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Allen

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« on: 11-10-2001 11:59 »
« Last Edit on: 11-10-2001 11:59 »

Okay people, last time I started a thread I was shoved off the fanfic board with only 1 reply. Now I'm not trying to toot my own horn, I'm just trying to find who likes them. If you need a list:
1.The Day the Future Stood in Doubt.
2.The Impressionable Mind 1 & 2
3.His Destiny
4.The Frylight Zone- coauthored with Kryten (At the Leela Zone exclusively)
Construtive critism is appreciated. If my fics suck, tell me why. If my fics are great, tell me why. If I could improve, tell me how.

If you need help on finding them, ask.

I'm doing this because I hope to make writing my career and I have to know what people think. Here's hoping I get some responses.

P.S. Kryten and I have taken a break from The Frylight Zone, but worry not. We have every intention of finishing it


The end of a story is only the beginning.
DrThunder88

DOOP Secretary
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« Reply #1 on: 11-10-2001 12:13 »

Where are they?
Allen

Professor
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« Reply #2 on: 11-10-2001 12:22 »

Okay, you can find them at www.leela.com.ar  and www.fanfiction.net  under the cartoon category. TLZ has most of my fics and FF.net has his destiny. You can also find them at www.futuramalove.com.ar  Personally I'd go to the first mentioned two. LiC doesn't have the complete version of Impressionable 2
[-mArc-]

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« Reply #3 on: 11-10-2001 12:36 »

if you send them to andie or me for CGEF, you might reach some bigger audience

(sorry, i myself haven't read any fanfic at all yet, so i cant judge their qualities)
Allen

Professor
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« Reply #4 on: 11-10-2001 12:41 »

That's okay, I might do that. So you run CGEF? Cool. You learn something new everyday. Thanks
[-mArc-], for the suggestion.
Venus

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« Reply #5 on: 11-10-2001 15:25 »

The Day The Future Stood In Doubt was pretty good, but what was the deal with Leefry? First off, how do you pronounce it? I mean 
LeeFry?


The last time i tried to kill myself was about an hour ago. I jumped off this really tall building. But i ended up doing a triple backflip and landing on my feet. No one saw it of course, except for two little kittens and one kitten turned to the other and said "See? That's how you do that."
AstroZombie

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« Reply #6 on: 11-10-2001 16:48 »

I like your stuff Allen, they got me to start doing my own, (Quick Plug - Mine are under 'Andy' on TLZ and LIC and under 'AstroZombie' in FSAC)

When's the next part of The Frylight Zone coming out?

And how DO you pronunce Leefry?
nasteve

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« Reply #7 on: 11-10-2001 20:22 »

i have to admit, the only fics of yours that i have read are 'THe impressionable mind' ones, and that was a while ago. But i absolutely loved them, i thought they were brilliantly done and had some nice ideas in them.
I'm too tired to do anything but sleep right now but i'm gonna read your other stuff tomorow and get back to you!
btw, with any luck, the first part of my new fic should be arriving at FSAC shortly so I hope some of you get a chance to read it (i wanna make a career out of writing too!)
Allen

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« Reply #8 on: 11-11-2001 14:21 »

For those that asked: First off Leefry sounds just like it's spelt. Lee fry. First part of Leela + fry. Second some of you may wonder why the weird name. Two reasons:

1. I wanted to be creative and think of a name totally unique.
2. It just sounded good.

I'm pleased with the responses thus far smile BTW, I'm going to start again with TFZ as soon as I finish The Groening Journals. This is my version of why no matter what happens, Fox manages to show an ep. of the Simpsons and are trying to play down Futurama's existence. It should be good (that's in my opinion) 
nasteve

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« Reply #9 on: 11-13-2001 17:30 »

I just finished 'His Destiny'
I thought it was a really good fic, short 'n' sweet.
I'm looking forward to your other fics, i'm just gonna go and read 'The day the future stood in doubt' and will get back to you   smile
Allen

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« Reply #10 on: 11-19-2001 08:47 »

Thanks. Are more replies to come?  smile
AstroZombie

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« Reply #11 on: 11-19-2001 13:58 »

Sure, heres one now,

See  wink


nasteve

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« Reply #12 on: 11-19-2001 13:58 »

if thats a question to me, then yes  smile maybe later tonight
Allen

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« Reply #13 on: 11-19-2001 19:17 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by AstroZombie:
Sure, heres one now,

See   wink

Cute Astrozombie wink Real cute



The end of a story is only the beginning.
Allen

Professor
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« Reply #14 on: 11-19-2001 19:24 »

 
Quote
Originally posted by nasteve:
if thats a question to me, then yes   smile maybe later tonight
You and Dr. Thunder 88, the two people who seemed to promise reviews. Having seen DrThunder88's reviews, I brace myself smile

nasteve

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« Reply #15 on: 11-19-2001 20:23 »

If I promised then i'll deliver, my word is like, my bond.  smile
Here we go:

I had some trouble getting into your fic, (my fault, not yours, i take several attempts to get into a story if it looks long. I'm ashamed of myself for it) but once I'd gotten past the start i really started to enjoy it. The way you write it is just so easy to read, once i got into it i found it hard to stop, (I'm writing this review at 1.15am in my country so i think thats testimony!) and the ideas in it were lots of fun too, (i liked how u managed to get Leela holding Fry at gunpoint)
I did have a few gripes though, not big ones, and not to do with the actual writing but rather with the some of the ideas in the story. For example, i thought it was rather convenient that Fry was able to get these supernatural powers just when he needed them and the explanation for it was pretty basic and dismissive too, it probably would have been better for him to have actually thought or fought his way out rather than just flying out the window. This aspect of convenience is something i've been guilty of myself on a few occasions though so i hate to critise but, there you go.

Other than that of course i thought the whole thing was very well written and lots of fun to read, i hope you write some more!  smile
Allen

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« Reply #16 on: 11-19-2001 22:04 »

Actually, I would have found it hard to explaain it in more techinal terms. I assume you're speaking of The Day the Future Stood in Doubt. I thought the fact that the powers were temporary and could only be used in certain conditions was unique. I found it convenient also, but it at least had a logical reason. I mean it is unlikely, but who knows? I'll take the criticism into consideration when and if I make a sequel smile Thanks for the late night review. It means a lot.
AstroZombie

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« Reply #17 on: 11-20-2001 14:02 »

Cripes Steve! Your were up late, I got up 3hours 15 minutes later  frown  (Damn you people wanting your mail early, just wait till i finish my Computing Diploma, and unleash the Leela virus, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA)

BTW Allen I had a similar view of TDTFSID, its a first class fic though, but I prefer the IM series and TFZ, I loved His Destiny.  smile

I only hope that I'm as prolific as you are at writting fics.
Allen

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« Reply #18 on: 11-20-2001 14:09 »

Thanks Astrozombie. I actually thought many people would hate His Destiny. I wrote it right after seeing Time Keeps on Slipping and was kindof depressed, but it turned out to be good.
AstroZombie

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« Reply #19 on: 11-20-2001 14:20 »

I wrote CCIL after that one, I was depressed as well, I was actually kinda mad too - Hmmm now thats actually kinda scary, getting mad at what happens in a TV show  smile
AstroZombie

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« Reply #20 on: 11-20-2001 14:21 »

Better not watch Braveheart, else I might start lopping off Englishmen's heads  smile
Allen

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« Reply #21 on: 11-20-2001 14:28 »

Happens to the best of us
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