-quarters of the way through.  Then it seemed to become very contrived, turning to lacy (dare I say 'trashy'?) near the end.  I find drama in fanfics to be palatable.  I find romance in fanfics to be acceptable in moderation.  The unbridled (explicit) passion (sex) of your story nearly made my hair curl.  Not that there's anything wrong with that, I suppose, I guess I'm not accustomed to that kind of content in a Futurama fanfic.

I haven't started "Precious Memories" yet.  I think I'll wait until someone else reviews it.
AstroZombie

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« Reply #5 on: 11-16-2001 13:48 »

I like Trashy, the sex is better, and if you think that one was explicit wait till you read my next one,

'Leela and the Large Breasted Lesbian Women of XXX-HOTORAL 5'

Where Fry has to rescue his true love Leela and battle sex mad buxum wenches with his enourmous weapon!

 wink
AstroZombie

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« Reply #6 on: 11-16-2001 13:50 »

Only Kidding!!,  smile
AstroZombie

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« Reply #7 on: 11-16-2001 13:52 »

And BTW DrThunder

THE TIME OF PURIFICATION HAS ARRIVED!!

:: gets out his axe

 smile
DrThunder88

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« Reply #8 on: 11-16-2001 14:20 »
« Last Edit on: 11-16-2001 14:20 »

Homeland Defense agents fear no axemen.

AstroZombie

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« Reply #9 on: 11-16-2001 14:33 »

Did I say AXE I meant TAX. The IRS always get their man,  smile
Chump

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« Reply #10 on: 11-16-2001 15:31 »

Uh huh.
Sex can be good, but if you want me to be brutaly honest: It isn't funny. It has a plot and storyline and good writing, but its not funny, and Futurama is technically a comedy. It was all sentimental, and some of the only funny things were references to other episodes.
nasteve

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« Reply #11 on: 11-16-2001 16:01 »

 
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Originally posted by Chump:
Uh huh.
Sex can be good, but if you want me to be brutaly honest: It isn't funny. It has a plot and storyline and good writing, but its not funny, and Futurama is technically a comedy. It was all sentimental, and some of the only funny things were references to other episodes.

I could be wrong so don't hold me to this but I don't think it was ever intended to be a script, mate.

Just a story written by someone with both a love for writing and for the show.

AstroZombie

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« Reply #12 on: 11-17-2001 17:09 »

Your right Steve it wasn't intended to be a script.

And I know I can't do comedy, I tried and failed miserably  frown

::slopes off depressed
Allen

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« Reply #13 on: 11-18-2001 09:01 »

Astrozombie, I love your fics! They could always use work, but good just the way they are.
AstroZombie

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« Reply #14 on: 11-18-2001 14:25 »
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:: percs up a bit   smile
BumbleBeeTheta

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« Reply #15 on: 11-18-2001 19:42 »

I absolutely love both of your fics, AstroZombie.  Very sentimental AND well-written.  I appreciate both those factors in fanfics.  smile

Who is Agent Codename: Dragonfly?
[-mArc-]

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« Reply #16 on: 11-19-2001 04:35 »

 
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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
(I'm still waiting on Slimmy posting them on CGEF)

He was some busy with studying. But they are both up for voting and reading now:
crashcourse in love and precious memories

Juliet

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« Reply #17 on: 11-19-2001 10:55 »

Now why didn't I see this post earlyer?

Astrozombie I love your fics  smile Are you doing anymore?

winna

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« Reply #18 on: 11-19-2001 11:19 »

So if I can ask, what are those fanfics about?
AstroZombie

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« Reply #19 on: 11-19-2001 13:35 »
« Last Edit on: 11-19-2001 13:35 »

[Philisophical]
Human(and Mutant)kinds eternal search search for True love, and a sense of belonging, Winna.
[/Philisophical]

 wink

Yes I'm doing more Juli, when I get some of my college work out of the way, and when my wife lets me    smile

:: rubs the thumb mark on his head and puts more ice on his groin  wink

I got the strangest feeling that they'll be romance's too    wink

And if you don't like it, don't read it, simple.    smile

Course you could give them a try you might like them.    smile
Allen

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« Reply #20 on: 11-19-2001 23:19 »

You haven't written any that don't feature romance yet anyhow. Not that it's a bad thing
AstroZombie

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« Reply #21 on: 11-20-2001 13:37 »

Wow Allen your quick!  wink,

Yeah, I think I'm what you call a LFR...FRL, no LRF, RFL, ah screw it, I want Fry and Leela to get together.

 smile
Allen

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« Reply #22 on: 11-20-2001 14:01 »

You said it correct the first time. LFR smile
AstroZombie

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« Reply #23 on: 11-20-2001 14:07 »

I know, I was trying comedy again, and... and ... and I failed, ooooooooh god! The shame of it!

:: Runs off Sobbing

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Allen

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« Reply #24 on: 11-20-2001 14:11 »

Hey, don't feel bad, I've tried comedy too and no one's told me they picked up on the jokes. My favorite was in TDTFSiD.
AstroZombie

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« Reply #25 on: 11-20-2001 14:16 »

:: stops short of leaping off the stool and takes the noose off his neck.

You did? cool, I'll go check later.  smile
Allen

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« Reply #26 on: 11-20-2001 14:30 »

ROTFL! That WAS funny Astrozombie!
nasteve

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« Reply #27 on: 11-20-2001 15:05 »


 
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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
:: stops short of leaping off the stool and takes the noose off his neck.

Seriously man, i'm worried about you. Please give the heavy metal a rest and try some Travis  smile for the love of god please!
but try and avoid 'The Man Who' it can be a bit depressing, 'Good Feeling' and 'The Invisible Band' are safe bets though  smile
Allen

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« Reply #28 on: 11-20-2001 16:30 »

PEEL: A Community that cares about its members smile
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« Reply #29 on: 11-20-2001 17:05 »

 
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Originally posted by [-mArc-]:
 He was some busy with studying. But they are both up for voting and reading now:
crashcourse in love and precious memories


I seem to remember telling Slimmy some time ago, that he could post Destiny's Child on CGEF as well.  Anyhoo, I've another couple of fics in the planning, so the scan-art king hasn't given up scan-fiction yet.

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Allen

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« Reply #30 on: 11-20-2001 17:36 »

That's cool Paul.
Juliet

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« Reply #31 on: 11-20-2001 22:04 »

 
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Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Wow Allen your quick!   wink,

Yeah, I think I'm what you call a LFR...FRL, no LRF, RFL, ah screw it, I want Fry and Leela to get together.

  smile

You also did Amy and Kif Romance on your first fiction too  smile


nasteve

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« Reply #32 on: 11-21-2001 13:35 »

 
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Originally posted by Allen:
PEEL: A Community that cares about its members  smile

I don't know why i should, the bastard threatened to kill me  smile

AstroZombie

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« Reply #33 on: 11-21-2001 13:47 »
« Last Edit on: 11-21-2001 13:47 »

Don't worry about it Steve, your way down the list.

After my boss, the government, the Taliban,....

:: Drones on for hours on end

...the tooth fairy- tight fisted bastard, Pacman, and the bloke from the Remington razors add.
Allen

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« Reply #34 on: 11-21-2001 16:07 »

Your boss must be terrible to be first smile
AstroZombie

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« Reply #35 on: 11-21-2001 16:51 »

Yeah, he like tells me what to do, and stuff, can you believe that, the nerve of the guy.

 smile
Allen

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« Reply #36 on: 11-22-2001 10:23 »

Oh your god! How terrible! Wait doesn't that disqualify you from working at almost any job if you hate bosses?
rach_the_tall

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« Reply #37 on: 11-23-2001 03:29 »

AstroZombie: Your fics are really quite good. They could do with a little grammar check but that's about it  smile
AstroZombie

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« Reply #38 on: 11-23-2001 14:46 »

Bah, I run a spelling and grammer check, in Word, so blame Microsoft, I also use British spelling.

 smile
   
rach_the_tall

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« Reply #39 on: 11-24-2001 08:26 »

Yeah, the spelling is fine, and microsoft certainly isn't perfect  smile
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